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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Many people believe that social networking sites such as facebook have had huge negative impact on both individaly and society. To what extent do you agree?

A large cluster of people opine that public network websites such as Facebook has been influencing both personal life and society negatively. However, in my opinion, i completely agree that it is keeping people away from each other and creating violence over the religion.

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As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?

Making money has always been a primary objective of the entrepreneurs and startups, but seldom they realize their social responsibilities towards humanity. While I agree to the argument that earning money is important for any organization to stay alive in the competitive environment, there must be strong emphasis laid on the social aspects of their campaigns as well.

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As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?

Making money has always been a primary objective of the entrepreneurs and startups but seldom they realize their social responsibilies towards humanity. While I agree to the argument that earning money is important for any organization to stay alive in the competitive environment, there must be strong emphasis laid on the social aspects of their campaigns as well.

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Recently, it is common for people not to know their neighbours. What is the cause of this problem? What can be done to solve this problem?

Mostly people these days are unaware of their neighborhood, owing to the hectic work life and the lack of trust on other people. To tackle this issue, community centers can be constructed in the localities, and special occasions or festivals can be celebrated within the community, to bring people together.

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There was a time when people only shopped out of necessity, but these days shopping seems to have become a new form of leisure activity. People don't appreciate the value of money anymore. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Nowdays, the world economical growth is steadily increasing, which makes the people to consume all their basic and luxurious needs. People are not thinking to spend limited money on purchasing, when compared to past. I largely agree that the individauls are maximizing their cash flow in unneccesary items.

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In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Smoking causes more harm than it benefits people. I agree with the view that it is illegal to smoke in public areas and people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building.

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Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

These days, discipline is an ever increasing problem in contemporary schools. Discipline is extremely important so that children are well behaved, have self control and not become a failure in society. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, whilst others think that this is the role of parents. It is the aim of this essay to present the roles of both parents and teachers and also share my opinion about the argument above.

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In many countries today, people buy a range of household goods ( television, microwave, oven and rick cookers) Is it a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, a great number of electric appliances were used in household, such as television, microwave, oven and rick cookers. The impacts of it should be considerate. Personally, I think the positive effect is more than the negative effect.

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In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

Imposing a ban or a curfew always feels terrible to every individual if it restricts their freedom. Some people might be in favour of not letting teenagers alone out of their houses at night in certain areas of US due to safety reasons. But I am not in favour of keeping children inside and hampering their growth.

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The line graph traces the changes in the total emission of carbon dioxide per person in 4 different regions in the years 1967 to 2007. Data are expressed in metric tonnes.

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Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.

Education is extremely important for everyone. It plays a vital role in every lives. But sometimes it is also crucial to spend some time in extra curricular activities. It can be indoor or outdoor.

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Millions of people every year move to English-speaking countries such as Australia, Britain or America, in order to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want to study in English? Why is English such an important international language? Give reasons for your answer.

Studying in developed nations such as Australia, Britain or America provides not only knowledge but also global exposure to students. Some people move there to pursue their higher education while some people send their children to do schooling. There are numerous advantages of the same. Firstly, one becomes independent by opting a job while studying in their college or university. Secondly, it gives an edge over others while looking for a job or settling over there.

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Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines does this develoment has more advantages or disadvantaged.

I AM OF THE OPINION THAT THE USE OF MACHINES DUE TO MODERNIZATION HAS MORE BENEFITS THAN DISADVANTAGES FOR THE FOLLOWING REASONS

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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion on this?

It is indeed true that rising population in numerous areas has made it necessary to expand the housing to countryside which is still untouched. Though it is opinion of some that any such move is detrimental to countryside and should be averted. It is my opinion that until rise in population goes unchecked, concentration of it in select few cities overburdens the resources there and expanding the housing is unavoidable.

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In some countries, children under 16 years are not allowed to leave school by law and get full-time employment. Is it a good or bad idea?

In a few nations, it is legally not permitted to children underneath 16 years of age to exit from school and indulge in full-time employment. I believe this has positive implications on children.

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Some people say that television is a very useful tool when it comes to education. Others argue that television is a much overused, ineffective teacher. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion as to the usefulness of television as an educational tool. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Television has become an essential part of our life over the years from its inception. It is believed by many to be an early educator for human beings, while others think it is overhyped as a tutor. This essay will examine the role of television as an educator and how overusing it can decrease its effectiveness over time but with an agreement that it is still one of the best tools to spread knowledge around the world.

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n the past, sporting champions used to be motivated primarily by the desire to win a match or to break world records. These days they are more likely to be motivated by prize money and the opportunity to be famous. What message does this send to young people and how does this attitude to sport affect the sports themselves?

Previous world record holders and star athletes in various sports fields use to push the boundaries of human capabilities on the basis of their insurmountable ambition without substantial financial reward. Nowadays, professional athletes are considered wealthy individuals, capable of supporting lavish lifestyles. In my opinion, this change cannot be considered neither good nor bad as the truth is much more complex than a simple answer.

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Family who sent their children to private school should not be require to pay taxes that support the state education system

Private school is more favourable than state school on the belief of its better education and superior school faculty resources. It is arguably that families whose children are educated in private schools should be exempted from some portions of tax that are applied to support the public school system. While for my personal opinion I disagree with this argument.

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In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?

n most of the nations in these days, people are usually preferring in urban areas either alone and in the nuclear family rather than tend to live with joint family. In my opinion, I believe that this will be led to the negative trend among the people, because of less parental support and even lack of moral values and etiquette have seen in among the grandchildren.

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some people think that men and women have different qualities, therefore some certain works are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. do you agree or disagree

There are a variety of perspectives on the question whether or not men and women are equally good at jobs. While it is argued that some works are compatible with women and men due to their respective personality and skill sets, I am of the opinion that both genders have same capabilities.

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