IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 757

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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For many, shopping malls are great places to spend their leisure time and meet others.people however in the past mostly visited those when necessary . To what extent do you thing this is a negative trend?

Nowadays, shopping malls are just like an amusement park where people meet their friends and relatives.They become the best place to timepass apart from the shopping.It is very much true people visited these places before when they felt a particular need which could not be satisfied with outside shops. I am completely denied that it is a negative trend.

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Modern technology is changing our world. This has advantages such as bringing people closer together through communication. It also has disadvantages such as destroying the differences between cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

With the advent of newer technologies in the field of communication, people could come under one umbrella. It is adversely affected to some of the communities by mixing up of different cultures to form a new one. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the above mentioned statement.

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In order to imporove the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticise their teachers, but other think it will result in loss of respect and discipline in classroom. What your opinion ?

Some people think that to ensure the high quality of education, students should be encouraged to assess and criticise their teachers' performance while others claim that this activity is conducive to the disappearance of respect and discipline in classroom. I partly agree with the former idea for the following reasons.

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many students take partime jobs while studying in university , you think it’s a good idea or bad idea.

In my view, it is really a good idea to partially work while studying in university. Being at work, makes you more active to manage your finances, in a better way. Analysis shows that students working tend to behave responsibly, are disciplined and value their time. They even understand the importance of money being spent on pursuing higher studies. College studies are expensive throughout the world and parents sometimes feel buried off, paying the same. Being an adult , it will be wiser if kids learnt to start sharing the load.

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Coins and paper money will soon be replaced by credit and bank cards. Eventually we will have a cashless society which will be safer and more convenient for everyone. Do you agree or disagree

Throughout the ages, the paper cash and coins were consider the main exchange between people.

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Some people prefer to directly help people who need it in the local community; however, others prefer to give money to the national or international charities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is usually happened that few amount of nation think that directly Hill is better that Who need it on the other hand a group of community like to send their money to the international charity

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What are the benefits and drawbacks of immigration or multi-cultural societies?

It is obvious that even developed countries also face their problems, which have not been solved now and then, such as violence, drugs, etc… including population. One of the reasons, which make population rates skyrocketed increasing, is immigration. However, in some aspects, immigration is not one of the negative issues. In some countries, for example, in the USA, immigration is one of the fundamental building blocks that help make America the unique nation that it is. From my point of view, immigration or multi-cultural societies have benefits and drawbacks.

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Use of internet for shopping and information – Advantages and disadvantages

In this modern era, usage of internet bloomed unimaginable. People’s lifestyle has taken a different dimension of growth, specifically in shopping and knowing details around them. Extensive use of website and mobile application has undoubtedly brought immense growth but also accompanied with certain disadvantages.

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Having a good university degree guarantees people a good job. To what extent do you agree?

I have completed under-graduation and graduation in Economics from the Shahjalal University of Science & Technology Sylhet, Bangladesh. Bangladesh is a labour-intensive country and has a high source of income in the RMG sector and FDI. Along with that, we have natural resources like gas and coil. Bangladesh is heading towards Middle Income Country state from Least Developed Country. However, the lack of efficient plans, proper nurture of innovative business and economic ideas, and policies are the barriers for the economy to reach the optimum level. To work on the economic growth of Bangladesh, I become passionate to have my higher studies in abroad.

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Many people join distance‐learning programs (study material, post, TV, Internet) and study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefit as attending colleges or universities does. Do you agree or disagree?

Online education had brought significant changes to our life in recent days.people spends most of their time not only in playing games ,surfing the things but also some people enroll for online education and use their timeffectively.However,some people think it's not an effective way than traditional systems like universities or colleges. This essay will discuss the benefit of distance learning program with supported examples.

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A country becomes more interesting and develops more quickly when its population includes a mixture of nationalities To what extent do you agree or disagree

Country development is a important factor, if we grow up our country it is giving benefiest to all people which is living in the country. Mixture of population in the one country is give quick growth as well as interesting life. This eassy will discuss on how different culture of people gives development growth and to give changes on people life.

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People tend to work longer hours nowadays. Working long hours has a negative effect on themselves, their families and the society, so working hours should be restricted. Do you agree or disagree?

In today's society, more and more workers extended hours for working and that brings too much effected on themselves , their families and the communities. I totally agree that hours working should be limited.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

it has become apparent in recent years that beginning to teach an international language at the elementary school is more efficient than at the middle school. is an issue that great amount of specialists feel strongly about. For me it is obvious that starting learning from the younger age allows more opportunities as the several benefits of yearly years. The arguments both supporting and contradicting will be evaluated in this essay.

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Today's teenagers have more stressful lives than previous generations.

Stress is the way the body responds to a challenge and prepares to meet a tough position with focus, strength, determination, and heightened strength. Stress among teenagers has grown rapidly in the past century.

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The impact that growing demand for more flights has had on the environment is a major concern for the many countries. Some people feel that one way to limt the number of people traveling by air is to increase tax on flights

With the advancement of technology, air travel has been introduced for the comfort of people, it is a very convenient mode of transportation but increasing demand for flights is having a serious impact on environment and it is a major issue for many nations. Some individuals feel that rise in tax on air travelling is best solution to reduce the number of passengers. But I am in favour this statement, and many other solutions to this problem will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs. ...

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Artificial Intelligence will soon replace teachers in the classroom. Do you agree with this statement?

Artificial intelligence plays a significant role in the new tech world. I totally agree with The statement that, soon robotics will replace teachers in the classroom. With the examples I can mention that. Through automation will make a dramatic changes in all areas especially in robotics. They can easily do all the activities that a man does. Even they can talk, smell, and anything that a normal man can do. For example, one of the robot named Ms. Sophia is very knowledgeable and by seeing her performance Saudi Gvt has awarded Saudi Citizenship to her. She takes webinar classes to students in most of the universities. Nowadays robotics, automation is widely used in phone Mobile companies. By the use of Robotics, we can easily identify the names of unknown plants, animals, birds etc., For teaching purposes we can use Robotics automation. Now all the classrooms are changing to SMART rooms. The conventional teaching methods changed to new technological methods. There is...

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Online education and training is becoming increasing popular in business world. Do the advantage of this outweigh the disadvantage

The given two maps illustrate the possible access road to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. The initial difference between the two maps is that roundabouts are added.

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Education is the single most important factor in the development of a country do you agree.

Advancement of a country is not totally relying on education, according to my book of thoughts education take part in the development of a nation partials, because there are numerous factors in the process of development.

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Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they released from prison. What do you think are the causes for this? What possible solutions can you suggest?

In this concurrent world, it is undeniably true that offense is one of the major problem of all over the universe. Myriad number of covict who try to do crimes again when they discharged from gaol. This essay shall examine the root of this causes of the circumstances and solution as well.

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Present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults coma compared with the number of older people does the advantage of this situation outweigh the disadvantages.

It is a true fact that teenagers are relatively large in comparison for senior citizens in this I will discuss positive and negative and how it will be helpful for everyone.

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