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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Some say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group acitivities in their free time. Others say that this is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that time is precious and each person has to make use of his or her free time wisely. Some have argued that parents should ask their children to participate in group events during their leisure time, while others think that it is crucial for children to learn how to utilise their free time on their own. This essay will explore both aspects, however, in my opinion, parents should encourage their sons and daughters to participate in school activities.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Recently, many people think that we have too many options to choose how to live our lives, but some say there are too many. I partially Agree with this opinion due to the reasons which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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Some systems require students to specialize in a limited range of subjects from the age of fifteen. Other systems require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of these two education systems and which is better? You should write at least 254 words.

According to the education system in the world, some schools demand students to learn only a limited number of subjects which are specialized. On the other hand, there are schools that allow students to study a myriad of subjects until they graduate. There are a plethora of reasons for controversy regarding the merits of both systems. I will discuss the advantages of both views and provide my opinion.

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Nowadays, most information is available online, whereas in the past knowledge was used to be stored in books and on paper. Do you think the advantages of this situation outweigh its disadvantages?

It is true that the internet provides universal access to a wide range of information to a whole society. Many people claim that there are many benefits to this, while others argue that it will pose an immense threat to society. This essay will discuss both views and give my opinion.

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In some cultures,children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvages of giving children this message?

Parents always want their children to be successful if they work hard. This type of culture is common in our communities nowadays because parents have such big expectations for their children. This essay will explore the benefits and the disadvantages of giving their children these motivations accordingly.

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Despite the benefits for health, fewer people today than ever before exercise by walking. Why is this problem? What can be done to encourage more walking?

Walking is the most common form of exercise. Although, jogging is very important for health still there is a decrease in the population engaged in walking. This essay will argue its reasons and will give suggestions on how to motivate the public to walk.

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Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. Some people believe that governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The healthcare system, education and business trading are crucial for the development of a country. Some have argued that the authorities of wealthy countries are responsible for helping poorer countries in these areas. I strongly agree with this proposal, and this essay will highlight why its proponents are correct.

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Many animals are on the verge of extinction. What are some reasons for this? How can animals be protected?

According to a report from the International Union of Conservation of Nature, many animal species are dying out at an unprecedented rate, which may lead to plenty of catastrophic results. In this essay, I will explain why this massive extinction happened and come up with two solutions to reverse this trend.

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Advanced technology has brought many beneficial changes to the world. However, some old people today struggle with the use of technologies such as mobile phones and the Internet. How can the elderly benefit from using advanced technologies? How can the elderly be encouraged to use consumer electronics more often?

The evolution of technology has resulted in many positive modifications throughout the world. Although, this development has become a little cumbersome for the elderly as these are different from conventional methods of doing things. However, this change could help them in getting more independent. The advantages as well as ways to promote its uses are highlighted in the following paragraphs.

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People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example. Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.

In the modern world, experimentation with adolescents has caused them to be addicted to legal and illegal drugs for decades. I believe that some experts assert the main reasons are related to their parents and society having bad behaviours towards them. This essay will expound on these issues and provide some solutions to address them.

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Fewer and fewer people today write by hand using pen, paper or brush. What are the reasons? Is this a positive and negative development?

Fewer and fewer people today write by hand using pen, paper or brush. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative development? Handwriting has its own inevitable significance in an individual's life. Momentarily minority of people utilize papers with writing equipment in their daily work which has several causes, one of them being the tremendous usage of technology. I vehemently deem that it has some positive points. This essay will elucidate the justification of my standpoint in the upcoming paragraph.

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Internet access for minors can be dangerous. Do you agree or not?

The world has become a global village as societies all over the world get connected to the world wide web. While there are pros and cons of little ones getting accessibility to the computer network, I believe the advantages outweigh the dangers.

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Leaders and directors in an organisation are normally older people. Some people think younger leaders would be better. Do you agree or disagree?

It is an undeniable fact that companies are run and controlled by elderly staff. Some folks, however, argue that this paradigm should shift towards youth. I strongly disagree with the statement which will be elucidated in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Obesity has been found to be a serious health hazard the world over, over the past few decades. What are the causes behind it and what are the effects of it on various sections of the community?

Nowadays, the world faces a serious problem related to the overweight which affects most of the new generation and resulted in major issues. This essay will discuss both the main reasons and effects of this dilemma.

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Many people argue that museums and art galleries should present the nation's art, as opposed to artwoks from other countries. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It has been a topic of discussion as to what art is going to post in national galleries. Most people opine that local artworks should be displayed in various museums rather than international works of art. I partially agree with the given statement for local portraits and sculptures should be given more recognition than any other works from a different nation.

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A government’s role is only to provide defence capability and urban infrastructure (roads, water supplies, etc.). All other services (education, health, social security) should be provided by private groups or individuals in the community.

The role and the functioning of the government have always been a heated point of discussion ever since the existence of the nations. Some people strongly believe that the government's role should only be limited to defence capabilities and urban infrastructures such as good roads, water supplies and even better drainage systems.

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Stress is a major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the fact in modern society that causes the stress and can reduce it.

In this contemporary era, there are many issues causing tension worldwide. This essay will discuss some of the factors that originate stress and also some useful methods to get rid of it along with a valid conclusion in the end.

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Some people think that students should play more team sports, such as football and volleyball, rather than individual sports, such as running and swimming. Do you agree or disagree?

Most people prefer team sports to individual sports. While playing cooperatively is a great idea, all kinds of games have their own merits. In this essay, I will discuss how games in physical sports contribute to violence.

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Government funding should be used to support sports and the arts in school rather than professional sports and arts for the general public. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this modern era, there has been great advancement in the field of sports and art. It is generally believed that authorities should not waste money on professional players and arts events as this is used to motivate school students so that they can develop and expand their interest in such activities. I completely agree with the given statement for two main reasons which are further discussed below in the essay.

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Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

House is a fundamental necessity of humans. Some have argued that living in a landed house is better than a skyscraper. In my opinion, it is best to stay in a horizontal city than a vertical city. However, this essay will explore both aspects and demonstrate why its proponents are correct.

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