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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Computers are being used more and more in education .Some people say that is a positive trend while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinions.

The computer is becoming more and more popular in modern life. There are some people who believe that these technological devices bring more benefits for youngsters, while others disagree and think it will lead to adverse consequences. In my opinion, I agree that an increase in technology is beneficial to scholars for the reasons below.

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In their advertising, business nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It is obvious that a greater amount of money is spent on advertising campaigns, proving that it plays a vital role in business industries. One of the current strategies this industry creates is convincing people that their product is the latest hype among the others. This essay will analyze why they do this and explain why I believe it delivers adverse effects as well.

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In several countries, children are engaged in different kinds of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it a valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What is your opinion?

Childhood is a golden period that always cherishes the mood of an individual in the next phases of life by remembering that time. Due to some circumstances, a minority of children involved in different works by the enforcement of their parents and responsibilities overwhelm their happiness in such period of time.

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crimes drams are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV show are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

Based on recent reports from the art and entertainment industries, it is apparent that crime-related books and TV shows are growing in popularity. There can be many explanations on why they are so popular, and I will also give my opinion regarding it in this essay.

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Nowadays, television is an essential part of our lives, as a medium to spread news and awareness, and, for some, it even acts as a companion. What is your opinion about this?

In the modern world television is an essential gadget. It is no more be considered as a luxury , but a necessity. The essay is intended to establish with examples, how television has revolutionised the world by becoming one of the most significant electronic devices, which helps the population to gain information across the globe and act as a companion

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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects at university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? what are the effects on society?

There is a developing trend among students to refuse science-related subjects for their higher education . There are several reasons for this like , challenging and boring subject matures and unfortunately ,this can give rise to future problems like limited scientists and limited science-related research. In the following essay , this writer wishes to elaborate further on this matter.

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Computer are being used more and more in education .some people say that is a positive trend while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences discuss both side of this argument and then give your own opinions

The computer is becoming more and more popular in modern life. There are some people who believe that these technological devices bring more benefits for young people, while others disagree and think it will lead to adverse ramifications. In my opinion, I agree that an increase in technology is beneficial to scholars for the reasons below.

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Young people who commit serious crimes such as robbery or violent attacks should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extend do you agree or disagree

Some adopt a view that the youth should be responsible for their violent crimes as same as the grown-ups. In my perspective, I absolutely agree with this statement for some reasons.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? what other measures do you think might be effective?

In the contemporary epoch, traffic and pollution are increasing rapidly which is becoming a crucial issue for our society. It is reckoned that the rise in the price of petrol is the greatest way to resolve these issues such as traffic and pollution. However, I find it challenging to concur with this statement. This essay would attempt to explicate my point of view and other effective measures in the forthcoming paragraphs at its length.

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The spread of urban areas has led to deforestation and has caused many animal species to become endangered. Environmental groups are urging governments to protect these animals. What are the benefits of protecting animals? What can governments do to protect animals?

The increase in deforestation brings adverse impacts to the sustainability of wildlife. Many species of animals become endangered, this condition gained attention from environmentalists and urge the government to take action on it. This essay will explain the advantage of protecting animals and what kind of action which the government can take.

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Being celebrities such as famous sports person or celebrities bring problem as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems.

Becoming a celebrity is a dream for many youngsters today. It has been said that the popularity of celebrities, such as sports person or celebrities not only offers merits but also brings several demerits. I believe it provides issues and benefits equally, and the points supporting my view would be discussed in this essay.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

In today's world when people are becoming more adventurous, they like to visit places where weather conditions are challenging such as the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic. Here, we are going to discuss both the advantages and the disadvantages of the same.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people. Do you think that the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages.

Particularly in developing countries, it is commonplace to have the size of the youth population outnumbers the aged. Whereas some people believe that this trend has its downsides, I believe that the increase in the percentage of younger people has more merits than demerits.

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Some people think that media should not report detail of crimes to the public. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, detailed descriptions of crimes are often shown in the media. It is a controversial issue whether the detailed information of crimes should be disclosed to the public. Personally, I believe that media should be very judicious in selecting what and how many details to report.

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The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the healthcare system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that way to deal with the problem is to introduce more physical education in school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The increasing overweight population is a worldwide issue that many people have been trying to resolve. Some say that instituting more physical training in educational institutions is one of the best measures to handle the trouble. However, I entirely disagree that it is an effective means.

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Successful sport professionals can earn a great deal more than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays being a millionaire as a well-known athlete is not uncommon in societies. While some, including me, may argue that such individuals deserve to have massive income, others believe this is not fair compared to other careers.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In modern society, public transport is one of the most beneficial features for residents in the cities that become to the argument between local people to consider whether the government should spend the huge funds in the construction of new railways line for express trains to transport from city to city or developing other existing public transport such as trams and buses. Both views will be elaborated and I will give my personal idea in this essay.

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In some countries, the number of shootings increases because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Handgun ownership in this era becomes an ordinary habit in numerous countries, however, many folks opine here caused of sky-rocketing in gunshots, Clearly, in, contrast some people including me found this idea wrong. As far as I know, the number of gun owners is not the main problem these days. Both attitudes are elaborated on in the below essay.

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It has been said, “Not everything that is learned is contained in books”. Compare and contrast the knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important and why?

Currently, there is a controversial heating a debate over the fact that “Not everything that is learned is contained in books”. While both pieces of knowledge from books and practical experience have their own perks, I would contend that it is optimal to combine both factors.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In recent years, a lot of companies, even they are small or big groups, are offering products to customers through a variety of ways supported by creative steps. To compete with other platforms, they advertise many things as new ones, let's say, nothing before or there are lots of changes than the previous brand. This essay will argue that the advertising methods are positive, full of creativity, and give some advancements.

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