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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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The internet has transformed the way we communicate, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

The internet is an ingenious tool that is used by citizens across the world. In spite of modifying the mode of communication, it has also caused several complications, which will be discussed in this essay along with the suggestions to prevent them.

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Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid?

Although most of the celebrities are highly paid, some people feel that entertainers such as singers, actors and sportsmen pay an excessive amount of money. I tend to agree with the thought that entertainers draw large sums of money.

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in spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry

Around the world the agriculture development, the last years, was rapidly increased. However, as many countries benefit of this develop, other countries like Africa have a serious problem about hunger. This problem can be solved if all the developed countries help with many possible ways.

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Many people assume that the goal of every country should be to produce more materials and goods. To what extent do you agree or disagree that constantly increasing production is an appropriate goal?

It is often said that, the goal of every country should generate more materials and goods.I personally believe that mass production increases the availability of products for the inhabitants of the nation and enhance the revenue.

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Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Today is the time, when most of the people love to buy things and services through online shopping. No matter the list contains books, Flight tickets, groceries and any other stuff. There are many benefits of online shopping outweigh over their disadvantages which I intend to discuss and elaborate.

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Many people today are worried about "cybercrime" such as hacking and identity theft. What problems does "cybercrime" cause, and what solutions can you suggest for ordinary people and business to take?

Cybercrime is a cause of widespread concern today, as so many people use technology to store and transmit sensitive data. There are a number of problems that people suffer as a result of these crimes, but also some straightforward measures we can take to protect ourselves.

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Many people work long hours. leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

It is believed that many individuals spend much time working ;therefore, they could not have much time for recreational activities. I am of the view that demerits of this lifestyle outweigh its merits. In the following lines, both the blessings and the drawbacks will be discussed.

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Nowadays people are affected by social media and the internet. Is it a good or a bad trend in your opinion?Explain it by giving your own example.

Any website of social media allows social interaction to people. Social media is rapidly throughout the world—social media and internet impacts on people's life. Social media and the Internet keeps connected people's with their friends and family members and makes happy by sharing thoughts.

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Economic progress is one way to measure the success of one country, While some people think there are other factors. what other factors should be considers ? Within these factors, do you think anyone is more important than the others ?

In the contemporary era, success of the country can be measured by economic growth. However, some individuals beliefs that there are other factors as well that must be considered. This essay will first discuss these factors and then describe the most crucial factor among them to measure the overall success rate of the nation.

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It is generally believed that some people are born with certains talents, for instance for sports or music, and other are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musicians. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Someone who is excellent in a field of sports or music is often called genius. Some people think those geniuses are born with gifts,, while the others believe that people's success due to the education. In my opinion, the former's view is more reasonable beacuse many excellent people are perform different with other peers when they were young and the differences are really existing between individuals.

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many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. some people however that other types of progress are equally important for a country

Primary goals of many country authorities are to develop their economy. Some people have views that other types of progress should be taken into consideration of Governments as the same as economic development

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There seems to be an increasing trend towards assessing students through exams rather than through continual assessment. What are the advantages and disadvantages of exams as a form of assessment?

it is becoming increasingly popular to assess students through exams rather than continual assessment. It is obvious that exams have merits like it is one way that alleviates stress but also is an unfair form of appraisal. Generally, it seems to me that continuous evaluation does not only provide more fair estimates but also improves the overall academic performance.

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In the modern world it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via the internet and live without any face-to-face contact with others.

It is argued that, via the internet people can work, do shop and also communicate with people. It is also can help people. I am of the opinion that i totally agree with this statement due to some below reasons.

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A government has a responsibility to its citizens to ensure their safety. Therefore, some people think that the government should increase spending on defense but spend less on social benefits. What extent do you agree.

t is a never-ending debate whether a government should invest the taxed money in strengthening strengthing the armed forces to secure nation or on THE welfare of the citizens to help them to improve their quality of life. In my opinion, a healthy and happy community is the backbone of a nation; I am a staunch supporter of this statement. I shall support my stand with valid arguments in the ensuing paragraphs.

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Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel . For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating place such as offices and hospitals.

T Many years researchs have shown that various colour can have a different influence to humans action . Due to this reason , many people start to think that offices and hospitals should be colorful. I totally disagree with this idea because of this two reasons .

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Nowadays the way people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what way has technology affected the types of relationship people make ? Has this become a negative or positive development ?

Nowadays, interaction between people using technology has been receiving a great deal of public attention because of its profound influence on how each individual contact together. Although the new type of communication brings up some disadvantages, I still believe that its benefits outweigh the drawbacks.

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Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?

There is currently a contentious argument over whether the traffic and housing issues could be mitigated by changing the location of huge companies, factories and their employess from big cities to the rurual areas. In my opinion, I totally agree with this opinion because there would be less number of vehicles on the street and there are more space for housing construction.

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To solve the ever-increasing environmental hazards throughout the world, the best way is to increase the price of fuel. What is your opinion on the above assumption?

The current environmental condition of the earth is drastically increasing in a negative way and once such solution is to control this situation is to increase fuel prices. Although this can restrict the amount of CO2 levels, but it is unlikely to control pollution which is expelled by other sought of gasses. This essay will discuss the other route causes of environmental hazards and increase in fuel prices can control hazardous levels only to some extent.

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Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In this contemporary era, sports are becoming more and more popular despite their particular type. Some people opine that physical strength plays crucial role in order to win the game instead of mental ability. Whereas, other think vice versa. As per my perspective, mental strength is as significant as the physical abilityability to success in any sports. Reason for this views will be manifested in forthcoming paragraphs along with suitable examples.

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Evaluate the usefulness of Bigelow and La Gaipa's (1975) work for undestanding children's firndship

One of the most prominent exploration about children’s understanding of friendship was conducted by Brian Bigelow and John La Gaipa in the 1970’s. Children’s perception of friendship is complex, especially the younger ones. As they grow older children become more intense as well as the meaning of friendship. This essay will first outline Bigelow and La Gaipa (1975) study on understanding children’s friendship. Secondly, it will outline the approach of their study looking at the research method they used. Lastly, it will attempt to evaluate the usefulness of their work as well as providing an overview on the influence of culture to the children’s relationship of friendship. Finally, it will provide a short summary of the points made and it will attempt to conclude the usefulness of the study.

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