IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 99

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many argue that extending punishment for the prisoners is the paramount way to diminish offence, whilst another portion of the population thinks of different solutions. In my opinion, elongated jail will only result in profound enrage and revenge within the caged and will rather make them offenders forever. However, approaches like skill based training and counselling can work as remedies to reduce crime. This essay would elaborate both viewpoints.

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To solve the ever-increasing environmental hazards throughout the world, the best way is to increase the price of fuel. What is your opinion on the above assumption?

It is argued that the most effective solution to reduce the ever-increasing environmental hazards around the word is fuel cost. I completely disagree with this idea, and this essay will argue some other method to decrease in environmental threat.

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Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

According to some people, it is believed that children develop their creativity and other skills by doing fun activities with their parents, rather than reading books. I strongly agree with this approach as children learn their motor and cognitive skills only through play, especially when they are in pre-school age.

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Some people claim that traditional games had more benefits for children than modern ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, modern technology and busier lifestyle changes the types of games usually children love to play. It is believed by some people that older or conventional games are more beneficial than the modern ones whereas others claim the opposite. Personally, I strongly agree with the former statement. In this essay, I will discuss the benefits of playing traditional games using the examples of two recent published articles statistics.

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The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is undeniable that high salaries are often considered as the most vital factor when signing for a job. Although some people might argue that it is not essential, I would strongly say that it should have considered the most for a couple of reasons.

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Some people think that way to reduce crimes is long term prisons while others think that there are other ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Crimes are inevitable nowadays. Every day, there are numerous burglaries, murders, robberies taken place almost everywhere on the planet. The government has set out efficient rules to reduce crimes. One of them is sending the guilty person to prison. Many people state that those who commit to crime should be sentenced to long term prisons, whereas others argue that there are different approaches to cut down crimes. In this essay, I will discuss both claims from my own point of view.

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Too much money is spent on maintaining and repairing old buildings. Some people think that they should be knocked out to give way to modern buildings. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern world, many people are willing to demolish old buildings, in order to construct modern skyscrapers, business districts or shopping centres. However, others feel that old constructions should be protected, because they are one of the national heritages. Personally, I reckon that individuals and authorities should take care of these constructions.

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Some people think that drug addicts should be treated like criminals and sent to jail, while others believe that they should be treated like patients and sent to hospital. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Drug abuse is a common observation, especially among the younger generation. It is stated that, these people should be punished for such acts by imprisonment, while others think that, they should be hospitalized and treated for this disease. This essay will discuss both these views and in my opinion, these individuals should be treated in a hospital as they are in a physically and mentally compromised state.

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Some people think that you can never become fluent in a languange unless you have spent time living or working in that country. To what extent do you agree?

A large proportion of people are desired to speak a foreign language fluently, like a native speaker. In addition, Some people consider it necessary to live in the related country, so that they can achieve it. Obviously, this is possibly a viable solution, but I do not agree this is the inevitable option.

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Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?

Every year an increasing crime incidence is being evident. This essay will discuss two root causes for this which are shortage of jobs available and drug addiction and suggest measures to address these issues such as providing more jobs for people and legislations against narcotic intake.

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Some people think that spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Undoubtedly, the method of communication among individuals plays a vital role in understanding ourselves. However, it is often argued by some people that the verbal method of communicating is superior to the use of text. I completely agree that communicating orally helps to convey the information better than writing. Exploring the ease of identifying the speaker's tone while speaking, as well as not having the need for formal education before speaking will prove this.

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Many famous sports players advertise sports products. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

There is no iota of doubt that, many well-known players are doing different types of product advertisements. This phenomenon is offering multifarious benefits to the players. However, sometimes a couple of problems emerge due to the same. In this essay, we will throw some light on the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

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In some areas of the US, a curfew was imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to go out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompained by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

A curfew was inflicted on some cities of US, which states that no children under eighteen years are allowed to go outside after a specific time at night. If they have to go they should go under the supervision of a grown up. I totally agree with this statement because it is imposed for the safety and protection of children.

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Many people try to look younger than their age. What are the reasons people do this? Do you think this is a good thing or a bad thing?

It is undeniable that a lot of people try to hide their real age and attempt to look younger. In fact, many people dislike the question about their age and find it embarrassing. Personally, I think this is because aging has been associated with many diseases and illnesses, whereas looking young always reflects beauty and good health. However, this obsession with looking young has many negative effects on individuals and societies.

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Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have an significant influence on people's behavior. What is your opinion?

Physical assault is seen commonly these days on entertainment portals. A few think that these movies and games cause a bad influence on an individual's behaviour, while others feel that the people act by their own will. This essay will discuss that, watching violence continuously has a damaging effect on a person's thinking. In my opinion, this type of entertainment should not be encouraged.

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It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is believed that to live in the distance from parents for students is much better. I partly agree with this viewpoint point as living far will teach to be independent as well as can cause some social problems.

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As well as making money business should also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree.

In the contemporary world, all the corporate companies and organizations are keen towards making profits in their businesses. Besides this, they should posses social responsibilities.I am in concord with this notion.

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Some people believe online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read whereas others believe only printed material should be used. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Studying online is a conspicuous trend which is essential towards a child's growth and development. While some people believe that children's learning process should be strictly online, others argue that books should be utilized. Personally, I believe that both modes of learning should be used interchangeably, in order to achieve optimum result. This essay will expatiate on both views as well as the writer's viewpoint.

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Nowadays, the football supporters behave violently. What cause? how can we solve it?

Games and sports are a part of our life. Football is known as the universal sport.Recently, the football hooliganism has increased significantly. This essay elucidates the reasons and the manoeuvres to resolve it.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

The majority of people think that the melody plays a vital role in our modern world, which can reduce the gap of culture and generation. In my opinion, I totally agree with this point of view for many reasons and will discuss below with the subsequent examples.

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