IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 99

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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6.A. The popularity of news media often has significant influence on people’s lives. Some people believe this to be a negative development. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that the television is the most watched news' medium. With its increasing recognition, the impact it has on people is also rising. Although there are some benefits, I believe its disadvantages far outweigh the advantages.

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In spite of the advanced made in agriculture,many people of the world still go hunger. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?

It is irrefutable that the evolution of technology makes the drastic changes in the field of cultivation. From these undoubtedly developments, we are now self-sufficient in food, yet many inhabitants of this universe now unable to fulfil their food crisis, for the reasons of their climate changes, population growth, non-technological equipment and so on. This essay will delve into these aspects with relevant examples, besides these, it will be discuss the possible ways to solve this occurrence.

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many people are spending a lot of money on their weddings. do you think is a good thing?

Weddings are certainly one of the most memorable days of a person's lifetime. Increased expenditure on weddings is quite the trend these days with people choosing to make their special day grand and festive. I believe that, while it is important to celebrate such joyous occasions, spending a lot of money on weddings is not a good thing and the below essay outlines my reasons for believing so.

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Some people say companies should require all employees to wear uniforms at work. others think it is unnecessary. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some organizations nowadays tend to force their staff to wear uniforms at work. However, it is argued that we should let our employees be freedom for choosing clothes to put in at work. In my view, both sides have their own reasons which may relate to the productivity of their company, or this is the company's culture existing for a long time.

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Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment. What causes global warming? What solutions are there for this problem?

In the past one century, the environment has suffered a lot of changes. One of the most pressing issues is global warming. This essay discusses what are the causes of the issue and its remedies.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some would argue that it is better to instill competitiveness among children, while others say that it is more useful for children to co-operate with one another. While being competitive helps young people to improve themselves, I believe that moral traits acquired by co-operating with one another is far better.

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1 People think that old buildings should be knocked down and give way to modern buildings. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that historical buildings must be demolished to make room for more modern structures, while others are against this notion. In my opinion, heritage buildings that contribute to the aesthetic, cultural, and functionality of the society must be preserved while buildings that do not fulfil these criteria can be knocked down.

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People can eat a wide variety of food that can be grown in other areas. As a result, people eat more food produced in other regions than local food. Do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Due to globalization, people tend to try different cuisines. Consumption of produce from different regions than your own is increasing. Although a metropolitan city should have various options, I believe individuals should consume local food, as it is more beneficial.

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Nowadays many young people are attracted to dangerous sports such as snowboarding or mountain biking. What makes these sports so attractive? What measures should be taken to minimize the risks? To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

High adrenaline sport is increasingly becoming a craze with the younger population. These days, kids are attracted to riskier activities like snow skiing and mountain biking. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons for their addiction in these sports and the regulations that are required to be taken to keep everyone involved safe.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

In the recent past, the expansion and innovation in an engineering domain is growing trend. Some people believe that it is required to upgrade the existing railway infrastructure, so that it is ready to incorporate the technology of fast trains, whereas, there is a section of people who think that the same funds should be utilized to provide more security and reliability with existing railway lines. In my opinion, it is important to maintain the balance between both approaches, as the evolution of new technology is not a blocker for enhancement of the existing system.

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A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People have different views about treatment of animals. While there are some good arguments in favour of treating animals in the same way humans are, I believe that it is better use them as we desire for food and medical research.

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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views?

Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about what students should pursue after finishing high school. While some people believe that entering a university or college will guarantee a successful career in the future, others state that working right after school is a better option. This essay will discuss these two opinions.

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A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Many people are doing their shopping on the internet nowadays. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages if shopping online and give your opinion.

It is undeniable that in today's techno-savvy era the use of technology is increasingly likely among the people. Therefore, these days the trend of purchasing things on the internet is immense. However, the trend brings both positive and negative aspects and I personally believe that the advantages of online shopping far outweigh its disadvantages.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often thought that being an inhabitant in a foreign speaking state can result some dramatically communication issues and practical complains. In my point of view, I totally agree with this, because it does decrease the socialization between the inhabitants.

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Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. Do you agree or disagree?

Art forms such as music, theatre, sculptures define the heritage and culture of a place.In recent times, more importance is being given to the improvement of the public services and facilities by the government. Even though people's well-being is the government's priority, equal importance must be given in protecting the ancient art and culture. In my opinion, a balanced planning is essential for the nation's economic as well as cultural development.

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Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.

It is certain that the considerable increasing urban population leads to serious problems. There are several negative points for this problem, and various measures can be tackled by the governments and individuals to improve the situation.

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Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest way that the governments and individuals can tackle these problem.

It is certainly that dramatic considerable increasing the urban population leads to serious problems. There are several reasons for this problem, and various measures can be taken by the government and individuals to improve the situation.

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Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that government and individuals can tackle these problems.

It is certainly that dramatically increasing the urban population leads to serious problems. There are several reasons for this problem, and various measures can be taken by the governments and individuals to improve the situation.

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Most countries allow 18year old to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow driving at that age.Others think that the age to start driving should be at least 25 years.Discuss both views.

Setting of an appropriate driving age has become a controversial issue in the major nations of the world, such as the USA and UK.While it is thought by many that the youth of 18 years is the perfect one, others believe that the minimum should be made 25.This essay intends to delve into both sides of the argument in depth.

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