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Vaccinating children against preventable diseases is not only unnecessary but also dangerous.Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree.

Vaccinating children has become increasingly unpopular among certain demographics of the society. These people claim that vaccinations are hazardous to children's health and as such are not needed. This essay will argue that why vaccinating against spreadable disease is entirely necessary despite some potential risks.
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Many people buy products that they do not really need and replace old products with new ones unnecessarily. Why do people buy things they do not really need? Do you think this is a good thing?

In today's modern era, new products are launched with a blink the eyes, either these are gadgets, clothes or kitchen items. However, many people buy these products unnecessarily even, if, they already have that products in old form. In my opinion, buying new things, which are not in need are just scrap of cash. This essay will further elaborate the reasons and negative effects of this trend and thus will form a logical conclusion.
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The technology development has affected social relationships from person to person. Do the positive aspects of this trend outweigh the negative aspects?

Today, the question of whether the proliferation of technology has an adverse or positive effect on social relationships among people has been receiving a great deal of public attention. Although the great advancement of technology, especially communication technologies, is not without its detrimental impacts on the social relationships, its benefits in engaging and conntecting people should be more considered.
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Q-It is foolish to get married before completing your studies and getting established in good job.Do you agree or disagree?

It has been a very hot topic of debate amongst people that marriage should be done after completing the studies and establishing a career. I agree that it is indeed foolish to get married before completing your studies and getting a good job. This essay will put forward my reasons to support my stance.
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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Professional teachers think that english should be taught from their childhood onwards instead of teaching them in higher classes. This essay will argue that benefits of this outweigh the drawbacks. Learning English can be useful for the employment, communication and children might get confused or miscommunicate by learning foreign slang and native one.
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Most developed countries spend a large proportion of their health budgets on expensive medical technology and procedures.This money should be spent instead on health education to keep people well. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In the most developed countries spend a large proportion of their health budgets on expensive medical technology and procedures,Instead of this money is used to spend on health education to keep people safe and healthy.
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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

School is important part of every person's life because it is a place where a person learn necessary concepts and skills but also learn to interact with other students socially, academically and emotionally. However, some people argue that boys and girls should be in teach in different schools while other oppose it. In my opinion, both should study in a same school as it help them in future to easily adjust. This essay will further illustrate the positive and negative effects and thus will form a logical conclusion.
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Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is it the case? What can be done to attract local people to visit these places?

it seems that travelers are more interested in historical places and museums than residents.there are some reasons behind this and some feasible measures can be taken to attract more people in these places. this essay will look at causes for this and propose some solutions.
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With access to the internet and social media websites, many children are exposed to a number of dangerous situations. Adults should thus limit access to the internet for their children. Do you disagree?

With the advancement in technology, Internet and social media websites have become an integral part of children and thus sometimes, they are exposed to terrible situations. Adults should monitor the usage of these sites and thus put a limit on it. I completely agree with it and will elaborate the same in the following paragraphs. Firstly, there are many people who in lieu of becoming popular upload their videos of performing some threating stunts. Many children get influenced and thus try to imitate the same, which in turn can have terrible consequences. For example they sometimes try to post their selfie by standing over a bridge, which can have fatal ramification. Thus adults should follow a prudent approach here by guiding them and inform them about its serious outcomes. Moreover, there are some terrorist organisations who use the social media platforms to manipulate the children by spreading violent content and instigate them to join their campaign. Many childr...
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one problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion.give the reasons for that and also provide the solutions.

there is no doubt that traffic congestion is the major problem faced by many large cities.This essay will discuss the reasons for increasing traffic-jam and also suggest some steps which can be taken at global level to mitigate this dilemma.
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In many countries, it is now illegal to advertise alcohol. Do you agree or disagree ?

Alcoholism is a non treatable problem,which has been facing by the world so badly these days. Some nations have legal rights and ethical values which consider alcohol and its promotion to every extent legal and acceptable by the society. However on the contrary side its is consider as illegal and to some extent non-ethical. I completely agree with the fact that it is making our society unhealthy and toxic,its promotion should be banned in every country.
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Many people believe that it is important to always tell the truth. In your opinion, is it ever acceptable to tell a lie? Explain your answer giving reasons and specific examples.

Amid busy world, which we live within, with full of camouflages and tricks many people still think that we must keep saying and talking honestly without manipulation, personlly although telling truth is completely important I would accept to tell a lie in certain situations for many reasons which will explain in this essay.
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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, parents and schools have an important place on offsprings education. In my opinion, this is the role of both of them to help children to be a good citizen. In this essay, I will discuss both parts of this topic and give several reasons to support my point-view.
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More and more people are moving away from an agricultureral background to relocate to cities in order to look for work.what will be the consequences of this? What solutions can you offer.

In this contemporary era most of the people are fascinated about doing 8to 5 jobs while staying inside the air conditioned rooms rather than farming. This trend has been negatively affected to the prosperity and the independency in a country. Through this essay I intended to outline the problems and solutions to aforesaid phenomenon.
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Many old buildings protected by law are part of a nation’s history. Some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by new ones. How important is it to maintain old buildings? Should history stand in the way of progress?

It is often said that, culture heritage and artistic freedom are the essential parts of any country across the world. From my point of view, ancient structures describe the history and approach of people and their ancestor’s so they should be preserved by the state at any cost. According to some people these should be demolish and new skyscrapers shall be built instead of them, which is socially unacceptable in a vibrant society. In this essay the importance of maintaining the old structures and its protection by court of law shall be discuss. To begin with, historical buildings and monuments are the representation of a nation so they should legitimately secure by law agencies. Likewise, proper maintenance of ancient buildings is also mandatory, as it promotes the tourism industry which is the main backbone for strengthen the economy of country. For instance, Mohatta Palace a landmark which is located in Karachi describes the history of Mohattas who belong to Maheshwari co...
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In many countries day by day rubbish(garbage) is increasing. Why is it happening? What can be done?

In most countries, accumulation of rubbish is progressively rising (accumulation and rising seem to mean the same thing. I think this needs to be rephrased). This essay will first discuss inappropriate fund management and increase in the purchase of fast food as major causes, and then suggest possible solutions to this. (I have added first and then to it to make it more coherent)
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Men do most of the high-level jobs. Should the government encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women?

Equality for both men and women is the accepted underpinning philosophy of modern society that we live in. Most constitutions maintain equal right for man and women. Most public institutions and formal organizations hold equal view in treating either sex. Despite the fact that male high officials outnumber female high officials a great margin, in most Countries there is no legal or statutory-bar against women going up in the ladder. I am against any kind of positive bias towards women in the form of reserving percentage of higher positions for women. That will only encourage anomaly and imperfection in practices and most importantly, it is not going to serve the ultimate goal of escalating women's positions in society unless they earn that by themselves rightfully.
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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while other believe that it is better to straight after school. Discuss both views and give you opinion.

Opinion are divided on whether people who have have great career ambitions should attend university or college or not. Although hopping a job directly after graduation from high school contributes to accumulation of working experience, I believe that studying at university or college will be the best start of a promising career.
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Today, the high sales of popular consumers goods reflect the power of advertising and not real need of society in which they are sold. What extent do you agree or disagree ?

In 20th century, many products have been introduced via advertising. Among all of them, not every product is useful. Products should be categorized according to its need. Community people are purchasing items for no need and no reason.
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describe about your hometown what its like Do you love your home town

Originally, I am from India. But I have been moved to Winnipeg two years back. Currently I am living near the central part of Winnipeg, "The Forks Market". Its pretty small town compared to India. Originally, I am from India. But I have been moved to Winnipeg two years back. Currenly I am living near the central part of Winnipeg, "The Forks Market". Its pretyy small town compared to India.Originally, I am from India. But I have been moved to Winnipeg two years back. Currenly I am living nea...
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