IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1688

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Create an informative Vlog (video blog), to upload on the school Facebook page, that identifies and explains how selected texts represents an inspirational person that has overcome adversity. You may look at an inspirational person studied in class or another in consultation with your teacher. Your Vlog will explain how the text influences a reader’s perception of the human experience to create different perspectives of identity, place and events that inspire or are inspirational.

In the texts of the Biography of Anne Frank and the diary of a young girl, the author shows Anne’s life challenges of social, financial, and emotional adversity through language features. First, the author uses repetition of “Jew” and connotation words such as “segregated and discriminated against,” to show a clear idea of social adversity Anne had. It suggests that Ann was unfairly treated based on her race as a Jew. Second, the author uses the adjective “enough” to describe the amount of ...

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Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this modern era, world is changing a lot as compared to the past and this is only because of the education and skills. People have a different views about the job involment. But I personally believe that education is the best way to get the high level job. In the following paragraphs, I have some strong arguments to support my view.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many individuals have the opinion that we have a wide selection of options to choose from. With the many advances that we as humans have made, a wide variety of opportunities has brought on several choices that we are now able to make from day to day activities, to travelling.. This essay will explain on my agreement with the statment.

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In many countries, traditional customs are being lost. Why do you think this is? What can parents and schools do to keep traditional customs alive?

Many countries are concerned about their heritage that is disappearing. There are several causes why traditional customs are been lost. This essay will discuss in detail the motivation behind this phenomenon and put forward several solutions for this issue.

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Some people think that there are things individuals can do to help prevent global climate change. Others believe that action by individuals is useless and irrelevant and that it is only governments and large businesses which can make a difference.

Since the industrial revolution due the high emission os carbon gas, the greenhouse effects has been increasing and it is harmful for the climate changes. Some people believe that each person as an individual should work to prevent the environmental problems. While, others believe that is the goververnment and industries responsibility. In my opinion all parts are responsable to prevent environmental issues and in this this essay I will recommend some suggestions which the governments, global companies and the individuals could to do to prevent the global warming.

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Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life. Discuss both views and give your opiniom

It is a debatable issue whether having a pleasant job is imperative in spite of earning huge sums of money or leading a greater lifestyle by getting a decent income. I, however, opine the former view.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

About two or three decades ago, children were fully controlled by their parents right from their food to career, but 20th-century kids have clear cut ideas of their future moves. Although experienced adults are there to guide them, they still want to explore more on their own with newly innovated and invented technologies. The output of this attitude contributes to society. This essay goes through a fine view of decision-making skill of children and its impact on society.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.

Nowadays, the number of people suffering from health problems related to the overconsumption fast food is constantly increasing, that is why many people argue that the government should impose a higher tax on this kind of food. Personally I agree with this opinion for the following reasons;

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Many People Believe That Social Networking Sites Have A Huge Negative Impact On Both Individuals And Society. To what extent do you agree?

In the recent years, Social Media has driven a gigantic attention towards itself at a Global Level. Social Networking is an immensely common terminology that has been used these days. The introduction of this technology has both constructive and destructive impacts on Society. This essay will discuss both aspects by sharing some references, supporting the argument.

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Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

An ongoing debate has been in the market from a long time, that pivots around whether creative activities help develop better skills in a child. Some believe that extra-curricular activities develop better competency. This essay will discuss both such aspects and provide relevant references to support the argument.

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Nowadays a few people take their family with them to abroad whenever they go for a Business trip. What are the advantages and disadvantages on them and on their family?

In salad days of millennium, peoples often attend the business meeting with their family member to various countries. While this offers a few advantages, there are also some disadvantages which are worth considering.

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Many people believe that formal “pen and paper” examinations are not the best methods of assessing educational achievement. What is your view of examinations?

These days, the best way to assess academic performance of students is to provide formal examinations. In my view, there are many effective approaches to evaluate students’ educational achievement.

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Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that money should be spent on improving living standards on earth. Do you agree or disagree?

Certainly, space research is the most important aspect for development of globe. A hefty amount of money is spent on galaxy research, whereas a section of society says that amount of money should be used by the ministry on other parameters instead. I, would agree with statement however, the ministry should plan for all the aspects.

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In conclusion, categorizing customers based on their age is an effective way to investigate their shopping habits. However, there are numbers of factors that could create the same impact on spending habits.

Wild animals are kept in zoos all over world. At present, zoos are a tourist attraction in many countries and need wild animals to attract visitors. I believe that wild creatures should not be kept in zoos and there should be alternative ways to see them.

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If people could choose between a life without working or a life spending too much time working, people would choose a life without work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In these days, whether staying jobless or working intensively has aroused people’s discussion. In my opinion, while I agree that people would choose to live without work for many benefits, I believe that others would prefer spending too much time working in their growth for equally important factors.

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People's shopping habits depends more on the age group they belong to than other factors. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In these days and age, Shopping has become one of pivotal importance for every individual. Some people relate all these factors to age difference as each person have different habit and style of buying outfits. I agree with the essay notion that ages play a vital role in making selection for shopping but there are also certain factors among them which will I further elaborate in the coming paragraphs.

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In the future, it is expected that there will be a higher proportion of older people than younger people in many countries. Is it positive or negative development?

It is true that there will be a higher proportion of older people than younger people in many countries. This is a positive development.

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Shopping is the favorite pastime for most of the young people. Why do you think is that? Do you think they should be encouraged to do some other useful activities?

Shopping has become a trend these days. Young people have been attracted more than the olders and it is their favorite hobby. While its has been argued that this practice should be restricted to some extent and the young generation needs to be motivated towards other things. I completely agree with the statement that how this habit is not fruitful for them and the methods to address it which is discussed below.

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Some studies suggest criminals have a low level of education. For this reason, the best way to reduce crime levels is to educate people in prisons so that they can get a job after they are released from prisons. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is said that criminals have a low level of education and educate them is one of the best ways to reduce crime levels. This can help them to find a job when they are free and get back to the social. From my perspective, I deem myself to agree with this statement because it is not only provided them a piece of knowledge but also the essential skills.

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Some people are of the opinion that there should be a car-free day once every month, on which no private vehicle are allowed on the road. discuss the advantages and possible disadvantages.

Many Governments and Organization believe that, must be a a day without personal vehicle allowed on the roads. A car free day should be even one day per month. However there are some people disagree for this project.

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