IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1840

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Healthcare should not be provided for free regardless of a person's income. The health of an individual is in their own hands. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

" Health is Wealth" - It is precisely said by someone that Health is the real wealth and Healthcare is one of the biggest pillars of the society. It is beleived by a fraction of people that Healthcare facilities should not be provided free to the people regardless of what they earn or contribute to the society. They should be responsible for their own health and well being. I am not in favour of this thing facilities like Healthcare should be provided by the government for free. Although, one should take care of his own health but there are some section of the society who can't afford such high maintaince health facilties.

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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests comma and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It could be agreed upon that, recruitment has become a matter of hot dispute in the societies. While some believe that companies should have access to part of personal information of job applicants, others disagree. In the following, I would like to indicate one disadvantage, and one advantage of this practice, discrimination possibility, and ease of appointment, respectively; and clarify as to why I partially concur with this phenomenon.

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Many people today are worried about y oung chi ldren using v ideo games. What problems might these games cause, for chi ldren and society as a whole? How could these problems be reduced?

As we live in over-qualified technology world, there is a great worryness among people that there is a major threat for young people and adults in terms of playing video games. Ubnormalness of their brains and becoming invisible from real world can be the most serious challenges which society and individuals may suffer and but there some straitforward solutions to alleviate their negative effects.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extend are you agree or disagree?

It is often discussed that the state is to dedicate more financial supplements to railway system rather than roads. Personally, I am completely agree that new roads tend to cause more traffic jams and air pollution that are really pressing problems. In following paragraphs all reasons will be elucidated clearly according my own standpoint.

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Some people believe that all the company decisions should be taken by the managers whereas others think it is better to include employees while making decisions. Discuss both the points and give your opinion

The idea of staff involvement in every company decisions is advocated by people because it improves the employee and employer relationship, and projects different angles on the decision table. With regards to the former, when the workers of an enterprise are asked to share their opinions and ideas before launching any new company policy, they feel valued and consider themselves as a significant contributor to the team. As a result, they raise their level of efforts and stay committed to the organization. It is also believed that when more minds are involved in decision-making, more ideas are brought into the light, which would otherwise have been overlooked.

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The use of social media is replacing face-to-to face interaction among many people in society.Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages？

Nowadays, more and more people concerned that face-to-face being instead of social media. In my opinion, I agree that social media will be accepted by many people than face-to-face.

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students leave high school without learning the way to manage their money. What are the reasons and solutions of this issue?

Nowadays, It is fact that students do not learn the method of managing the money from the instructor, and this has been a debatable issue whether they should learn that or not. Unlearned about that is attributable to several reason and there are several measures to settle the dispute.

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Due to increase use of aeroplane, air pollution is increasing more and more airports are constructed. Some people say that government should reduce air traffic by taxing it heavily. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, travelling by the air has become preferred mode of transport due to which more and more airport are constructed. Several people believe that it can be reduced by imposing heavy tax on airlines, so that it can reduce air traffic. This essay will disagree with the statement that more taxes should be imposed on flights and the reason related to this will be discussed in the following paragraph.

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Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Some people believe that parents of children who take part in primary schools should not spend money to state schools in terms of paying taxes. I disagree foundamentally with this conception

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More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries. Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Children are the future of every country. It is imperative to provide all the facilities possible to ensure that their generation has all their needs met in every sphere of life. However, there is a developing trend of overweight children in developed countries.

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Public celebrations (festivals, national day) are held in some countries. Some people think that they are very expensive and the government should spend money on some other important issues. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the number of festivals or national events being held all over the world are rapidly increasing which leads to different countries spending excessive amount of money for them to be successful however many people believe that thr government should allocate their budget to more significant causes such as education and healthcare.

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Sporting events are contributing great in maintaining peace and stability in world. Do you agree or not? Give your opinion.

It is universally acknowledged that sporting events like Olympics ,marathon and athletics always promote the peace and harmony across the globe,my opinion is sychronised with this notion .

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in many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. what is your opinion about this?

These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about building new homes on the country side. While it is possible to claim that it is important to protect the countryside, my view is that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analysing both sides of the argument.

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How to write a smart business plan? Speak about 6 essential items to include in a business plan.

It is a well-known fact that in order to start a new business, the owner of a business must write a smart business plan. I would like to talk about the essential items that are necessary for its creation. To begin with, this plan should include a description of your business. For instance, the unique and memorable name of your business, the location of the business: your home or a business premises, business objectives and funding. Moreover, market analysis is also very important. At this s...

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Some people think that they can make as much noise as they want, while others think that the amount of noise people make should be strictly controlled.

A number of people believe there should be some constraints and laws for public use of noise whereas, others argue that they should be allowed to make noise freely. Although, it is true that loud noises can disturb or harm people in some ways but the freedom to use loud music is also important for having fun or some special event. In this essay, I will discuss both the views and will also share my opinion on it.

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In many countries, teenagers are encouraged to find part-time jobs. Some think this is a good development while others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

Youngsters in many nations are advocated to work in their free time. While proponents for this notion believe that working in a young age is a good way to gain experience, opponents think free time is for playing and stress relieve. This essay agrees with the former opinion.

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In some counties it is though advisable that children begin formal education at four years old, while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight. How far do you agree with either of these views?

The age of children entering the school changes considerably depending on where they have born. In some parts of the world they start schooling at the age of four, in some others they enrol to school at seven or eight years old. Even though each culture and tradition are different and respectable, I put myself in a middle way between these two views.

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why you wish to become an English teacher (or why and how you wish to develop further as a teacher) and how you consider yourself to be personally suited to teaching English as a foreign language.

When I was a teenager, I used to hear that teaching is in my blood since my mother was a primary school teacher for thirty years, and although my father was a governor, he has been considered as a mentor among relatives and friends. By the time I started going to high school, my older sister had started to teach English at language institutes, and that was when I figured what my dream job is and started to take serious actions into having that dream come true.

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Some people believe that the best way to control accidents on city streets is to lower the speed limit but others think there are more important issues that need attention before roads can be safe. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Road safety is a serious and major issue in recent times. Some individuals state that the most effective solution is to prohibit the over-speeding of vehicles while others argue that there are other more valuable measures which need to be implemented for safer roads. This essay will discuss both the arguments in detail and provide evidence why addressing other issues is more superior.

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Libraries should focus on improving their technological resources rather than in building a larger collection of paper books. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the contemporary era, the level of the facilities in libraries are also increasing day after day. Instead of improving the collection of books. I partially agree with this statement because number of arguments are surrounded in my opinion which will be critiqued by me in subsequent paragraphs.

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