Samples Band 9

IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 9

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Some believe that more young people hold the important positions in government, while others believe that the young people should not. Discuss both views and provide your own opinion with relevant examples.

A country is heavily dependent on its young generations. Thus, it is easy to understand why most of the community wanted the involvement of millennials as part of officials councils. I personally may not agree with the above-mentioned statement that both merits and demerits will be discussed in this essay.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Nowadays communities have the demand to travel quickly using their own private vehicles which created both traffic jam and air pollutions problem. Consequently, one of the council measures to tackle is to increase taxation on the fuel fee. I am personally may not agree with this statement which I tried to propose other alternatives options.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. which viewpoint do you agree with?

Advertisement is a way of communicating with customers. It is often believed that it makes us buy the products which are not our need, on the other hand, many consider it as a way of updating the customer about the latest product of the company. Has this affected our purchase thinking about an item? I agree it has and the psychological impact and the aesthetic advertising to be the reasons for it.

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People buy a product if it fulfills their needs, there is no need for advertisement. To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?

The importance of the product advertisement which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked controversy over the potential impact in recent years. I can partly agree with the topic statement and describe the reasons in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?

Nowadays, we often see our mailbox flooded with lots of advertisements from multiple organisations promoting their products and I believe that these attractive ads certainly creates an urge to buy the articles. Firstly, we will discuss the impact of this on our buying pattern and secondly, we will elaborate on the ways to safeguard the consumers.

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Violence in the media promotes violence in society to what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, the number of criminality in our surroundings are soaring high. One of the factors that may be pivotal to this condition is the increasing number of platforms that show brutality explicitly. I am personally in line with the aforementioned sentence.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement? What other measures do you think might be effective?

One of the heated issues is growing the cost of car oil is the best direction to solve the problems of increasing traffic and climate pollution. From my perspective, I strongly believe that accumulate the price of gasoline is more advantages than stable cost.

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Taxing Industries, corporates and individuals based on their environmental footprint is the only way to save the environment. Do you agree with the statement? Give your opinion.

Levying cess on various organisations based on their impact on the ecological system is the sole method to control the pollution. I strongly condemn the above-mentioned statement, as it will be an extra burden on the end users, not on corporates. Firstly, we will explain the impact of increasing surcharges on these kinds of industries and secondly, we will elaborate on the ways to minimize the effect of waste on the environment.

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A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The development of healthcare and technologies is providing us with an unprecedented burst of births and is strongly increasing the average life expectancy. In this scenario, both medical evolution and food supply play a prominent role. Despite many people support this view, there is a growing number of individuals that feel that animals should not be exploited to satisfy human needs. In this essay, I will explain why I personally disagree with these latter and think that animal usage is inevitably necessary.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or storage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is commonly believed that having a proper occupation and economic position plays an important role in the satisfaction of people. However, sometimes certain bad situations could happen for each person. While some are of the opinion that in such conditions anyone must try more to improve the situation, others feel quite opposite that you should accept the case. In this essay, both views would be addressed before my opinion is given.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

I partly agree with the statement that nowadays we have a lot of variety. With the growth of capitalist society and rapidly growing business, this is not a surprise, however, with the growing population and already existing billions of people, this choice is, in fact, justified.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

I somewhat agree with the sentiment that living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can have some serious social and perhaps even practical problems. Obviously, due to the modernisation of society and technology, the disdain is much milder than it would have been a century ago.

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Some claim that studying abroad has great benefits for a student’s home country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is commonly believed that being educated and skilled sufficiently plays an important role in life and no one can deny it. However, in recent years, we have witnessed that many students immigrate to developed countries to continue their academic studies. I personally agree that this issue could have useful effects on their homeland.

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In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?

It is commonly believed that affording the necessary goods plays an important role in life and no one can deny it. However, in recent years, we have witnessed that purchasing has become entertainment for the people, as well as being a way of fulfilling their needs. I personally agree with it due to its useful effects.

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People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen. What is your opinion about an ideal society How can we create an ideal society?

The living environment is most important to live in different societies. Most countries are diverse because of different religions people are staying together in the same place, therefore, some people always try to make a nice environment in the colony but sometimes, because of the consequences, they are unable to make it. I will discuss some reasons for this happening and how to remove these problems in the following paragraphs.

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Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socializing online to meeting one another in person. Why do you think this is the case? What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Research findings indicate that adolescents nowadays would rather get together via social networking sites than communicate face-to-face with one another. From my perspective, there exist several reasons behind the aforementioned phenomenon, which could be redeemed by some specific solutions to promote teens to spend less time hanging out online.

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In developing countries, children in rural communities have less access to education. Some people believe that the problem can be solved by providing more schools and teachers, while others think that the problem can be solved by providing computers and Internet access. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

In less developed countries, the lack of educational provision for people in rural areas is a serious problem. While some commentators argue that the problem can be tackled by building more schools and employing more teachers, I believe that installing more computers and widening Internet connection should be the top priority.

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Many people believe that the increasing number of cars in cities is the biggest source of pollution and waste. Others think that industries are the ones causing pollution. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Environmental problems have always been a heated topic since the industrial revolution. A large number of people believe that the rising amount of automobile cause the most pollution and waste while the others think that industries are the biggest source of pollution. In the following paragraph, I will discuss the reasons for both views and conclude with my own opinion.

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Governments should spend more money on education than on recreation and sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In recent years, there has been a heated debate that money should be spent on educational purposes instead of sports and recreation activities. From my perspective, I hold a strong conviction that these aspects are equally important and the expenditure should be evenly distributed to them.

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Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

A certain group of people finds physical activity an option for reaching good health while others state that balancing the daily diet is above all else. Nevertheless, I personally think that the proper way to achieve perfect health characteristics is combining, because in most cases exercise and a balanced diet complement each other resulting in better performance and efficacy.

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