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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Q. As the world becomes technologically advanced, computers are replacing more and more jobs. Describe some job positions that may be lost because of computers, and discuss at least one problem that may result.

The rapid advancement of technology and automation has led to significant changes in the global job market. Computers and artificial intelligence are increasingly replacing human labor in various industries, making some job positions obsolete. While this trend boosts efficiency, it also raises concerns about unemployment and social inequality. This essay will discuss some jobs that are at risk of being replaced by computers and one major problem that may arise as a result.

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Buying things on the internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of this type of shopping outweigh the disadvantages?

The rise of internet-based shopping has revolutionized consumer behavior, making it possible to purchase anything from books and air tickets to groceries with just a few clicks. While this trend offers undeniable convenience and efficiency, it is not without its drawbacks. However, I firmly believe that the advantages of online shopping significantly outweigh the disadvantages, especially when considering its impact on accessibility, time management, and cost savings.

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“It is better to know a little about many subjects than to know a lot about one subject.” To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The debate about whether it is more advantageous to have a broad knowledge of many subjects or to specialize deeply in one field has persisted for years. While both approaches offer distinct benefits, I partially agree with the notion that having a little knowledge about many subjects is beneficial. However, I contend that this must be complemented by expertise in at least one domain to achieve a well-rounded and impactful life.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do yoy think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages ?

It is crucial for individuals to take risks in their career and personal life . In my opinion the benefits of taking risks over the drawbacks for some reasons , however being cautious and careful must be taken into consideration.

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Some scientists think it is very soon that computers will be more intelligent than human. Some people think it is a positive development, while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, the debate surrounding the potential for computers to surpass human intelligence has gained significant attention. While some scientists predict that this will happen soon, opinions on whether this would be a positive or negative development vary. This essay will examine both perspectives before providing my own viewpoint.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is a view stating that the increased extinction of particular species of animals and plants is the most important environmental problem of our days, while others, including me, believe that there are more serious issues.

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Some parents believe that children should help with washing-up, cleaning and other jobs in the house as soon as they are old enough to. What is your opinion?

It is widely believed that children have to take part in house chores as one of the family members. I strongly agree with that point of view, as I believe that this is a good thing, as children enjoy helping in a simple way and can learn important things from doing this. Helping with housework enhances the feeling of responsivity among children and understanding of the value of corroboration work inside the family.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, various industries, such as technology, fashion, and pharmacy, always present their products as the ultimate invention by telling the user that nothing can be compared to their cutting-edge merchandising. In addition, they spend an extraordinary amount of money to create an aggressive advertising campaign to bombard their possible buyers. On this account, many people might debate whether the action taken by the sellers is positive or negative. In this essay, I will explain why I assume this practice against the user is detrimental and share arguments to support the cause of why businesses do this.

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Some people believe that our personality comes mostly from our genes rather than from the way we are brought up. To what extent do you agree with this?

It is widely believed that our characters are based on genetic factors. However, a number of people think our personality can reflect the places where come from. I strongly agree with this point of view, as I believe there are various factors that can impact on person’s attitudes and thoughts. Such as the environment where live and the family’s background. It is clear that both our genes and our environment have a part in making us who we are, as they provide everything needed to make a person.

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People should choose their course of study not on the basis of their own interests, but based on the kinds of jobs they can get. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Studying various subjects or engaging in extracurricular activities has become a trend and has revolutionised how people can pursue their careers. It is said that academic educational programs are studied on the basis of employment demands rather than pursuing personal curiosity to achieve the business. This essay will explain both perspectives and I agree partially because it depends on individuals' requirements.

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Many people think technological devices such as smartphones, tablets and mobile phones bring more disadvantages than advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Global inhabitants have various perspectives on electronic devices. A group of them think that the drawbacks of smartphones, tablets and so forth can eclipse the benefits. I do not subscribe to this idea inasmuch as that these gadgets develop the quality of lifestyles and communication.

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Many people believe that companies behind oil and gas production promote new boundless opportunities while others fear their intrusion in nature. Discuss possible reasons, results and solution.

With the industrial development nowadays, many believe that oil and gas production is creating limitless options for our forthcoming. However, alongside its promising opportunities, some fear its effect on nature. In the further paragraphs, I am going to explore both sides and opine solutions to deal with this issue.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is often argued that the primary goal of science should be to improve the living conditions of humans. However, I completely disagree with this viewpoint and firmly believe that the preservation of the balance between human needs and the natural environment is far more important.

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Some people think success in life comes work, but others think there are more important factors. To what exted do you agree or disagree

Some individuals contend that an individual's self-effort effort is the most important thing in their life and they can feel unfilled with their life without working hard. In my opinion, I agree that working is the key to a successful life , however, individuals who defend this argument must consider that work is not the only thing that matters in real life life and there are far more significant priorities such as family and friendship.

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Some think secondary and high school students should be allowed to choose academic courses leading to university or practical courses leading to careers such as carpenters. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that learners in secondary and high school should have the opportunity to choose between academic courses and practical courses leading to jobs such as carpenters. This essay agrees completely with that statement because studying useless subjects is a waste of time and also because our society mainly needs experts.

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A growing number of people rely on restaurants and convenience food (Frozen food and packaged meals) rather than home-cooked food to supply most of their meals. What are the advantages and disadvantages of eating this way ?

In recent times, due to fast-paced life, a large number of people depend on restaurants and frozen or packed food which are available in convenience stores instead of home-cooked meals in their daily lives. This current trend has both merits and demerits, which I will explain with relevant examples in the following essay.

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More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

The extinction of wild animals has been a critical issue in recent years. Many species of them are on the verge of destruction. Human activities can cause this problem, for instance, damaging their habitats. Fortunately, there are various measures to overcome these issues as the solutions.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, people are getting used to the commercial advertisement either through online or offline sources. But not everyone who is pleased with this kind of method can bring the consumers to buy the products because some of them thought it was already outdated. Personal reviews from other buyers are also one of the reasons that can influence the market. I think advertising still has an impact in getting consumers’ attention as if it can manage creatively following the trends.

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Many people are afraid to leave their homes because of the fear of crime. Why do you think people are so fearful these days ? Do the merits of such a cautions approach outweigh the demerits?

A significant number of human beings are hesitant to venture out of their homes due to concerns about criminal activity. I believe that the media plays a crucial role in shaping public perception of crime. The advantages more than the disadvantages for being because it will increase personal safety and preparedness for dangerous situations but it will also decrease the social interaction among the public.

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Some people say the fashion industry is bad for the environment, as it encourages consumers to buy new clothes all the time. Do you agree or disagree?

A group of people believe that the fashion industry has a negative effect on the environment because it leads populations to consumerism. I Subscribe to this perspective inasmuch as producing the garments items needs ingredients that are from farming, the main threat to the environment, and buying too many things creates a throwaway society.

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