IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 99

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines between cities. Others believe that money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In recent years, government expenditure on the railways and public goods has become a contentious issue. While some believe that money should be spent on fresh railway lines for the sake of intercity shipping, others argue that this sum should be employed for current transport systems. Conspicuously, this issue requires our in-depth analysis. I completely agree with the latter stance.

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Children today play very violent games. This must be the reason for the increase in violence and crime in most major cities world. What are your opinion on this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is an irrefutable that the electronic games play a vital role in the child’s lifestyle and there is no doubt game helps to develop our mind. Some people assert that violent games affect badly on teenagers, might encourage them to become aggressive in real life. In fact, many parents worry about this and the effect of these games are having on their children. In this essay, I intend to support my views before the conclusion can be drawn.

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Some people feel that the cost of space exploration is far too high for the benefits it brings while others argue that we space programmers should continue no matter what the cost. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that the space is still unexplored and unknown. While some argue that these explorations cost more than its advantages, I believe if we want to expand our knowledge beyond our planet. We should continue this effort. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument.

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Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. to what extend do you agree, give your own opinion.

Today’s world has been divided into developing and industrialised countries where the main difference of them is the amount of money spend on education, health and infrastructure. It is debatable whether developing fortunate countries become their authority or others. To my perspective, opulent nations should partake to solve poor nations problems’ because they have more resource to deal with the challenge

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Many animals are being hunted to the brink of extinction in order to fulfill the demand and greed of mankind for decorative purposes as well as for other reasons, such as traditional medicine. How can this issue be tackled?

Human life is dependent on the animals. But, human beings have put many animal species in danger of becoming extinct with the unchecked and extensive hunting for its selfish motives such as house decorations, pleasure etc. It is very important to protect the animals and some measures for this cause must be taken.

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Some people think that teenagers should follow what the old people say whereas some believe that it is good for teenage people to challenge what old people say. Discuss both opinions and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that adolescence is a crucial period of an individual's life. While some people believe that teenagers should follow the advice of their elders, I would argue that it is normal for them to oppose the older people.

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Global environmental issues are the responsibility of rich nations not of poorer nations. Do you agree with this opinion.

Depletion of the environment has become a grave issue for the whole world. Many people think that only rich countries should take up the responsibility to work for conserving the habitat. However, I do not agree with this approach and find it as an absurd solution.

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As a result of growth in some urban centres, the environment in those cities is deteriorating. How could this issue be tackled by both the government and individuals?

Environmental damage has become a serious issue for the whole world. Many people present the view that as every person gets impacted by it, and thus, the government should tackle this. However, some believe that individuals should take up this responsibility.

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Some people think spending a lot on birthdays and marriage celebrations is a waste of money but others think it is important to the young people and the society.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Whether or not to spend the money on special life events, such as birthdays and marriages has become a controversial issue.While some individuals that it is a mere wastage of wealth, others think it is significant to spend on these occasions.This essay intends to delve into both sides of the argument in depth.I, however, opine that a balanced approach should be adopted.

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Many people spend a lot of money on clothes, haircuts and beauty products to enhance their appearance.Some people think that it is a good way to spend money, while others think there is a better way to spend it.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Whether or not to spend money on the artificial beauty products has become a controversial issue.While some people argue that expenditure on certain things, such as clothes, haircuts, and many more is justified, others opine that there are alternative methods to it as well.This essay intends to delve into both sides of the argument in depth.However, I believe that spending excessive money on the enhancement of looks is inappropriate.

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6.A.The popularity of news media often has significant influence on people’s lives. Some people believe this to be a negative development. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that the television is the most watched news' medium. With its increasing recognition, the impact it has on people is also rising. Although there are some benefits, I believe its disadvantages far outweigh the advantages.

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In spite of the advanced made in agriculture,many people of the world still go hunger. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?

It is irrefutable that the evolution of technology makes the drastic changes in the field of cultivation. From these undoubtedly developments, we are now self-sufficient in food, yet many inhabitants of this universe now unable to fulfil their food crisis, for the reasons of their climate changes, population growth, non-technological equipment and so on. This essay will delve into these aspects with relevant examples, besides these, it will be discuss the possible ways to solve this occurrence.

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many people are spending a lot of money on their weddings. do you think is a good thing?

Weddings are certainly one of the most memorable days of a person's lifetime. Increased expenditure on weddings is quite the trend these days with people choosing to make their special day grand and festive. I believe that, while it is important to celebrate such joyous occasions, spending a lot of money on weddings is not a good thing and the below essay outlines my reasons for believing so.

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Some people say companies should require all employees to wear uniforms at work. others think it is unnecessary. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some organizations nowadays tend to force their staff to wear uniforms at work. However, it is argued that we should let our employees be freedom for choosing clothes to put in at work. In my view, both sides have their own reasons which may relate to the productivity of their company, or this is the company's culture existing for a long time.

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Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment. What causes global warming? What solutions are there for this problem?

In the past one century, the environment has suffered a lot of changes. One of the most pressing issues is global warming. This essay discusses what are the causes of the issue and its remedies.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some would argue that it is better to instill competitiveness among children, while others say that it is more useful for children to co-operate with one another. While being competitive helps young people to improve themselves, I believe that moral traits acquired by co-operating with one another is far better.

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1 People think that old buildings should be knocked down and give way to modern buildings. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that historical buildings must be demolished to make room for more modern structures, while others are against this notion. In my opinion, heritage buildings that contribute to the aesthetic, cultural, and functionality of the society must be preserved while buildings that do not fulfil these criteria can be knocked down.

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People can eat a wide variety of food that can be grown in other areas. As a result, people eat more food produced in other regions than local food. Do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Due to globalization, people tend to try different cuisines. Consumption of produce from different regions than your own is increasing. Although a metropolitan city should have various options, I believe individuals should consume local food, as it is more beneficial.

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Nowadays many young people are attracted to dangerous sports such as snowboarding or mountain biking. What makes these sports so attractive? What measures should be taken to minimize the risks? To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

High adrenaline sport is increasingly becoming a craze with the younger population. These days, kids are attracted to riskier activities like snow skiing and mountain biking. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons for their addiction in these sports and the regulations that are required to be taken to keep everyone involved safe.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

In the recent past, the expansion and innovation in an engineering domain is growing trend. Some people believe that it is required to upgrade the existing railway infrastructure, so that it is ready to incorporate the technology of fast trains, whereas, there is a section of people who think that the same funds should be utilized to provide more security and reliability with existing railway lines. In my opinion, it is important to maintain the balance between both approaches, as the evolution of new technology is not a blocker for enhancement of the existing system.

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