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IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Some people believe that traveling alone is the best way to experience a country or a culture. Others feel that it is better to travel with people you know. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Due to the advancement of , technology it is much easier and convenient to travel these days. Humans prefer to explore different countries and their culture. Although many believe that travelling in groups is best while other's says exploring alone is the best way to learn about a country. We will have a discussion on both views and then I will give my opinion.

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Q. Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Different languages which has been used in our life die out every year. Some people believe that even if there are small number of languages exist in the world, life would be easier. I also agree that extinction of languages does not affect in humans.

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International tourism is now more common than ever before. Some feel it is a positive trend but others don’t. Give your opinion.

Travelling to other countries for leisure and holiday is becoming increasingly popular these days. Some people consider this to be a good thing. However, a part of society is opposed to this trend, claiming that it has several negative implications. In the following paragraphs, I’d like to express my viewpoint.

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Some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness. Do you think people can be happy without much money? what other factors contribute towards happiness?

A section of society believes that money plays a vital role in elating human happiness. However, in my opinion, although money helps in fulfilling the basic needs and desires of an individual, other factors can help an individual in leading a contented and happy life.

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Some people believe that the whole family (grandparents,uncles,aunts) bringing up children is better rather than only parents. What is your opinion?

Some people are of the opinion that, it is rather beneficial to a child to be raised by both parents and their extended family members. In my opinion, I think that this is very important to a child's upbringing and it can influence their positively.

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How do you think this Graduate Degree can help you achieve your carrier goals?

It is a great accomplishment for me when I completed my convocation in Nursing. Carrier advancement is one of the continuous ladders in my life to move forward by updating myself for the future life; to work proactive, setting objectives and an inspiration to future generation from a parent perspective. I believe education is one of the best treasure seas that no one can steal from us and it has no end. When I remember the convocation day, I could say that the path towards success was not a bed of roses, but it was a nutshell of devotion, sacrifices, hope and significantly a helping hand to my society.

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A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans,while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs,including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, more and more people tend to leave their hometown to pursue a modern and magnificent life in big cities. The phenomenon causes us to gain several merits and demerits also. This essay will give a clear discussion about the reason why this figure happens and whether the advantages of it can outweigh the backward.

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In some areas of the US teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night. What is your opinion about this?

Few localities of America has limited the movement of underage people after a set time at night. This essay supports the given statement, though America is a free state yet there exists uncontrollable crimes such as kidnapping, trafficking, smuggling, vulgarity, paedophilia and drug dealing etc, which can harm kids. and children being vulnerable to such things shall be protected, hence, such decisions should be promoted for the safety of kids.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Agree or disagree?

The growth of the e-commerce industrial influences more every year to offline magazines. I absolutely agree with that fact and support it. The essay aims to show the advantages of online shops against current retailers such as comfort and flexibility.

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Some People believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many people opine that compared to past time, people all over this technology-driven world is lucky to have so many opportunities. I completely agree with this notion. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will elaborate on my views by bringing up too many choices of people in this modern era.

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Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

These days usage of social networks has become a trend between every age group individuals, while posting private information on this sites will have many threats. In my opinion, there are more cons rather than advantages to this kind of applications. This essay will discuss, the problems of sharing personal information on social media.

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International marketing is sometimes seen as invasive and interfering with the country in question. Others argue that it is a necessary and economic form of education, along with the dissemination of ideas, language and culture. Discuss both points of view and then give your opinion.

Although it is sometimes assumed that global marketing penetrates and interferes in the countries concerned, others believe that it is indispensable for the economy of a country and also has a significance for the dissemination of ideas, language and culture. I think that international marketing is important for a country because it opens up many opportunities. First, people can take advantage of many useful products that are offered on the international or global market and may not be available in their country otherwise. Second, for local businesses, as they have been given the chance to attract foreign investment.

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Smoking is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the world today. In the interest of public health, governments should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products. Do you agree or disagree?

In modern times, the issue of smoking topic has become highly controversial. There are those who say that smoking should lead to important ailment among the public however others believe that it should not. In this essay, I will examine both sides of the argument and provide my overall opinion.

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People spend too much money on family celebrations such as birthdays and weddings. What is the importance of these celebrations? Do you think people really spend too much?

In this contemporary era, anniversaries and marriages are being celebrated by many rich family who spend a significant amount of money on these celebrations. Although people put in excessive money for several important reasons and celebrations are considered as a vital part of our traditions and culture and , I believe that fund spends by folk on organizing these occasions is increasing over the period. This essay will analyse the reasons for celebrating these events and also justify my statement with relevant examples.

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Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Being responsible for an international sports event organization is partly believed to bring considerable benefits to the host country whereas others have the opposite point of view. This essay will discuss both views and state personal opinion.

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Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better time to be alive than now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

I support the fact that advances in science and technology has made our life comfortable as we are surrounded with machines which performs our chores for us, however, I am aginst the fact that this era is the best time to live in. In this essay I will present examples in support of my disagreement.

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The government’s investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Recently, spending money on arts has become a controversial issue. It is often argued that the government should support public service financially instead of investing money on arts, music and theatre. Although I agree that the government’s investments in public services play a critical role, I believe that proper funding of the arts sector is also crucial for society.

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It is believed that women are more suited to child-rearing than men. What is your opinion on this issue?

It is generally believed that women are better at bringing up a child than men. While men do have a significant role in the upbringing of a child it is women who are most likely considered to be adept at child-rearing. In my opinion, the role of mothers is crucial in the character building and development of a child.

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Some people think that the government should spend taxpayers' funds on cultural activities such as music or art. Others think this is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, utilizing public money on traditional activities is a debatable topic as few citizens are in favour of spending these amounts on cultural actions, whereas some believe that it is a sheer waste of cash.

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Some people prefer to have temporary jobs, which means they only work a few months in a year and use the rest of the time to do what they want. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, it`s getting harder for people to working in a permanent position. Instead of stay at home many of us start to work in temporary positions. I think short-term jobs could benefit us because of several reasons below:

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