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the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in 2016 is huge. do you agree with this statement?

These 2 pie chart illustrate the differences between the money was given and the money was paid of a children’s charity in USA in the year 2016
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Television entertains, but can it also educate? Do you agree?

In argentina the tv programs are not good at all, they only shows the private life of celebrities. Although we do not have to generalize because there are really good programs on tv, like discovery. I strongly believe that the tv can educate a lot if you find the right programs.
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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

A several nations have been living the current society and they have traditions, rules and specific music. The music is a very important thing for peoples and will be discussing how is important that for life using below the paragraph.
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An increasing number of professionals such as professors, doctors, engineers, physicians are leaving their developing countries in search of better standards of living and quality of life, higher salaries, access to advanced technology and more stable political and economic conditions in developed countries.

The following reason may cause the situation to happen.
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Television entertains, but can it also educate? Do you agree?

Nowadays many people are used to watching television for entertaining, As a consequence viewers often acquire knowledge. I think that television plays an educational role too.
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It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore, physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools. What do you think?

Exercise is important throughout life for all age groups to maintain both physical and mental wellbeing. Hence, making sports activities and physical education mandatory for all able-bodied students is a good idea, because it builds their exercise habits and enhances other aspects of their lives.
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Many working people get little or no exerciseeither during the working dayorin their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem? Give reasons for you answer and include any relevant examplesfrom your own knowledge or experience

The presented three pie charts compromise the amount of Australian people’s after-graduation condition from secondary school in three different categories from 1980 to 2000 in the percentage unit. Overall, the unemployment rate in Sweden had the lowest record during this period while further education and employed rates were competing together and the latter one had the upper hand.
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It is thought that the increase in youth crime rates can be linked to an increase in violence shown in the media. Do you agree that this is the main factor causing juvenile crime and what ideas can you offer to deal with the situation?

Violent scenes in the television programmes and movies are said to be the drviving force of ever-increasing rate of teenage offences. It is not the major reason why youth crime become more prevelant in many countries.
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some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms. other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. which of these two school policies do you think is better?

It is quite evident that most schools require students to wear uniforms while coming to school. However there are some institutions around the world that do not impose restrictions on school wears. In my opinon, I believe that a school shouldn't restrict its students to wear only uniforms everyday and should be given a leniency during alternative days.
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Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However, television cannot replace the book as a learning tool, which is why children are less well‐educated today. To what extent do you agree with this statement ?

Fuel is an essential resource to our living. We use it in many ways in our day today activities. It is a fact that our earths fuel storage is getting emptied in each second. Something has to be done to stop this massive extraction.
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In cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem. What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?

Traffic congestion is increasing day by day in most of the urban and rural areas and it is becoming a deteriorating situation all over the world. There are two major reasons of increasing traffic and to cope with this there are some measures which should be followed by every member of the society.
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Some people think it is good to raise children in a city. Others argue that children should grow up in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your opinion

The majority of individuals favor the cities in order to provide better amenities for the young ones.In the first place, metropolis have first-rated health facilities and education; therefore a child could get best of both while residing in cities.besides this, in urban areas, there would be much security as compared to villages as there are watchman and city police at every nook and corner.hence less crimes related to the adolescents.
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employers should pay young people the same salary as older colleagues doing the same job.

Young and old workers doing the same job should perceive the same wage regardless of their age. i strongly disagree with this statement. i believe that older employees have more experience compared to the younger group. this lead to better result because more experienced workers know how to deal with different situation that they may have encountered in the past and know how to take decision based on previous experience. For this reason old workers can work faster and more precisely compare...
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Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets, many small local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local businesses will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Yes, I agree that the vast expansion of departmental stores cannot compete the small local shops. At certain extend these basic shops are used in case of urgent need and emergency. Most of the time these shopkeepers impose an extra amount of surcharge and margin in domestic goods.
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Human activities have had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this can not be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The flora and fauna has been diminshing since the human population is proliferating .Majority of people opine that extinction is unstoppable whilst I agree with rest of people who think some precautions can be useful for bringing a change.
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It is easy to manufacture glass bottle. do you agree with this statement?

The diagram illustrates the process by which glass bottles are manufactured to the consumers.
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Dogs are one of the most popular pets in the world, Yet many would argue that their buildup is inappropriate .Do you agree or disagree?

Dogs are the mans best friends,there is no other animal that equals the dogs loyalty and service to the humans.However,when we consider the cannie as a pet and breed it for our benifits we should do full justice to it .We need to groom them and train them and be mindful of their health and welfare.
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Nowadays some professions such as doctors, lawyers and engineers are paid much higher than ordinary workers. What do you think of this trend? Are there any jobs which you think should offer higher salaries.

The earning of professionals such as doctors,lawyers and engineers hae often been sujected to analysis stating that it is quite unfair to the other skilled workers who equally put in same amount of hard work.I find this debate bit ridiculous the so called profissional worker have put in immense efforts towards securing their professional degrees,and their jobs are more demanding requiring higher order thinking and sometimes these individulas have to sacrifice their personal leisure and simple pleasures to cater to the needs of other individuals for example a doctors is requred to be on call 24*7 be it night or day an engineer needs to brave the nature or scale the heights that no feeble hearted can do.
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Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

t is common at the present time to see people getting updates on the latest news from the internet rather than the traditional method of reading a newspaper. I would argue that electronic sources of news will gradually replace that of the newspaper.
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many animal species are becoming extinct by human activities . What are the reason and solutions to solve this issue?

it is believe that the extinction of rare animals and marine creature is contributed to human activities. This phenomenon can be causes by the deforestation and the illegal exploitation, However there are several feasible solutions is considered to tackle this problem.
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