IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 879

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio- diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?

Despite knowing about biodiversity’s

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What are the advantages and disadvantages of using internet?

Nowadays, most of the people using internet through computer, mobile phone and laptop. Internet is the part of daily life. As we understand there are lots of positive side, while using internet but there are some negative side as well. In this essay we will discuss about the usage of internet.

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People who live in large cities face a range of problems in their daily life. What are the main problems people in cities face, and how can these problems be tackled?

Nowadays many people prefer to live in big cities due to better infrastructure and amenities. Movement of people from rural to urban area has drastically increased in the past few years, which has made the city life a host of several problems for its residents. In this essay, I will discuss some problems of urban life and propose solutions.

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In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays young people are not into reading newspaper or listening news on TV. I agree to the point as per my opinion young people are more into other activites like playing games, hanging out with friends, and watching movies etc.

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Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

As a human we are greedy and want to live forever. Inspite of all the modern medical advancements we are no where near to that goal. Currently there is a trend of more advanced form of medicine which in my opinion are risky and ineffective.

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International marketing is sometimes seen as invasive and an intrusion into the country in question. Others argue that it is a necessary and economical form of education in addition to spreading ideas, language and culture. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Type up your answer and try to write it in 40 minutes to reflect true exam conditions. This way I can get a real idea regarding your level and what action we should take.

People have recently been arguing about international marketing overstepping in some countries while many think its an essential part for the exchange of ideas, and different diversities. In my opinion it is the best boost not only for economic transfers but also for thoughts and cultures.

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In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

The night can be dangerous given that it may provide propitious tools to people to commit certain crimes. Because of this, in some places of the US, youngsters are only allowed to walk at night if accompanied by an adult. I do not agree that this type of 'curfew' is the best option to handle this situation. This essay will discuss why it is not the best option. Firstly, the main issue about requiring teenagers to only walk at night with adults is the privacy. Like everybody else, teenagers have their own needs and desires. Based on this, sometimes, they may just want to go out at night to talk with a friend, date, or even think and decide something. Some of these activities should be realized alone, given that an adult can not contribute or advise in these situations. Moreover, an adult in these cases can only make things worse, since the youngster may feel ashamed of the awkward situation. Therefore, when one imposes such a 'curfew' limiting them to only walk at night acco...

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Today more peoples are travelling than ever before.Why is this the case?What are the benefits of travelling for teh travellers ?

In today's era,peoples want to go with some place where they never went before and want to explore more places on this earth. That's why travelling become some popular topic and become passion to everyone. In this essay, I will explain why travelling is increased as compared to earlier and its benefits.

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Individuals and countries cannot help everyone who needs help in the world, so they should only be concerned about their own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is generally agreed that poor people in the world cannot be supported by world communities and simple citizens. Instead of this, people and their governments should protect and increase living standards of their communities. This essay disagrees with that suggestion partially but supports the idea that countries and individuals should protect poor part of their community. This essay will first look at how countries can impact poor nations by help of international organizations and then, ...

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It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers . Therefore, physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools. What do you think ? Give reason to your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge and experience.

It is rightly said 'Health is wealth. ' A healthy body and a sound mind strikes a perfect balance in an individual's life . Physical education and sports should be mandatory in the curriculum. It enhances various aspects of an individual.

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Now, people spend less and less time at home. What are the causes? What are the effects on individual and society?

Undeniably, the present scenario witnesses meager presence of folks at home. This is probably due to the work load and targets one has to accomplish, and the other plausible cause is that masses like to detach themselves by partying or by just being with the pals. Pernicious implications are gauged on the person and the whole community.

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Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports. Why is it? Is it a positive or negative development.

Nowadays, a great number of children waste their time playing games, just a small deal of their time is used to play sports. From the point view of mine, this is not a positive way for children to develop.

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It is common aspiration among many young peopleto run their own business, rather than work for an employer. Do you think the advantages of working for yourself outweigh the drawbacks?

Earlier people used to prefer to work for an organization throughout their lives and retired from there after a lifetime service. But thesedays, trend has changed,. Usually, young people aim to start their own set up no metter small or big. So that, to avoid being on someone lurch. I agree with this point of view, in this way, they take several bold steps and bear both pros and cons. In this essay, i will discuss the merits and demerits to start a business.

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Education, from preschool through university, should be paid for by the government and therefore free to students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education is becoming very expensive nowadays and there is a debate among people whether government should provide completely free education or not. I strongly believe that education should be available to everyone for free of cost.

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Some people believe that schools should group their pupils according to academic ability. Others believe students should be grouped together regardless of academic ability. Write an essay supporting one side of this debate.

There is no doubt that teaching methods vary from one educational institution to another. However, some people think that streaming is very beneficial for students' academic progress, while others oppose this view and prefer classes to be formed spontaneously. In this essay, I will explain my support to the latter view, with examples. Firstly, sorting Students on the base of their marks and learning abilities may have a negative impact on students who are ranked to be at a lower level than others. In other words, pupils donut like to be seen less intelligent than their fellows. Therefore, such action can injure their feelings and dignity, and create a sense of envy among students. My nefew, for example, has suffered from this Strategy after being s aparated with a number of his mates because of their poor performance in exams. Not only this made him feel shame and destroyed his self - esteem but also he was bullied by ether students for being Stupid, as they dese...

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Some people say taxes should be spent on health care. Other people say that there more important priorities for the tax-payers’ money. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

On the one hand, prioritizing health care could bring great benefits. Firstly, the health system these days almost cost people an arm and leg which makes it hard to access good health assistance. As a result, some individuals looked for alternative medicine which is a lot cheaper; however, it does not have proven therapeutic claims, unlikely sometimes; caused worsening of their health condition. Another reason is that, some remote areas still do not have decent hospitals. To illustrate, som...

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An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for individual and companies to shopping online?

Today, the world is transforming in different way. one of the rising sector in which affect dynamic changes in our society and economic system-most commonly in the sector of IT (information technology) it's enchance the capabality to buy a product without moving at home. online shopping is started grip in the market and people make it mind to get easy. In Pakistan mostly woman, children and people especially they don't travel easly in market due to some reson (old age, transpotanction).

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Because of the busy pace of modern life, many children spend most of their time indoors and have little exposure to the natural world. How important is it for children to learn to understand and appreciate nature? Give reasons for your answer.

Nowadays, there are plethora of new technologies have emerged and it has both fruitful and bad effect on many children. They spend most of their time indoorsand have little contribution to the natural world because technology have developed at a great extent and new attractive things have came by which they have addicted and spend most time in their homes and do not come outside by which they have overwhelming effects on everything.

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Employers should give longer holidays to employees to encourage them to do their job well. Do you agree?

These days, even though people are busy with work, vaccation has immense importance. Some argue that employers should give longer holidays to employees to motive them in working. I strongly agree with the above statement.

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In developing countries growing population is a significant problem should government provide new homes in cities or countries?

In this present era, population have been increasing, which creates a lot of problems in developing countries. Providing adequate shelter to the blooming generation is a major concern of the government. Nevertheless, this essay will examine which is the better place to build new shelters, whether in the urban or rural area. I personally believe the countryside is the best option.

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