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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people believe that universities should make sport a compulsory module on all degree courses as rates of obesity are getting higher and higher. To what extent do you agree?.

Now a days, obesity has become an important issue. There is an argument that sports should be declared a mandatory module in universities as rate of being over weight are increasing day by day. This essay totally agrees with the above statement because outdoor activities help students maintain a healthy lifestyle and prevents them from certain high-risk diseases.

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Internet crime is increasing rapidly as growing numbers of people purchase goods over the internet. What can be done to prevent this?

The appearance and development of the Internet network thesedays brings huge advantages to society, particularly buying goods over the internet. Along with these online shopping activities, however, the cybercrime is considered as a worth-concerning drawback and it needs tackling as soon as possible. From my own perspective, it's time to prevent and solve this problem.

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People say that reading for pleasure helps people to develop imagination and better language skills than watch TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, it has been argued by some that deriving pleasure from reading is of great benefit to people's imagination development and language upgradation than being exposed to TV. Although both sides have proved their significance to individuals, I would contend that reading is evidently a better option for most citizens.

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Some people believe government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In order to tackle the problem of traffic jam, some people suggest that national budget should be invested in building railroad of all kinds, while others argue that it is the infrastructure for vehicles that we should focus on. In my opinion, although I fully understand why people support the latter view, the former one seems more reasonable to me.

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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In our sociaty life, environment is alway the hotest issue which is the most serious problem now we have to deal with. Some peole say that individuals can do nothing to improve the environment, only governments and large companies can make a difference. But I firmly agree that both of them have to work together to improve the environment, not only governments and large companies can do that.

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University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages?

The choice of study overseas has become increasingly popular among university students nowadays. Despite the possible higher tuition cost required, it helps these undergraduates significantly widen life experiences. In my opinion, having studied abroad would be far more beneficial to students even though they may have to pay more money on courses.

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At present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively a large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Various statistics from different countries state that the population of youngster is comparatively high to the population of elderly people. Certainly there are pros and cons of having such an unparallel inhabitants in terms of age. My opinion is having a situation like this will not have much of benefits for very long years.

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People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?

It is immensely inevitable that city has been such a place for uniting due to the various number of convenient conditions, unfortunately, leading to manifold sophisticated issues directly threatening the quality of residents’ lives. To my view, I fundamentally concur with the following viewpoint that there should the government’s measures to re- orient the country’s population by fostering people having accommodation at regional area.

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In many countries more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people imported food? What could be done to encourage people to local food?

Many individuals prefer to purchase overseas food as compared to their own country food products. This essay will discuss several reasons related to this, and measures that should be adopted to persuade people to buy local produce.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that the change is always a good thing. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your knowledge or experience.

Many people spend their lives working and earning money. When you ask someone how many companies you worked in, some people will say `this is my first company that I have worked` even if they are adults. Because, some of them think change is very difficult and challenging. In contrast rest are very brave and risk taker. They do not afraid of changing anything in their lives. In my opinion, change always gives us some experience and a chance to adapt new things.

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In the opinion of some people, the internet has narrowed the gap among people in the world by increasing social interactions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Many people emigrate from their native countries nowadays. It has been a gradually increasing trend, as plenty of perspective students as well as ordinary workers leave their homelands hoping to become more successful. However, they usually have to separate from families and leave their places of residence. In this essay will be discussed the advantages and disadvantages of living and studying abroad.

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The government should allocate more funds to teaching science rather than other subjects for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree?

In school life, sport is categorized in school subjects as basic circumstance so some people think that sport is necessary for students while another group believe subjects could determine by students. Following in both of views, I agree all those views and I will give my reasons in the essay below.

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Some employers offer their employees subsidised membership of gyms and sports clubs, believing that this will make their staff healthier and thus more effective at work. Other employers see no benefit in doing so. Consider the arguments from both aspects of this possible debate, and reach a conclusion.

Nowadays sport clubs and gyms reached a top of popularity among places which could be visited by citizens after work. Frequently we may see how office workers with sport bags like ants run at streets to the gym after hard working day. Obviously this fact connected with biological need in changing activities from intellectual to physical. It is proved by scientists that exactly active kind of relaxing is the most effective and leads to a work increasing.

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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

It has been argued that choice of an individual depicts one's social background and personality. However, I completely disagree with this notion as numerous facts are out there where an individual appear to be different whereas their interest in dresses are different. Firstly, this essay will discuss that how matured people select their cloths and appear different from their original personality. Secondly, this essay will shadow light on how surrounding and social relation alter their interest.

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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

In some countries teaching English at schools is becoming more important than teaching the local language. This may lead to the demise of some languages.

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Many elderly peopleare no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

It is true that nursing homes have become a popular choice in caring elderly people. In this essay, I will analyse both upsides and downsides of this form.

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Some people think that there are things individuals can do to help prevent global climate change. Others believe that action by individuals is useless and irrelevant and that it is only governments and large businesses which can make a difference. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Climate change is a phenomenon affecting all people in all walks of life, from individual citizens to whole countries and huge multinational companies. The question of what we can do to prevent global climate change and whether individual action is effective or not is a hotly debated issue.

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It is expected in the near future that there will be a higher proportion of old people compared to younger population in some countries. Is it a positive or negative development?

Statistical data have shown that in some countries the proportion of elders will be higher than young adults in the future. Some people believe that it is a positive development while others, including me, are of the idea that this phenomenon has many negative impacts on societies and individuals as well.

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It is expected in the near future that there will be a higher proportion of old people compared to younger population in some countries. 🔸Is it a positive or negative development?

Statistics data have shown that in the near future, old people will constitute the majority of the population in some countries and there will be a lower percentage of young people compared to older population. I strongly believe that this is a negative development and it will have many detrimental effects on society and people.

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It is expected in the near future that there will be a higher proportion of old people compared to younger population in some countries. 🔸Is it a positive or negative development?

There is an anticipation that in the near future the percentage of elderly will be much more than young citizens in some countries. However, I do believe that this trend has significant impacts on countries’ economy and industry.

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