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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Nowadays water-borne diseases are becoming common. Give causes and solutions.

Water-borne diseases are one of the major causes of the high mortality rate all over the world. This essay will explore how faulty sewerage systems and lack of awareness are the root causes of this concern, and how through awareness campaigns, and up-gradation of the underground pipeline system by the government, this problem can be curtailed.

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People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?

People mainly get enrolled in a college or university to achieve the necessary education and degree they require to get a job or to build a career. Having a good career is one of the main reasons people spend their time in colleges or universities but there are other reasons as well. The current society and its educational structures are far different than they had been a century back when a self-educated person could gain a good career and parents could arrange private tutors to ensure their children’s education. But in today’s world colleges and universities are the authority to declare a person to have the necessary education to be ready for the job sector and without the certification from colleges and universities it is almost impossible for someone to get a good job.

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In some countries, most people prefer to rent a house rather than buying one. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of renting.

In certain parts of the world, it has become a common practice for people to rent homes and move frequently, rather than purchasing a property and settling there. Although this might seem like the most practical way of living, this nomadic lifestyle has its downsides. This essay will discuss both the positive as well as the negative sides of renting.

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Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Others believe that there are good reasons for having zoos. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Wild animals are kept in zoos all over world. At present, zoos are a tourist attraction in many countries and need wild animals to attract vistors. I beleve that wild creatures should not be kept in zoos and there should be alternative ways to see them.

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The crime rates nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime.

Owing to the technological innovations that aid in solving the crime quickly, in the recent days people are witnessing a drastic reduction in the incidence of crime compared to the past .In my opinion I agree with this view as technology helps in saving time by enabling the sharing of information about offenders and by helping to monitor crimes that are about to happen.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Along with the globalization, people are able to buy some products where ever they live. I believe this situation has more positive impacts than negative one's.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of the outweigh the disadvantage?

We are living in the age of globalisation, learning international language can bring benefits for someone. Group of people think that it is beneficent for students to start practicing a overseas tongue at elementary academy instead of junior high school. In this eassy will discuss above both statments in the following paragraphs.

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It is predicted that robots are going to become increasingly important in our lives.How could robots be used in the future? Will this development be a positive or negative development?

Although robots are already a part of our lives,technology expers anticipate that they will become even more significant.In my opinion,they will be useful such as facilitate in different areas and in household.I consider that this is a positive development.

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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is often believed that the happiest period of life is youth years. While, there are some people who feel adulthood is the best part of life. According to my opinion, every age group has its own significance.

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Most high level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 percent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. Do you agree?

It is argued that greater than fifty percent of top positions in organizations are fulfilled by men despite the majority of the workers in developed nations are female. Therefore, corporations should recruit a certain proportion of top executives from women. This essay is disagreed with the statement because recruitment should be based on qualities and this type of action will create gender inequality.

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All over the world , societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What the reasons for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled?

In recent decades, obesity has been received a great deal of media attention around the world due to its substantial impacts on human life. Various causes of this phenomenon should be identified before any actual solutions are considered to combat obesity.

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Some people believe that children should spend all of their free time with their families. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss the possible argument on both sides, and say which side you personally support.

Concerning children's free time and the space of time spending, people have different beliefs. Some people believe that children should spend their free time with the family even foster parents, but others do not have this option.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is true that some developed countries often offer financial support to countries in poverty. Although I agree that money cannot solve all the problems and other means of help should be considered, I believe funds are equally important.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is true that there is widespread acceptance among all people about ever-growing environmental challenges. However, some people think that the decreasing population of endangered animals and plants is the most important issue, while others believe that there are more devastating problems, which are needed to be addressed immediately. This essay follows the opinion that there are indeed more concerning issues, other than endangered rare breeds and reasons behind both perspectives will be provided below.

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In education and employment, some people work hard than others. Why do some people work hard? Is it always a good thing to work hard?

It is true that some people work hard while others prefer not to push themselves beyond a certain limit. There are various reasons for these different attitudes to work. In my view, passion for one’s work is a desirable quality in an employee, but too much hard work can be counter-productive and unhealthy.

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Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages.

There is a constant debate among people nowadays on where do to draw the line on social media platforms. Some believe that sharing perosnal information does not pose any serious risks and has many advantages while others argue that social media is a minefield that needs to be navigated with dexterity. Both views are valid, and in this essay I will discuss both opinions and conclude with my own .

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Some people think it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.

Nowadays, it is believed by significant number of human beings that it is good to educate boys and girls in separate Institute because they will give more concentration and interest in their studies and stay away from other activities. On the other hand, others think that boys and girls will get more benefits if they will study in mixed schools. According to me, because by this effort, there confidence will build up and they will learn more good things from their classmates.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research , business , and academic world . Other believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely

It is commonly believed that in a scientific research, business and academic world it is superior to share power . Other have a strong counter argument that some details are to crucial to be leaked. These essays will delve into both these aspects with a relevant example in support of my view.

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Some people believe money is the best gift for teenagers. While others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Gifts generally are freewill gestures which can either come in cash or kind to people. The believe of some persons is that it is best in cash for teenagers while others disagree. I am of the opinion that before these gifts are offered, some factors surrounding the teenagers should be put into consideration.

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With increasing populations and ever growing urban centers, many countries are losing their natural beauty spots. What benefits are there to protecting places of natural beauty? How can this be solved?

It is commonly observed in many countries around the world that natural beauty landscapes have been severely affected by rising populations and emerging city centers. Preserving these natural habitats not only have a positive effect on people’s mental and physical wellbeing but also strengthens countries’ economy. These natural spots can be saved by raising awareness in public and making laws to protect them.

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