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School should not force children to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree with the statemen.

It is true that some parents and teachers try to force children to learn foreign language. Because they know that it is difficult to work without a foreign language in today's life. In this essay, I will examine how this is true
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Leaders have the authority to make decisions, what do you think about that?

the bar chart illustrates the outcome of a survey in four european countries on the best way to combat global warming.
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The flowchart illustrates the production of coloured plastic paper clips in a small factory. Write a report for a university tutor describing the production process.

The flowchart depicts the process of production colored plastic paper clips. Overall, it is clear the process that manufacture these clips in this factory undergoes in fourth steps.
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It is cruel to keep animals in zoos. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

First of all in the world there are many animals locked up in zoos, it was controversy for many years, we should ask all ask ourselves to solve this problem.
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Success is only a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Depend on the suveral pepole and culture and relegion luck it has defrint consepts. I think the luck it's an execuse for failur.
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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. do you agree or disagree?

Humans will lack job opportunities taken over by artificially intelligent robots in the coming age. while heavy computation jobs shall be done by robots, jobs which require personal Interaction will still require humans to handle them. This essay will discuss why most of the jobs in future will be carried out by artificially intelligent robots.
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Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

Some people believe that games or movies or TV programa wich have violence or blood, or sexual scenes they are not good for children and their upbringing, also people who say that these kind of games or movies are better or more realistic
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many people believe that zoos have no purpose in today's world and should be closed. What problems do zoos bring? What are the alternatives to zoos if they are closed?

In the past, animal park is a good alternative place for children to see the nearly extinction or abroad spicies and let's organization gain a lot of profit, however ,at the present, a little bit of benefit is unequal comparing with animals's right that taken by man kind.
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It is cruel to keep animals in zoos. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is animals are living creatures that need their own space, most of teen have an specific place to can survive For example the lion needs to live in the savanna beacuse of some many characteristics of the place like the temperature, the food ,if you can say it like this, the lion needs to know how to survive by itself and for this he needs, the lion needs to know how to survive by itself and for this he needs to know about hunting,also know its habitat for learn where to get food and water or where can be dangerous or far from home.-And it's the same case in some others so my conclusion is that keep animals in a zoo it's cruel.
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n some countries it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old, while in others they do not have to start until they are seven or eight. How far do you agree with either of these views?

This pie and bar chart provide the percentage of women in poverty and rates of teh poverty by gender and age in USA in 2008. Overall, it can be seen that single women with no dependent children was the majority of the women in poverty, while married women with no denpendent children was the minority of poverty.
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The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compare to the past due to advanced technologies which can prevent and solve crime. Do you agree or disagree?

On comparing to the past time these days advanced technology has played a massive role in lowering the crime rate.There is a thought that says technical sources have helped a lot to control and eliminate crime.This essay will argue how technology has an absolute-counter effect on criminal activities.
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Some people have the same type of job throughout their life while others prefer to change the type of job. What’s your opinion

I graduated with a bachelor's degree in Teaching English as a foreign language from Azad university. I am currently studying for a master's degree in TEFL.
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goverenment should spend more money on education that on recration and sports. do you agree or disagree

The following table presents the sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffees and bananas in five different European countries over two different years that are five years apart (1999 & 2004).
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Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or dissagree?

Education is very crucial in this competitive era while it is believed by some individuals that from schools to universities, people consider theory more than practical skills. I partially agree with this phenomenon and the most specific reasons will be elaborated on in the forthcoming paragraphs.
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Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

I would think virtual classes are taking over the academy by storm, it is doing it by having a lot of perks with this online classes, on the other hand, tradiational education are the root of all sources that we are having in Information age, which can't be replaced by any means. we will discuss the both assessment with in the below essay.
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the plans below show the layout of a university's sport centre now and how it will look after redevelopment. summorise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

the given pardigam illustrate the current plan of university sport centre. Meanwhile dramatical upgradation in sport facility in advance.
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There should be a complete ban for advertising. So that we can benefit from its negative effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The advertisement is a part of communication which we can access the product that we are interested in. Some of the might think that a ban of advertising can be helpful. In contrast, there are many reason why we should not ban the adverstisement. From my perspectives, I disagree about this and I will explain this topic as below.
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People watch foreign films much more than locally produced films. Why? Should government fund local film industries?

True foreign films are watched much more than local produced film. I think the reason this is local films are don't interesting a lot of people, therefore they prefer foreign films. Firstly, local films are very a low-budget films and they have poor quality. In addition, in my country local films are prefer only by older people because they are interested and for them, this is a valid perspective. In my view, foreign films are more interesting young people, and the reason this is that many young people watched foreign films because they want to know more the language and for them it is understandable, than local films.
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Children today spend a lot of time on social media. What potential problems could it cause and how would they be addressed.

Social media plays an important role in today's world. People of all ages spend a considerable amount of time using social media sites. Social media is used as a source of news, entertainment and gossip. Therefore many people use social media regularly and the use of social media is increasing especially among children. Some argue that using social media is beneficial for children while others claim that it harms children. I personally believe that social media is harmful to children because it might lead to health problems and it contains inappropriate content.
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Would you prefer to live in a traditional house or in a modern apartment building? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.

Nowadays, many people are staying in either traditional residences or modern apartment residences. The way people choose their residence may be from many factors. I will illustrate both reasons why choose a specific type of residence.
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