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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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In some places, old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the contemporary epoch, there always seems to be a debate on the values of both older and younger generations. Many cultures give undue emphasis on the elders, while the others consider the young bloodline as the future. In this essay, I will be discussing both views, taking examples of Indian culture and providing the reasons for my perception.

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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is true that top sports athletes are earning a record-high payment in history while some people believe that their payoffs are inequitable to their rewards. In my opinion, they deserve the financial rewards.

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Some people say that supermarkets and manufactures have a responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging on the products they sell. Others say that it is the responsibility of consumers to avoid buying products which have a lot of packaging. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people argue that decreasing the amount of packaging on the products is the sellers' responsibility, while others believe that it is the buyers' duty to not buy those overpackaging stuff. I agree with the former argument and in this essay, I will discuss both sides of this argument and support my opinion with examples.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages togeather. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is always argued that some people believe that music can bring different people from different cultures and ages together. In fact, in my point of view, music can be a good way to bring people altogether so I totally agree with this opinion.

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Some countries import a large amount of food from other parts of the world. To what extent is this a positive or negative trend?

It is no doubt that in the developing world every field is evolving day by day and also a number of states import a huge number of various types of food from another piece of nature. This essay will explain several drawbacks and a plethora of advantages of it.

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Some countries import a large amount of food from other parts of the world. To what extent is this a positive or negative trend?

It is no doubt that in the developing world every field is evolving day by day and also a number of states import a huge number of various types of food from another piece of the world. This essay will explain several drawbacks and a plethora of advantages of it.

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Online education is becoming increasingly popular. many university students are choosing to study online instead of face to face. Do the advantages of distance education outweigh the disadvantages?

Currently, in society, we are seeing new learners are increasingly opting for online study than classroom studies. Although there is enough support for the above statement, do we really, think it is above traditional education!. In the below essay we will discuss this and my views of how physical studies are better.

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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

There has been a debatable issue regarding human well-being. It is believed by some that the population will be less healthy in the forthcoming than at present. I completely agree with the notion that, human physical fitness will worsen as a result of several factors. This essay will discuss the factors contributing to the issue.

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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Several people have the opinion that homeschooling is the best option for a child's development, while others believe that children benefit from going to school. In my opinion, going to school is best for a child's development as it helps mould a child's brain in ways homeschooling cannot, however, this essay will discuss the advantages associated with both learning styles.

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Success if often measured by wealth and material belongings. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What makes a successful person?

Almost everyone strives to become successful. Mostly, People tends to believe that if you are having a lot of material belongings and wealth that it will lead automatically to success. However, the question arises if this is actually true.

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Some people say that history is one of the most important subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

While some people argue that one of the most important subjects is history, others mention that science and technology have a more pivotal role in the contemporary world. I believe that the latter genre is more essential for the lives of people than the former one in terms of utilizing the knowledge of the subject in people’s daily lives.

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Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There is debate among psychologists that the main reason why aggressive crimes exist among minors is due to the lack of getting the social and emotional support from their families and tutors. I strongly disagree with the viewpoint with my detailed arguments in the following paragraphs.

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Computers are becoming an essential part of education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education has always been the foundation for the advancement of human civilization since the dawn of time, and technology nowadays has become an essential part of our modern world. It is argued that computer-based learning is becoming an essential part of teaching for both learners and educators alike, and I completely agree with this notion.

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In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the present, illustration and video clips have become the strongest method of communication than writing text. This is because is a direct and strong way to transmit messages to the people. I agree with the statement because I believe that image is an effective, faster and more direct technique used either in advertisements, journalism, social media and daily communication with families and colleges.

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Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both views and state your opinion?

Nowadays, the monetary value and the free moment availability have become two vital factors for human living. While, some people contend that being wealthy is propitious than having a more free slot available in one's life, yet, others argue on the opposite shore. However, I believe that putting these two elements on a scale of satisfaction is really difficult, hence, we need a balance of these for our happiness. In this ,essay we will discuss both views and will draw an inference.

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Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Most people tend to remain in the same organisation with their first job throughout their working life while others claim that this will impact their career overall. In my opinion, whilst this notion comes with a number of benefits, drawbacks should also be carefully examined.

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Computers are becoming an essential part of education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The advancement of technology nowadays is of great impact on society worldwide. There are some people who argue that the use of computers plays an important role in education, I completely agree with this notion.

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Some people think that it would be better for larger companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think the advantages of this proposition outweigh the disadvantages?

The relocation of huge enterprises in the provincial setting is perceived by some as beneficial to society. There are downsides identified in this assumption, however, I hold the view that the positive impacts still outweigh the negative consequences.

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In some cultures, childrens are often told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message

Children nowadays are inclined in setting their ambition at a very young age which allows them to dream big. Some people are convinced that young ones can achieve their goals if they are urged to do their best. From my point of view, I believe that this notion has a more positive impact than its drawbacks.

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Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

In a contemporary day and age,poor countries are focusing to improve health and education with the help of the rich nation because this poor nations nation also want to provide good amenities to their people.In my,opinion I agree with the statement.I will expound my viewpoint in the following paragraphs.

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