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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, parents and schools have an important place on offsprings education. In my opinion, this is the role of both of them to help children to be a good citizen. In this essay, I will discuss both parts of this topic and give several reasons to support my point-view.
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More and more people are moving away from an agricultureral background to relocate to cities in order to look for work.what will be the consequences of this? What solutions can you offer.

In this contemporary era most of the people are fascinated about doing 8to 5 jobs while staying inside the air conditioned rooms rather than farming. This trend has been negatively affected to the prosperity and the independency in a country. Through this essay I intended to outline the problems and solutions to aforesaid phenomenon.
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Many old buildings protected by law are part of a nation’s history. Some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by new ones. How important is it to maintain old buildings? Should history stand in the way of progress?

It is often said that, culture heritage and artistic freedom are the essential parts of any country across the world. From my point of view, ancient structures describe the history and approach of people and their ancestor’s so they should be preserved by the state at any cost. According to some people these should be demolish and new skyscrapers shall be built instead of them, which is socially unacceptable in a vibrant society. In this essay the importance of maintaining the old structures and its protection by court of law shall be discuss. To begin with, historical buildings and monuments are the representation of a nation so they should legitimately secure by law agencies. Likewise, proper maintenance of ancient buildings is also mandatory, as it promotes the tourism industry which is the main backbone for strengthen the economy of country. For instance, Mohatta Palace a landmark which is located in Karachi describes the history of Mohattas who belong to Maheshwari co...
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In many countries day by day rubbish(garbage) is increasing. Why is it happening? What can be done?

In most countries, accumulation of rubbish is progressively rising (accumulation and rising seem to mean the same thing. I think this needs to be rephrased). This essay will first discuss inappropriate fund management and increase in the purchase of fast food as major causes, and then suggest possible solutions to this. (I have added first and then to it to make it more coherent)
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Men do most of the high-level jobs. Should the government encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women?

Equality for both men and women is the accepted underpinning philosophy of modern society that we live in. Most constitutions maintain equal right for man and women. Most public institutions and formal organizations hold equal view in treating either sex. Despite the fact that male high officials outnumber female high officials a great margin, in most Countries there is no legal or statutory-bar against women going up in the ladder. I am against any kind of positive bias towards women in the form of reserving percentage of higher positions for women. That will only encourage anomaly and imperfection in practices and most importantly, it is not going to serve the ultimate goal of escalating women's positions in society unless they earn that by themselves rightfully.
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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while other believe that it is better to straight after school. Discuss both views and give you opinion.

Opinion are divided on whether people who have have great career ambitions should attend university or college or not. Although hopping a job directly after graduation from high school contributes to accumulation of working experience, I believe that studying at university or college will be the best start of a promising career.
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Today, the high sales of popular consumers goods reflect the power of advertising and not real need of society in which they are sold. What extent do you agree or disagree ?

In 20th century, many products have been introduced via advertising. Among all of them, not every product is useful. Products should be categorized according to its need. Community people are purchasing items for no need and no reason.
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describe about your hometown what its like Do you love your home town

Originally, I am from India. But I have been moved to Winnipeg two years back. Currently I am living near the central part of Winnipeg, "The Forks Market". Its pretty small town compared to India. Originally, I am from India. But I have been moved to Winnipeg two years back. Currenly I am living near the central part of Winnipeg, "The Forks Market". Its pretyy small town compared to India.Originally, I am from India. But I have been moved to Winnipeg two years back. Currenly I am living nea...
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Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Undoubtedly media coverage is still huge ongoing problem in celebrities life. Whereas according to many people it is all about the cost of holding reputations conversely for the rest of them it is just a overwhelming thing.
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Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Disscus this topic and give your own opinions.

Technological developments provide us to enlighten the dark side of space as time goes by together with in my opinion we will be able to meet aliens in two decades. More than 500,000 journal has been published in last 15 years ago and according to the researchs this might be a record. Therefore at the present time, we are not so far to the aliens as we were.
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People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage the people to move to regional towns?

In this era of modernization and industrialization, people preferences have changed significantly in terms of living space, livelihood and lifestyle. The number of people migrating from rural to urban areas are increasing with each passing day .But nothing comes free, as people living in urban areas suffer with alot of issues, namely traffic, accommodation and pollution. This raises the question that whether the government should play its part, and encourage people to relocate to small towns rather than overcrowding the city. In this essay I'll address this question and explain my own opinion supporting it with examples.
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Some people believe that competitive sports have a positive effect on children’s education, while others believe there is no place for such sports in schools. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.

Having intention for the sport games sould take a indispensable part in pupil’s life beacuse it has more effect than we thought. Even though according to the some lazy and sluggish parents think sport is just a time sucker, experts have the opposite idea for this matter.
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In many countries, women and men are working full-time. It is therefore logical for women and men to share household chores. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, in some nations ,male and female are working full time . While, it is logical for gentlemen and ladies to share household chores. This essay would agree in this statement in the upcoming paragraphs.
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Some people think that schools are merely turning children into good citizens and workers, rather than benefiting them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Schools and other educational places have been developing rapidly and the amount of them has increased significantly. Many people still think that to attend schools is the only way to educate society and other alternatives are usually argued. Personaly, I believe that schools cannot help a child to become an individual, but tends to encourage to be good workeds.
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Many people are doing their shopping on the internet nowadays. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of shopping online.

Internet boom has given birth to so many new industries and online shopping is one of them. People tend to buy through internet to save time and money but at the same time, online frauds are inceasing day by day. Therefore, in this essay we will discuss the pros and cons of the internet based shopping.
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Some people think that men are naturally more competitive then women. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays competitive nature is help to people to get a success in life. Some school of thoughts consider that the men are naturally more competitive then women .I will discuss both views in upcoming paragraphs.
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Some people think that the development of technology has made our life more complex, and the solution is to live a simpler life without technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Presently, with the advancements in the modern technology people are showing interest to work even on holidays. So, certain people opine that machinery plays a major role in making their lives more tedious. Indeed, the best way to counter these problems to experience their lives by completely eliminating it. I agree with these viewpoints and suggest my opinion.
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Some people think that the development of technology has made our life more complex, and the solution is to live a simpler life without technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Presently, with the advancements in the modern technology people are showing interest to work even on holidays. So, certain people opine that technology plays a major role in making their lives more tedious. Indeed, the best way to counter these problems to experience their lives by completely eliminating it. I agree with this viewpoint and suggest my opinion.
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some people believe that children should learn how to cook and prepare food in their lessons. what is your opinion about that.

Needless to say, children health is getting deteriorating owing to various factors, that is the reasons, an idea has been proposed by many that students should have the knowledge about food in regards to growing and cooking. This essay agrees to the statemnet and outlines the factors why it should be taught in schools.
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People spend a lot of money on various things as they earn more money nowadays than before. Is it a positive or negative development?

There is an opinion that nowadays as people obtain more money, they spend great portion of it on variety targets. Although there are number of benefits in this development occurring to people, I believe the drawbacks involved more.
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