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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7

IELTS Writing Samples Band 7

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Some people have the same type of job throughout their lifetime, while others prefer to change the type of job they do. Discuss why people choose to do both and give your opinion.

According to some people, been employed by the same organization till their retirement age is considered more comfortable in comparison to switching jobs between the different companies. However, in my view, the level of employment satisfaction plays a major deciding role in staying loyal to the employer.
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Some parents believe that cell phones are harmful to children, while others disagree. What is your opinion?

A trend of carrying the mobile phones is rising due to its numerous benefits from the easy calling facility, data storage for sharing information on the social media applications. Keeping in the mind its merits, some parents encourages the use of the cell phones among their children, whereas other considers it dangerous for the children of such a tender age. I strongly agree with the latter group.
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Some people think that it would be better if the whole family (uncles, aunts, and grandparents) are involved in bringing up children rather than only parents. What is your opinion?

The family is known as a basic unit of the society, so some people believe that raising the children among the close knitted family members is much healthier than upbringing them solely by their parents. In my view, children should be raised among the whole united family of grandparents, uncles, aunts and cousins.
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In some countries, celebrities can now earn more than senior politicians. What might be the reason for this? Is this a positive or negative development?

The entertainment industry is becoming a big boom in the growing world of the globalisation and hence, making celebrities to earn more financial assets than the senior politicians. In my view, the community can benefit from the growth of these personalities by getting them involved in the welfare of the entire society.
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Governments should fund scientific research rather than commercial organizations. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement.

Scientific research plays an important role in the advancement of any nation, and requires a lump sum amount to conduct the various investigation trials. However, the topic on its source of funding from either the government or private companies has always been debatable. In my view, the government should take the responsibility of handling and funding all the research projects rather than the commercial organizations.
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In some countries, the number of people who visit art galleries is declining. What are the reasons for this? How can we solve this problem.

The trend of visiting the galleries is vanishing in the growing world of science and technology. The modern innovations and the lack of up-gradation of galleries are the main reasons behind this decline in the curiosity. However, the government should make the sincere efforts to preserve the heritage and culture of the nation through these historical buildings.
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Since most information about culture and history can be found on the internet, museums are not needed anymore. To what extent do you agree?

The vast amount of information about culture and history being available on the internet has created a debatable topic of whether to spend the government funds on building the new museums or maintaining the existing ones. In my view, museums and their state of art should be preserved irrespective of availability of digitized information on such topics.
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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

In the modern-day, young people have grown to be an adult much more than in the past. And therefore, leading to the fact that there is an enormous amount of the population in some countries in young adults, compared with the number of elderlies. In the following paragraphs, both benefits and drawbacks will be described.
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Some says that the most important thing about being rich is that one has the opportunity to help others To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is true that some people have a perspective about being wealthy has the chance to help others. I strongly agree with this point of view that a needy person can be supported by rich one.
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Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?

There is growing controversy regarding the positives and negatives of video games nowadays. While some people consider them good entertainment, others, however, contradict. In my opinion, although playing these video games have a few benefits, but they come at the cost of various negatives that are grave in nature.
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A government’s role is only to provide defence capability and urban infrastructure (roads, water supplies, etc.). All other services (education, health, social security) should be provided by private groups or individuals in the community. Do you agree or disagree?

Most people argue that the ministry's core duty is to provide defence and other key infrastructures such as roads and water supplies whereas all other services like education and health, including social security should be the responsibility of private groups or persons within the community. But I believe that it is also the responsibility of the law to ensure that there are good hospitals, schools and also personal security of every citizen of the nation.
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Some people are of the opinion that being highly qualified is the only way to ensure a well-paying job. While others believe that having work experience is the best way to get a well-paying job. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Academics are of the utmost importance to attain a good career in life. While some faction of people believe that job experience is prime criteria to have a lucrative posting, others favor high education. I am entirely in support of the latter view. This essay will discuss both parts before coming to a logical conclusion.
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In the future people may have to live on other planets.Some think that is therefore important to spend money researching other planets such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the coming time manifold people prefer to reside on other heavenly bodies. Hence, according to them it is imperative to disburse the amount on analysing different parts of the universe. In my opinion, I do not agree with this notion because there is no evidence found on Mars, Jupiter or other planets of life, and the survival rate is only possible on the earth as compared to somewhere else.
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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

According to some people at the current time our modern life provides us with an overwhelming number of options. I completely agree with this statement and this essay will justify valid opinions with examples.
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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

At the current time, the majority of people prefer working for themselves rather than working for someone or with collective. The main reason would be working independently. There are valid advantages and also disadvantages in this issue which I will now consider.
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Using social media as Facebook, Twitter is replacing face-to-communication in this century. Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In our modern life the development of technology is rapidly increasing. One of them is social media sites such as Facebook, Twitter which is integral part of communication. While I argue that this development has both benefits and drawbacks and I believe that there are more advantages than disadavanages.
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Government investment in the art, such as music and theaters is a waste of money. Government must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Whether or not the use of the ministry's resources in investing in public services like health, schools and the likes is of utmost importance and not on music and theatre as it is a waste is a topic of debate.
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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

The phenomenon of melody has arrived along with an evolution of the human voice and tools. While some people think it is not a critical part of life, the majority of population happily connects with the tunes of soul from all over the world. I completely agree that the influence of music is a great way to bring people of various cultures and ages closer together.
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Which do you think affect the changed attitude of people toward animals? Pet-keeping culture? Influence from western culture of ecological thought? Or else?

People harness animals for millenniums. Nowadays their attitude has changed toward animals, there are more and more vegetarians, vegans and animal rights activists. More vegan restaurants are spreading all over the world. Many aspects were the reason for these changes, however, I think the internet is playing an immense role in these changes.
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Nowadays, some employers think that formal academic qualifications are more important than life experience or personal qualities when they look for new employees. Why is it the case? Is it a positive or negative development?

In this increasingly competitive society, academic university degrees are considered to be more essential than hands-on experience by some employers when they seek new candidates. Although there are some underlying reasons for this, I still believe that this is completely a negative movement.
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