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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people think that work is the most important thing of people’s life. Without the success of career, life becomes meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Work is believed to be one of the most significant things among other aspects of human life, leading to wrong perception that life becomes meaningless if success could not be obtained. From my own perspective, i just advocate some extents of the given statement.

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The government should control the Internet to reduce cyber-crime and ensure safety of users. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Internet is considered as a stepping stone of globalisation because it allows everyone to connect or share with no geographical boundations. However, many countries are mulling towards curbing of freedom over internet to reduce cyber-crimes and keep its citizens safe. In my opinion, control of internet would only expose the netizens to snooping by the government and could barely save them from cyber attacks.Hence, I do not support this idea at all and reasons for the same are explained below.

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learning computer language has become quite compulsory in primary school education. Although it gives extra burden to children, it would be helpful in future prospect. In my opinion, this has more benefits than drawbacks.

Nowadays, learning computer language has become quite compulsory in primary school education. Although it gives extra burden to children, it would be helpful in future prospect. In my opinion, this has more benefits than drawbacks.

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Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extend do you agree?

With the commencement of digital media, famous personalities and news around them goes hand in hand. Majority of people believe that, children are being affected by these celebrity coverage. I support this idea to a major extend for some reasons. This essay will argue my position with reasons and examples.

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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem.

Despite suffering the punishment, crime rates increase even more in the criminals. This essay will examine the causes of rising criminal activities, and possible solutions of this problem.

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people now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages ?

There is debate about whether the recent development in communication technology and transportation has positively or negtatively affected the work environment by allowing people the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world. I strongly believe that the advantages of this freedom outweigh the disadvantages due to multiple reasons which I will explore in the essay below.

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Some poeple argue that the government should spend money on public facilities rather than art

According to many people, public funds should be allocated for public facilities such as schools and hospitals rather than art projects. Since the investment in theatres, paintings, and sculptures are considered as unreasonable expenditure and waste of money. From my perspective, both arts and public facilities should be taken into investment account due to the equality of each position in our society.

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Eating too much sugar is harmful for our health. Some people think that it is government responsibility to limit people’s sugar consumption, while others think that it is an individual responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is true that excess of everything is bad even it is sweet like sugar. In my opinion, it is the responsibility of both government and individual to put a strict check and balance in the amount of sugar they eat in order to spend a healthy life. (48)

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Economic growth is the only way to end world poverty. However, some people say it leads to environmental damage and should be stopped. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The increase in the amount of goods and services produced per head of population over a period of time is measured in terms of economic growth. It is true that economic growth plays a vital role in eliminating the poverty of any country. Thus, I strongly agreed that the benefits of economic growth are far greater than its damages on the part of environment. (64)

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If a product is sold and people buy it, then advertising is not necessary and can be considered a kind of entertainment. Do you agree or disagree with this?

An announcement intended to inform people about a specific product, service or employment opportunity is known as advertisement. Advertisements play an important role in achieving the sales target of any product. Thus, I strongly agreed that advertisements are necessary to aware customers about the pros and cons of any product or service. (52)

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Some people argue that arts, such as paintings and music, are a waste of money and the government should spend this money other public services. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Presendaly, in many countries, art is considered as an important matter, and is subsidized by the government. However, some put the value of art under question, citing authorities should stop this help and investigate other public services instead. Nonetheless, it seems to me, arts can significantly influence societies, and therefore, artists should be supported.

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Some people believe that having access to the internet is necessary to live a full life today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the today’s world, the internet have become an essential part of everyday life. The opinion exists that the internet is a compulsory thing that people can not live without. This essay will discuss the reality of the internet that have crucial effect on our life.

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Some people think that planting trees in open spaces in cities and town is more important than building houses.To what extent do you agree or disagree

Although many people believe that free areas in urban centers should be allocated to grow more plants, I support this to a large extend for some reasons. My position is argued further with explanations.

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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, potential job seekers have to jump a lot hoops to get the right job. Some people argues that the employers do not need the personal information of people applying for jobs, while other disagree and says that it is relevant to the job requirement. I completely agrees with the former statement and job decision should be completely based on the people's experiences and skills. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the author's statement with examples.

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Some people think that secondary or high school student should be taught how to use money management as an important life skill, do you agree or disagree?

Money management is considered to be one of the most important life skills that people should possessed. Some people argued that money management skill should be taught in high school, while others show strong disapproval of such an intention. I strongly agree that schools should put financial literacy lessons in their curriculum.

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some people think that the public health is a responsibility of the government while others think that people should be responsible for their own health. discuss both sides and give your opinion

Group of people believe that citizens health is a duty of the government while, rest of individuals think that health is a personal liability. everyone should take care of himself or herself at personal level . however government also plays a pivotal role. I will discuss both the view points mentioned above and later in conclusion would accord on one and hence justify it.

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Many people think that money is the best gift to give to a teenager, but others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion including relevant examples.

It has been a debatable issue from last many decades about present to adolescents. One section of masses considers cash as a best gift whilst others do not believe in cash. This essay will discuss the both views of the notion in details and put forward opinion in subsequent paragraphs.

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Threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the dis advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often believed that nuclear deterrence is maintaining global peace and nuclear power is the source of inexpensive and clean energy. While some people argue that its positive aspects exceed its negative ones, I completely disagree with this idea and believe that nuclear technology has more drawbacks than benefits.

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are controversial beliefs on school curriculum. Certain experts believe History is a crucial item while other advocate for science and technology. In my perspective, science and technology should be considered as first priority in educational systems because of various reasons.

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many people think that technology creates significant impact in the modern word? Do you agree with this statement?

We are living in the modern world which grows dramatically each days.While, modern technology creates significant impact in our society.It has always been a controversial issue in thease days. on the other hand, people get lots of benefits for using modern technology.In my opinion, government should take responsibility for ensuring healthy people life. In the following paragraphs, I shall put forth my arguments to support my views.

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