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Some people think that schools have to be more entertaining, while others think that their solo purpose is to educate. Which do you agree with?

Education plays vital role in a person’s development. Some people argue that education should be limited to subjective knowledge while other think that student should learn with entertainment. However, I opine that learning with fun is better option.
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Some people think it is better for children to grown up in the city, while others think that life in the countryside is more suitable for them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both places?

In this essay author’s argue that, children who are grow up in metropolitan cities have more opportunities in carrier growth; furthermore, they can develop ideas and giving an opinion more rationally.Urban areas are growing rapid pace in all over the world, therefore it’s a very wise decision for parents to a raise a child in a city. In this essay, I firmly agree with the author.
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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the samepark today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Below is the Grange Park, a public park which was firstly open in 1920 and encountered many changes. From two plans we can see some transformations from 1920 to today, although two entrances remain unchanged.
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People are using a lot of online language translation apps. Are there more advantages than disadvantages to such services?

The chart illustrates the surveyors’ outcome about their coffee and tea drinking and buying habits in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart cities in Australia.
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ThechartsbelowshowthepercentagesoffilmsshowninUKandAustralia in2001aswellasthenumberofcinemaadmissionsfrom1976to2006. Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.

The bar charts illustrates the information on the origin of movies which were screened on Australia and United Kimdom in 2001 while line graph makes comparison of the number cinema admissions in 1976 and 2006 .
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With an increasing number of people eating fast food, which if eating too regularly can cause health issues, some people think that the only solution is to ban it completely. To what extent do you agree?

Fast food is one of the facilitated foods ever made by humans.To relieve or abate its eradication is not a candid solution. The reasons in contrast to its ban are explained due to following reasons
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People in the current generation are not fit and active, and it will cause health problems in the future. What could be the reasons and suggest solutions for this issue?

Nowadays, people follow hectic schedule, which makes them lazy and inactive and this will cause many health implications for them in the future. While Unhealthy lifestyle and eating habits are primary reasons of this, regular exercise can help a individual to be healthy. This essay will discuss both of them.
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the degree granted in four different major at the National University in three decades is different a lot. Do you agree with this statement?

The given pie charts illustrate a comparision of the degrees granted in four different majors at the National University in three decades, starting from 1990. Overall, it can be clearly observed that the Computer Science degrees had a upward trend, while there was a significant decrease of students granted from the Business during the provided time. In 1990, the Computer Science and Business field reached the highest rate of graduate students with 30% for each. At the same time, the proport...
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Many things that used to be done in home by hands are now being done by machines . Does it bring more advantages or disadvantages ?

To begin with, technological advancement are accelerating at greater speed than we have ever imagined. As a result, it has helped to improve businesses, economy and educational sectors and has opened doors to many opportunities. Furthermore, health sectors has also bloomed.
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the money was given and the money was paid of a children's charity in USA in the year 2016 have many difference. do you agree with this statement

The rendered pie chart depicted the purpose of using and origins of amount of money owned by a children charity in the United State in 2016
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The traditional life style of local people in developing countries is attracting and increasing the number of tourists to the countries which has the effect of preventing local people changing to modern ways. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The given pie chart provides details of the percentage of Coca-Cola's sales for 5 different countries: namely, North America, Africa, and the Middle East, Asia, Europe, and Latin America in 2000. The line chart gives information about the number of share prices for Coca-Cola between 1996 and 2001. Overall, it can be seen that Coca-Cola was the most popular in North America, and Coca-Cola's share prices had an upward trend.
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one of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. "Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

It is true that the average lifespan of a person is increasing because of the advancement made in medical fields. In my opinion, this is a positive development. Long life does not mean that older people will live healthy. Elderly people can advice to the younger generation and help economically to the government. It has some disadvantages such as more burden on government and resource usages, however these issues can be ignored.
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Since most information about culture and history can be found on the internet, museums are not needed anymore. To what extent do you agree?

We live in an age when many people have an internet and easily can find any information about history or culture without going to museum. However physically people cannot enjoy it’s aesthetics from their phone or laptop. This essay will disagree with this statement.
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Some children start school at 7 while others start school at 4. Does starting school at a young age have more advantages than disadvantages?

School plays an essential role in everyone's life because we learn everything from there and get successful. It depends on the family that when they want their children be at the school because some children go to school at 4 and some of them at 7. In this eassy, i am going to discuss the pros and cons of it.
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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case ? Do you think this a positive or negative situation ?

It is often believed by many people that having a own building is a blessing than staying in a rented flat. In fact, people from old generations always insist on possessing a home, even if it makes them go through the pain of things like mortgages, loans etc. In my opionion, if you have a continous running source of income and enough fund balance to continue and support your family life, then I would definetly vouch for getting a house, else it is big no.
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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case ? Do you think this a positive or negative situation ?

It is often believed by many people that having a own house is a blessing than staying in a rented flat.In fact,people from old generations always insist on possessing a home ,even if it makes them go through the pain of things like mortages ,loans etc.In my opionion,if you have good continous running source of income and enough fund balance to continue and support your family life ,then I would definetly vouch for getting a house ,else it is big no.
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Some people believe that sport has an important role in society. Others, however, feel that it is nothing more than a leisure activity for some people.

Nowadays there has been positive effects that sport has gained inhabitants of society.Whereas, some people argue that the sport is not essential part of our life it needs for leisure activities.    first of all, it is undeniable facts that there are some reasons why sport is vital in society. One of the reasons is that people can be healthier more than ever before. For this reason the doctors are always recommending to people occupied with various types of sports like running, walking, hiking. Another reason is more injured inhabitants more problem for government to cure them so government do not need waste money for injured residents in the free hospital.  Obesit, heart attack, today has been decreased significantly through the world because of sport. These days young generations often tend to sedentary activities such as playing computer games instead of this parent encourage their children to do sport the children can improve their social interaction with peers. ...
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Nowadays, more people are choosing to socialize online rather than face to face. Is this a positive or negative development?

These days, people prefer to spend their spare time in online in spite of going out and
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the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in 2016 is huge. do you agree with this statement?

These 2 pie chart illustrate the differences between the money was given and the money was paid of a children’s charity in USA in the year 2016
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Television entertains, but can it also educate? Do you agree?

In argentina the tv programs are not good at all, they only shows the private life of celebrities. Although we do not have to generalize because there are really good programs on tv, like discovery. I strongly believe that the tv can educate a lot if you find the right programs.
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