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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people believe that unpaid community services should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A debatable topic is whether free social services should be enforced as part of high school curriculum, I would agree that implementing unpaid services as part of high school activities will encourage students in developing unknown skills and aid to reduce youthful deliquescy

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Some people believe that unpaid community services should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A debatable topic is whether free social services should be enforced as part of high school curriculum, I would agree that implementing unpaid community services as part of students work will encourage students in developing unknown skills and aid to reduce youthful deliquescy

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Some people think that history has little or nothing to tell us but some people think that studying the past history can help us understand the present better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is a debated issue whether history has been useful to mankind or has little or nothing to tell us. These two arguments will be delved into in this eassy and my own opinion given.

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university students are increasingly studying abroad as a part of their studies. what are the advantages and disadvantages?

The students at universities are increasing for student exchange programme as a part of their degrees. Although, students find it difficult to cope with new environment and new methods of learning while abroad, they will gain deep knowledge in their subject and that will reward them in the future of their careers. In my opinion, students studying abroad will have more chance to explore and can master in what they do. Therefore, advantages outweighs the disadvantages.

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some people prefer to shop for food in supermarket , other people prefer to do food shopping online ? DIscuss both views and give your opinion

Recently, many supermarket stores introduced online food shopping for their customers. Some people like to buy food products in supermarket while others prefer to do online shopping. This essay will discuss both sides of argument in details and provide evidence as to why traditional food shopping is superior.

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It is necessary for parents to attend parenting training course to bring their children up. Do you agree or disagree?

We see the dramatic changes in the service oriented businesses these days. Several coachings in the parental care arena have sprouted up from nowhere and proved to be a successful business model. Parents are both enthusiastic as well as skeptical about its utility. This essay will examine the contesting arguments to arrive at some conclusion.

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Many people try to look younger than their age. What are the reasons people do this? Do you think this is a good thing or a bad thing?

Nowdays, the latest procedure that seems to be trending majorly in countries is plastic surgery. People want to look younger than their actual age. This is predominant in the western countries and is slowly emerging in other countries as well.

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The private motor vehicle has greatly improved individual freedom of movement. Moreover, it has become a status symbol. Its use, though, has impacted negatively on city centres as a whole. What are some serious problems brought about by private motor vehicle use? How can its use be reduced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Flexibility and comfortness of travel has become easy by having a own car or bike and it can reveal the economic status of the people.This contributes to the increased use of own vehicles and creates some problems on city. In this essay I will explain about the problems caused by this and some suggestions to reduce the problems.

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The crime rates now-a-days is decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime. Do you agree or disagree?

Crime is one of the many issues which our society is constantly trying to eradicate. But with the growing technology, the speculation is that it can be reduced considerably. According to my opinion, technologies are helping us to fight the crime and to reduce its number.

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e-Books are completely taking over paper-based books. University libraries should focus on e-books only instead of paper-based books. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your opinion.

Nowadays, electronic reading materials are gaining a lot of popularity among teenagers as well as adults. Some argue that university libraries should focus more on e-books rather than paper-based books. This has both advantages and disadvantages and I believe that advantages outweigh.

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stress-related illnesses are becoming increasingly common. what do you think are the causes of this? what solutions can you suggest?

Stress is one of the major issues that are facing by the people. This has become increasingly common. This essay will discuss the main causes of stress related issues including longer working hours and increased job pressure. This essay will also suggest solutions to these problems, including improving one's work-life balance and healthy diet. Now a days, stress is one of the major issues that are facing by the people. This has become increasingly common. This essay will discuss the main causes of stress-related issues including longer working hours and increased job pressure. This essay will also suggest solutions to these problems including improving one's work-life balance and healthy diet. There are many causes for this issue : One of the main reason is that longer working hours and the others include increase in job pressure. People often want to climb high and wants to achieve more at an young age. As a result, they are working more hours than usual which is not the...

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stress-related illnesses are becoming increasingly common. what do you think are the causes of this? what solutions can you suggest?

Now a days, stress is one of the major issues that are facing by the people. This

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Smacking children is the best form of discipline. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, controlling the children is very difficult. Many parents

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree with the opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

It is highly necessary for wards to learn between doing good or bad from a very tender age. Hence, discipling a child is therefore needed to help them learn this difference. This essay will agree that punishing will help correct the child. This essay will discuss that verbal correction and grounding the child can be used by both the folks and tutor of the ward.

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In today’s society, both Western medicine and traditional, complementary forms of medicines are now widely known and used. The effectiveness oft kinds of treatment is determined by the patient's mental attitude towards it.

Nowadays people are well aware of modern medicine and traditional medicine such as ayurveda and accupunture. The mental approach of the patient decides the effectiveness of both the medicines. I partially agree to this and in this essay will explain reasons why effectiveness depends on proper treatment rather than patient's mindset.

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Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at schools while others think it is a waste of time. Disscuss both sides and give your opinion.

It's argued that Art should be mandadory for children at educational institutes. Against this ideia, There are some who claim that it would be waste of time. This essays is going to disscuss both ideias and choose which one is more resonable.

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Figures show that some countries have an ever-increasing proportion of the population who are aged 15 or younger. What do you think are the current and future effects of this trend for those countries?

Some demographic surveys have shown that the proportions of young people are rising rapidly. This may be because of any reasons such as illiteracy and poverty or wars or any other reasons. This essay shall delve into the immediate and long term effects of this trend on those countries. The most important current impact of such a trend would be on the national economy. For instance, goods and services would need to be imported which would lead to an unstable economy. However, the future effect would be different as there would be more people within the country needing employment. Then there might arise the problem of unemployment. In addition to the effects on economy, there would be social implications also. The government will have to invest a lot on educational institutes as more children need more schools and colleges. In addition more spending on health would also be needed. The long term result would be that the education and health infrastructure would be well deve...

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Some children can leran more efficiently by watching t.v. therefore ,children should watching T.v regularly both in school and at home ? do you agree or not ?

Education is an endless process that has been changed over time. Being providing visual studies become part of the study on a regular basis, could be detrimental for their development. I believe that the notion to teach students with the traditional method.

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More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern life style which cannot be treated with modern medicines. Some people think that a return to traditional medicines should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree?

Today’s diet consumption is affecting humans in terms of health and this number is increasing day by day and also, the solution is not coming from these scientific pills. It is believed by some individuals that traditional medicines should be allowed to cure patients. I completely disagree because old-style medicines are not manufactured with proper care and their action of curing is slow as compared with modern tablets. Herbal medicines needs time to cure the patient from diseases. The pace of killing infections is quite slow as linked with modern medicines and sometimes it cost the life of an individual. Which makes the situation worsen, thus consuming such medicine is not full proof of improving health in a timely manner. For instance, homeopathy medicines require 1 week to control the nasal infections such as common cold as compare with modern medicines which require only one day. Traditional medicines are not prepared in scientific manner besides bringing them back for the tr...

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The planet's population is reaching unsustainable levels, and people are facing shortage of resources like water, food and fuel. To what consequences may overpopulation lead? In your opinion, what measures can be taken to fight overpopulation?

Nowadays, Population increase is the major issue in most of the countries. It not only creates scarcity in daily needs, but also effects in other ways. We shall look into those in the remaining part.

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