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the city has industrial hub so alot of people migrate from their place to city .there alot of people need ahouse so termendous amount of building are being constructed by builders but it leads to unhealthy life.trees are cutoff and building are constructed caused green revolution
Being of human extinction , there were two kinds of people firstly meat eaters lived in the cooled area,desert areas such as hills ,glacier there was no need for trees,fruits so humans needed to hunt animals for their survival and another lived in tropical region there was sufficient food in the tree so there was no need for hunting,in my opinion being a vegetarian is led to healthier,it's a totally misconsumed by people.
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The above bar chart illustrates the most fascinated takeaways for food in Canada.While the bar chart shows the number of restaurant in Canada in the different years.The bar chart is calibrated in percentage.
In the present age, a social media become the medium of communication. Some people believe that use of these social medias impacting in harmful way to the young people, whereas others believe it is a greate way to build relationships. Personally, I am in favour of the latter view.
Rising the value of combustible is the topmost effective method to dissolve environmental issues, most people believe that the key to solving these difficulties. Personally, I completely agree that not only is decrease ecological disasters, but also it will force us to find a renewable source of energy. Firstly, my essay will illustrate this interest affects our lives and surroundings secondly,we should explore new clean energy resources, in place of using combustion engines.
Nowadays, there is an ongoing debate about the safety of genetically modified products. While food production companies are busy with inventing various genetically engineered products. While seed and agrochemical companies are busy with inventing various genetically modified crops , there is a lack of scientifically proved evidence on environmental and health impact of the latter. Therefore, some people argue that interference to structure of the plants should be restricted. This essay will attempt to agree with this point of view by providing solid reasons.
It is true that parents need information and experience in order to raise their kids in a proper way. In this regard, many families attend different training systems. While I agree that these programs might be useful for some parents, I totally disagree with the recommended obligatory procedure of such training.
Good health is significant for the social, mental and physical development of a person. A lot of folks think that environmental and health friendly way of transport is cycling, yet it's still the unwanted in many nations. I will mention the causes and how to encourage the use of bicycle?, in the following paragraphs.
Online languge translation app have been a popular solfware worldwide.Many people like use it.The frist adventages that can help social connation people to people, languge translation solfware can help to diffrient languge trants it is so convenient in travel of diffrient culture circumstances.Sencondly that can useful for learing,some people who study diffrient languge papers this can let them understand quickly.Trith that can help for bussiness work of some people need meat in forgen custom.But some people do not like it.For example languge translation app can not trants languge means current,some time sofeware has a mistake in transition progress.And have limit you need have techelogy machine like smart phone or cumputer,If you lost machine you can not use that.Concution languge translation sofeware can instand help you languge trants but people need basic languge skill.
somethinks that there are several kinds of crime in our society if we controll them we wil be successful in our life life is so hard of the struggle if we hard whole self and get prepare our own self we can do must if deficency are soo good for the graph if some are which built in 1990 since they travel from long distance as they do are address such of them while most thinks are argue that in1888 most people in us to join police line they cannot controll him self and do crime and crime is the way of circumstances for which individuals crime and the motivations for committing it should always be taken into account when deciding on punishment discuiss both these views and give yours own opinion
The pie chart illustrates the amount of different components present in the daily intake food of people in USA. In this analysis four types of meals has been taken into account such as breakfast, lunch, snacks and dinner.
Nowadays it is argued about dominant target of government investment. Some states that investment in the arts compared to in public service is a waste of money. I strongly disagree that government should stop investing in the arts. Financial support for arts is vitally important because it helps to evolve cultural life for citizens and makes it affordable for everyone.
A plenty of individuals put their valuable data on internet for various objective.In may opinion, it might be benificial for people because they can easily do their work by seating at home.Though it has some detrimental effect on our social and personal life.
The map depicts changes to a park between 1980 and today. Looking at the park as a whole, it is clear that it has been more developed for tourists, with more recreational space for outdoor eating, seating, and playing. The sole omission concerns the flowers. There was two way entrence on the west and south side and a pond surrounded by three benches in 1980. But now, The gate is no longer there, the path is less straight, and there are additional benches around the pond. There are two additional roads coming from the top and right of the diagram, which separate a space with trees, chairs, desks, and barbeque possibilities (previously only containing trees). A playground has taken the place of a flowerbed in the bottom right corner of the map. A second flower bed on the bottom left of the pond has been replaced with wild shrub.
Nowadays smoking are becoming more popular in each country, especially in public places and I think that it is all to the detriment.
In this competitive ,world every single person is rushing for success in their life. For ,that some people are running for a university degree while others think gaining work experience after high school is better for a good career. However, both have their own roles in a successful career along with hard work, but leading work just after high school is not a great idea. Moreover, let's understand both perspectives in the following paragraphs.
On the first hand we have safely transport, which practice by humanity many years and which transformation from early rank our history, history of first people on Earth, because we want to ride speedily and want to transfer even more things and only car can use for these goals. On the other hand four wheels is banal and your brain craves more extreme, more knifelike feels, which never happened with cars, therefore we has constructed motorcycle.
When I arrived in Moscow I immediately needed some money to pay my rent and I got hired by Yandex as a technical support worker. They needed someone who had a a good level of English and hence I had to help people who lived in the west till 5AM (Moscow time). I left this job after 2 months since it paid me really low wages and didn’t want to scruff my sleep for it. But, I’m totally fine if I work night shifts in your company since I consider this job opportunity as a really good one.
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