Samples Band 9

IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 9

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In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents home once they finish school. They start living on their own or share a home with friends. Some people think it is a positive thing. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, An adolescent is more likely to make a decision to move out of their parents' house when they graduate from secondary school. some individuals think this situation is absolutely better for them than they still staying with parents as the same as a child. In my point of view, I definitely agree with the statement and there is an explanation of the reason.

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Some feel that schools should be mixed with both girls and boys attending while others feel the genders ought to be separated. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Although some individuals claim that there are advantages when schools have classes with separated genders, others believe both girls and boys should study together in the same room and I have the same opinion. Independently of gender, children can benefit themselves with the presence of other young people. This essay will discuss both sides and I will explain my opinion in detail.

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Some people think that sports involving violence, such as boxing and martial arts, should be banned from TV as well as from international sporting competitions. To what extent do you agree?

It is commonly believed that sporting exercises has an essential part in our life, as well as helping to improve the health of the body. Some sections of society think that play involves force like wrestling and fighting and combative arts should be prohibited. However,I express my disagreement with this thinking by forming my own opinion while discussing the same consideration of the people in the following article .

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Many people think that censorship in modern society is quite necessary. Others, however, see censorship as an obstacle to individuality and creativity. What is your opinion? Write an essay of 350 words on this.

A number of people advocate censorship as being indispensable in modern times. Others, however, claim the opposite, considering this as a hindrance to originality and imagination. From my perspective, I voice approval of the former, in that I believe suppression has brought about huge benefits far outweighing its seeming drawbacks.

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Some experts suppose that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens happier. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Citizens of developed countries have innumerable ways to enjoy their life. While some people believe additional resources will add value to their already happy life, I think otherwise. Each additional dollar in a resident of a rich nation does not guarantee the chances of purchasing products that bring joy and pleasure to him.

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Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth. Do you agree or disagree ? ( In the future, it seems more difficult to live on the Earth. Some people think more money should be spent on other planets to live on, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree ? )

There is a controversial perspective heating a debate over the fact that whether a wave of money should be allocated in researching the universe or other fields that enhance people’s living standards. From my point of view, I am well convinced that the budget should be divided equally for both aspects.

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Some experts suppose that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens happier. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Citizens of developed countries have innumerable avenues to enjoy their life. While some people believe additional resources will add value to their already happy life, I think otherwise. Each additional dollar in a resident of a rich nation does not guarantee the chances of purchasing products that bring joy and pleasure to him.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasis that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, many people pay attention to their electronic gadgets that always show a wide range of advertisements on the internet. Businesses think this is a great opportunity to promote new products. As a result, I would like to figure out why this trend has happened and to take both sides of this evolution.

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the growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent times, the advancement of technology resulted in many inventions and among them, online shopping takes the front row. people shopping on online platforms has increased exponentially, if this trend continues to get more attraction then maximum shops would be closing. I firmly agree with this notion.

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Some people believe that countries should produce food that population eats and import food as less as possible. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

Most countries import food from other places rather than growing it natively. While some people believe that crops can be homegrown others are of the opinion that they should be brought from other locations. From my perspective, consumables need to be homegrown and should not be outsourced. There are two primary reasons for this.

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Do you think businesses should hire employees who will spend their entire lives working for the company? Explain why do you agree or disagree. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

In this fast-paced world, in order to secure their businesses, company owners tend to choose someone who is willing to work for them with high loyalty. I personally can only partly agree with the aforementioned statement which causes will be discussed in this essay.

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Some people say that in our modern age, it is unnecessary to teach children about the skills of handwriting. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Writing is a way of communicating with others or represent ideas. Better the handwriting, better the understanding for the reader. However, many believe that handwriting is not a skill of the future. In this essay, I will discuss the technology evaluation and the change in the means of communication as the reasons for my agreement with the statement.

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Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays people are compelled to watch movies on their mobile devices rather than visiting a hall. But others still prefer to watch films in a theatre. In my opinion, I believe the cinema experience is still the best inside a theatre rather than watching it at home.

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Some people believe that capital punishment should never be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Crime is one of the vigorously discussed topics in many countries. While governments are trying to address this issue, a segment of society is convinced that heinous criminals should have death penalties. Others, however, believe the opposite. I personally support the former view, because a threat of capital punishment can deter potential murderers from committing crimes. The following paragraphs will discuss both opinions and explain my support of capital punishment.

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Some believe that more young people hold the important positions in government, while others believe that the young people should not. Discuss both views and provide your own opinion with relevant examples.

A country is heavily dependent on its young generations. Thus, it is easy to understand why most of the community wanted the involvement of millennials as part of officials councils. I personally may not agree with the above-mentioned statement that both merits and demerits will be discussed in this essay.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Nowadays communities have the demand to travel quickly using their own private vehicles which created both traffic jam and air pollutions problem. Consequently, one of the council measures to tackle is to increase taxation on the fuel fee. I am personally may not agree with this statement which I tried to propose other alternatives options.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. which viewpoint do you agree with?

Advertisement is a way of communicating with customers. It is often believed that it makes us buy the products which are not our need, on the other hand, many consider it as a way of updating the customer about the latest product of the company. Has this affected our purchase thinking about an item? I agree it has and the psychological impact and the aesthetic advertising to be the reasons for it.

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People buy a product if it fulfills their needs, there is no need for advertisement. To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?

The importance of the product advertisement which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked controversy over the potential impact in recent years. I can partly agree with the topic statement and describe the reasons in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?

Nowadays, we often see our mailbox flooded with lots of advertisements from multiple organisations promoting their products and I believe that these attractive ads certainly creates an urge to buy the articles. Firstly, we will discuss the impact of this on our buying pattern and secondly, we will elaborate on the ways to safeguard the consumers.

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Space exploration is much too expensive and the money should be spent on more important things. What is your opinion?

A big proportion of expenditure is being spent on exploring the space. It has been argued by many people that space exploration is too costly so government should utilise funds on other essential things such as education, medical. In my opinion, I totally agree with the statement. The education system and the medical sector are the two most prominent sectors where wealth can be invested. In an essay, I will discuss why money should be spent on these two things.

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