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The crime rate has been increasing these days. Even if they are punished, they still commit the crime as soon as they get out of the prison. i think there can many any reasons for them to do crime again. In this the our government as well as society plays a major role and have a responsibility to solve this Problem.

There are many different reasons which encourage them to commit violation again one can be lack of job opportunities and community status. Most of people who have a criminal history lack sufficient trust. Finding a former criminal as a cashier, for example, is the truly scarce. Criminal background can decrease the job opportunity as employers need the workers without any criminal record. Not only this effect them financially it also affects them emotionally as some time even there family's don't accept them back which make them lonely and homeless. They are all ways suspected by their community and treat them with suspicion. All this can lead to holes and directly or indirectly influence them to commit violence. However , this can change by government intervention and change in society outlook towards these culprits. In jail, they should be educated and teach them how to tackle with the life problems and how they can overcome it.The government should prove schemes ...
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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of heath and fitness are decreasing. what do you think are the course of these problems and measures could be taken to solve them ?

Now a days weight gaining is the major issue in all over the world. People from different age suffer for this problem. This issue is more effect on international countries. Because there food is really very high in quality. All the products are rich in nutrients and fat there is not mixture of anything.
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Trends in Aerospace & signicance of the eld in future.

Aerospace as per namely it is a combination of Aircraft and Spacecraft. It is one of the most important eld helped humankind to dominate the skies and space above. As per our information Aerospace eld started by wright brother's.From 1903 to 2020 world makes to much improvements in aircrafts,rockets, satellite and missiles. This eld is very unique it has help us to go beyond earth, to explore the vast expanse that is the sapce. Currently we have more than 4800 satellites orbiting the earth and India is a country which made a remarkable contribution to the aerospace eld and space research. In next few years for the Indian space market will going to be extremely vigorously with signicant growth opportunities. As per other countries our India is also provide the higher education system in aeronautical or aerospace eld thats why in current scenario the new generation children are eager to learn about space. Now in India there are some few amount of government research or ...
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Establishing good relationships in the workplace is not important, as the primary goal of every person is to focus on work. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Establishing good relationships in the workplace is not important, as the primary goal of every person is to focus on work.
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Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarket in some countries, many small, local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples form you knowledge or experience.

The greatest political advantage of using nuclear power is the fact that it leads to a significant reduction of dependence on oil. Oil is produced in very few countries around the world and thus has created a lot of interest and competition. This is indeed true for the political crisis that seems never to end in the Middle East.
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Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.

Over the last half-century, Advertizing is became more and more popular among of big companies. Some people consider that advertizing low-quality products are bad for inhabitants. However, I think “if product is bad, who does buy it? In this essay I will explore both side of advertizing.
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With increasing use and development of new technology, many machines are now able to do the work which people used to perform . what are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

Nowadays, Using technology is became more and more popular and widely used in the last few decades. As a result, lots of work which was done by human is now performed by machine. I consider that this statement brings not only advantages but disadvantages as well.
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Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A dress-code, mainly in a corporate environment has always been a topic for debate. How to dress in a formally is something discussed regularly to dictate the work environment. Different organization have their preferences which are further discussed in the given essay.
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Many parents are unhappy with the amount of violence in video games, television programs, and other leisure activities. How harmful could this be to children? What could be done to solve this problem?

there is no scepticism the violence related with tv programs , video games and other entertainment activities can affect our children adversly. Firstly. the detail shows on news channels full of violence . they show even minute detail of crime how it has hapened.as a result , it create a fear in children minds and sometimes become a cause of life time phobia. secondly, by playing vidoe games they cannot understand difference between real and virtual world. To elaborate, they get so many chances of life in games but not possible in a real world. for instance, crossing red life and accident with othr car are normal in games hoewever, it can be life talking in reality on roads..
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about company policy for not giving work from home

Now a days,I am seeing many memes are shared by people in social media. Scolding their company or posting some kind of jokes for not giving work from home. From my concern whose people need to think how they get job in that company what all obstacles thay have faced how many interview they have failed before getting offer here, how much they have struggled and finally they need to think about how happy that moment while receiving offer letter. I believe no one in this world accepted offer letter without liking so you need to be grateful whatever you having currently. As per company perspective no company wants their employee to suffer with disease and there are many serviced based companies depending on their client so suddenly without client approval they can't do anything people before posting anything in social media need to think about all this. #wewillsupportourcompany #Covid19 (our small life is someone's big dream)
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Some people believe that money is the most important factor for achieving happiness. However, others believe that happiness has nothing to do with money. Do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion and examples.

Defination of happiness is a very subjective topic. Although many feel that the happiness quotient of an individual is related to its financial status, I do not comply with this statement because according me, human being is a social animal and they need fellow humans to experience this feeling.
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Some people think history has nothing or little to tell us, but others think that studying the past history can help us better understand the present. Please discuss the two views and give your opinion

Some folks deem that learning history will assist us to know more regarding present time, however some socialists opine exactly opposite of this notion. I ,will also go with opposite perspective, which is described in further paragraphs.
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Tobacco should be treated as illegal like other drugs. Smoking has not a single positive issue but lots of negative effects and therefore, it should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.

To extent, tobacco should be treated as illegal like other drugs and smoking has not even single positive effects I completely agree with these statements. Why should I agree with this statement i mentioned below with detail.
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All over the world, the rich are becoming richer and the poor are becoming poorer. What problems does this cause? How can we overcome the problems of poverty?

These days the people who live in the world is being divided the 2 types that is the rich and the poor from diverse problems. Maybe this condition affected to create inequality distribution of poverty.
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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest of our lives, while others believe that adult life brings more happiness. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Society believes that adult is happier than the teenager.However, I assure that teens get more happiness in this activity.
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You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there. Ask them for help finding accommodation. Tell them, where you would like to live. Tell them the type of place you are looking for, etc.

Dear Maria and Marco,
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Some people think that to be successful you need to get in a university education whereas others say it is not true. Discuss both ideas and give your opinion.

Nowadays, Education is the most important part of human life. Some people believe that it is very important to get university education in order to be successful but others think it is not necessary. I will discuss both ideas in further paragraphs and also give my opinion in the end of the essay.
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Walking is known to be beneficial for health and yet fewer and fewer people are walking these days. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to tackle this problem?

Walking is great exercise and truly it is very benifical for health.Walking in morning time increase stamina power and It is highly recommended to walk to boost immunie system of the body.Many medical person beliefs walking can release stess of our daily life.
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Modern cultures around the world have become similar as compared to the past. What are the main reasons for it? Is it a positive or negative development?

Every day areas of the world become similar.since compared to years back western culture become same around the world.the main reason of this trend is globalisation.in my point of view is positive development.
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Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people say trees should be planted in the vacant area of cities and towns .while other believe housing facilities should be built instead. Do agree or disagree?

Although many people believe that green plants should be planted in cities and towns while others think about the building of new houses is necessary for humans. In this essay I will discuss about both the views and put my opinion at the end.
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