IELTS Writing Samples Band 8.5

There is a common phenomenon today that is using the latest technological products become a fashion, thus more and more consumers prefer to buy the latest smartphones, computers and other devices. In my opinion, this behaviour could bring both positive and negative developments to the society.
Being a resident in a nation where it is paramount to speak a foreign dialect can lead to grave social problems, including realistic issues. I totally agree with this view because not only will it mount pressure on the individual to learn the language fast, it will also cause misunderstanding in grasping the people's culture and belief.
Many people believe that increasing the gasoline rates would be the best possible mean to reduce the traffic issues and growing pollution. Although a rise in petroleum cost may have some impact on traffic and pollution problems, it is definitely not the best option because it would result in inflation in the country. So I have to completely disagree with this. The better way to solve these problems would be to improve public transport and increase taxation on private cars.
Being a resident in a nation where it is paramount to speak a foreign dialect can lead to grave social problems, including realistic issues. I totally agree with this view because not only will it mount pressure on the individual to learn the language fast, it will also cause misunderstanding in understanding the people's culture and belief.
Globalization is everywhere now and so, while some people approve of it, there are others who do not accept that it would be a benefit. There are a variety of positive developments, nevertheless, this does have some negative developments that need to be considered.
Protecting the environment is a controversial issue leading to an argument whether people or the authority and large companies should do something to maintain a clean surrounding. Some believe that people lack the ability to do so and that only the ministry and organizations have the influence to do so. I disagree since I believe that individuals equally should be responsible, as well as the government and industries to improve their surroundings.
Citizen’s aging problems become serious social issues, thus some governments issue some new policies to reduce the pressure on paying pensions, which the most common one is allowed people to work after the original retirement age. In my opinion, this measure might solve certain financial problems from governments, but will create other social problems.
Nowadays, it has been observed that, there is an increase in the rate of children's crime. Some people argue that, this is mainly because of the busy work lifestyle of their mothers and mothers do not get enough period to pamper the children. I am not agreeing with this opinion and the following essay state points to support my view.
Nowadays, maintaining and cleanliness of the environment is an important topic to discuss in the society. Some people argue that, it is the responsibility of the individuals to clean the surroundings and some others, argues that it is the whole responsibility of the government. In my opinion, it is a joint action and both are in the position of protecting the nature. This essay following the discussion of both arguments with appropriate examples.
The use of mobile phones for businesses and personal use has increased significantly over the past few years. People have come to accept its importance in the society, hence, the rise in its usage. I believe this is due to a number of factors, such as its ease and convenience.
Nowadays, maintaining and cleanliness of the environment is an important topic to discuss in the society. Some group argues that it is the individual's responsibility to clean the surroundings and some others, argues that whole responsibility is with the government. In my opinion, it is a joint effort and both are in a position to protect the nature. The following essay discusses both the arguments with examples.
In some countries, there is a huge income disparity among people. This is because some people earn high wages, while others are struggling to make both ends meet.It is believed by some that the government should cap the remuneration, and others think that higher stipend is beneficial for a country.In my opinion, giving high remuneration to people is fruitful for a country because it reduces the brain drain of a country.
There is an increasing number of people believes that animals should not be exploited and should be treated fairly same as humans while others claims that animals should be utilized to help people in various kinds of ways, such as the source of food and for medical testing. This essay will discuss both the viewpoints and provide an opinion.
Over the years, there has been an immense development in cities and towns, this has led young individuals to migrate in search of a better life, leaving aged people in the countryside to cater for themselves. This indeed has some negative impacts, but some measures can be taken to reduce this menace.
Despite the reduction in crime rate in nation around the globe, many citizens still feel unsafe. In my opinion, factors such as the misuse of social media and the inefficiency of the justice organization could be the reasons for this unrest.
For every human being entertainment is a part of their life. It relaxes the mind and the body. To keep everyone entertained, there are different groups of people who makes us feel better whenever we are depressed. In my opinion, I completely agree that these entertainers should be paid with a better price. Moreover, I believe that the research jobs in the field of medicine and space also should be paid with a decent amount.
It has been repetitively argued that extinction of numerous land and sea creatures is becoming a rising global concern due to excessive human practices. This, mainly, is because of killing of animals as a sport or in order to earn profit, and laws for animal protection, in addition to awareness are needed to tackle this issue.
There is no doubt that the number of obese people is substantially increasing which has been straining the health care system. To counter the issue, people believe that more physical education classes should be added in schools. In my opinion, I completely agree that this is the best way to counter the issue of deteriorating health concerning weight.
Many think that most of the significant issues of the environment nowadays can be solved by the technology. In my opinion, I believe that technology will not help, but rather, affect the surroundings negatively.
Cities have more job opportunities and better facilities than rural areas, which are the main factors attracting young rural residents who choose to immigrate to cities to enjoy the urban lifestyle. This report will describe certain problems which caused by this phenomenon and provide some solutions.