IELTS Writing Samples Band 7. Page 1838

IELTS Writing Samples Band 7

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.

It is believed by some that hiking the price of fuels, with petrol in particular, will help in curbing vehicular traffic and their subsequent pollution in urban localities. In my opinion, increased fuel prices may prevent people from using vehicles frequently and subsequently, lower traffic issues and vehicle pollution. However, I doubt it will bring any major change to our current situation.

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Over consuming sugar is unhealthy. Some people think that governments should take responsibility to control it. Others think that individuals should take responsibility of sugar intake. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Increasing health problems has been a rising concern across the world. Some of the health problems, mainly raise due to the eating habits and lifestyle of people.Though, some people debate that it is the duty of an individual to reduce the consumption of sugar, whereas, some argue it is the duty of the public body. In my essay I will share both views on this.

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Write a letter to apply for position of dealing with clients in English-speaking countries

Thuong Xuan town, Thanh Hoa province.

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Today, more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as Sahara Desert, or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

In a present era, many visitors showing their interest to visit troublesome places like Sahara desert or the Antarctic.Tourists get thrills out of them. This essay shall discuss both pros and cons of them.

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You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend.

I received your letter and I learned that you are in a dilemma as to whether you should find a job or join college. I’d suggest that you work for at least a year before you pursue your higher education buddy!

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Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

With the advent of urbanisation and rapid rise in the popularity of junk food, obesity has become a severe problem in the developed countries. In this essay, I will be walking through with some important measures that can be auctioned to overcome this issue along with relevant examples.

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Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree? Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement?

In today’s mod world, a set of predefined rules & regulations cannot be implemented in all scenarios. This is also true in case of set retirement age of 65 years for all. Thus, I strongly believed that the retirement age should vary according to the job profile.

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People believe that these days there is a general increase in anti social behviour and lack of respect for other. what might have caused this? How to improve this?

It is a fact that we are living in the age of the global village, but far away from our cultural and social values. Most of the people believe that our behaviours are becoming anti-social and less respectful towards others. This essay will discuss that shortage of education and time are the causes and put forward steps to resolve that issue.

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Some people believe that unpaid community services should be the compulsory part of high school programmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some of are the opinion that high school students should have free community services as a mandatory program in their curriculum. In my opinion, community services play a very important part in the development of the children as individuals as well as a team. However, education should be the top priority and any activity hindering it should not be practised upon them.

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Some people believe that the increasing number of vehicles is one of the biggest problem facing cities, while others believe that cities have bigger challenges. Discuss both views and state your opinion

In the recent times there are various global concerns across the world. However, some people believe the increase in the number of vehicles is the most major concern in comparison with various other problems such as globalisation, health problems, population etc. In my essay, I will share both views.

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Safety standards are important when building people's homes. Who should be responsible for enforcing strict building codes – the government or the people who build the homes? Use your own knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

The homes are the most indispensable aspect of any human being. They provide essentially the shelter and an area where the human can stay safely. Many people have the opinion that building owners are responsible for the assurance standards of a building. In this essay, the reasons why both builders and government are equally responsible for the security of the building are discussed.

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Pressure on the school and university student is increasing and students are put to work hard when then are young. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, students are dealing with high pressure about a large amount of knowledge at university. While there are some negatives to some impacts on them, I would argue that working hard at university is more beneficial development.

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Tourism is increased in many countries. Does tourism brings more advantages or disadvantages to a country

Nowadays tourism is the backbone of the economy, tourism plays a vital role in interchanging the different cultures on the planet, some countries encourage the tourism for the development of the municipal area.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent times, a large number of countries have increased the population of youths than they did the elderly. I believe this will improve the technological advancement of the country, which will in turn boost economic development and it is more than any drawback that may be considered.

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using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effects on young children.. do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, it is observed that regular use of computer among young children is increasing considerably. Although there are some negative aspects of using this technology, but the significance of using computer among youngsters could not be underestimated.

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Many people these days are now living alone. Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, due to modernization, people’s choice of living has also changed. These days, lots of individuals prefer to live alone. In my view, it is a positive development and this essay will discuss reasons for it.

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Deforestation cause by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be done to solve the problem?

With the drastic expansion of humans' residential areas came extensive efforts towards deforestation all around the globe. Due to this a negative impact on the environment in the shape of global warming can be seen. To tackle this issue, some concrete steps such as implementation of global legislation against it along with monetary incentives in favour of pro plantation could be taken.

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In some countries, younger people are neglecting their right to vote. What problems does this cause and what are some of the possible solutions?

Younger generations in some nations are avoiding their right to vote. The main problem this causes is that leaders cannot address the issues of young people and the most viable solution is for the government to sponsor awareness campaigns in media and colleges.

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The government should allocate more funding to teaching science rather than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress to what extent do you agree

Education plays a key role in the country's prosperity. Some people argue that more money should be put forward to teach science rather than other courses by an administrating body in order for a nation to grow and advance. In my opinion, body of knowledge is the key to development. However, other subjects are important too.

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STRESS-RELATED ILLNESSES ARE BECOMING INCREASINGLY COMMON. WHAT DO YOU THINK ARE THE CAUSES OF THIS? WHAT SOLUTIONS CAN YOU SUGGEST?

Nowadays, people are significantly suffering from sickness due to stress. This essay will discuss the main causes of stress-related sicknesses including work pressures and health problems. This essay will also suggest solutions to these issues, including following physical exercise and maintaining a balanced diet.

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