IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 888

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some countries spend a lot of money to make bicycle usage easier. why is this? Is this the best solution to traffic congestion?

Before the invention of motor vehicles, there was only one mode to commute which we call it as bicycle. It was invented back in 19th century by a german civilian named Baron Carl. It took not long enough to invent motor vehicles or say cars. Since then people are more facinated about motor vehicle not just because it is faster but also because it is more comfortable and needs less struggle to operate. As the time passed, the advancement took place one after the other and bicycle was taken o...

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Present an argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic: Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?

As we know, each country is growing rapidly, and competition among them are increasing day by day. Every country wants to be in a superior place and wants to be powerful in every stage. I strongly agree that it is the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves and wealthy nations should not share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education because it starts the feeling of dependency in the citizens of poor...

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If countries are serious about solving traffic problems, they should tax private cars heavily and use the money to provide free or very cheap rail travel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Private cars should be taxed seriously, if nations want to really solve traffic issues. Funds generated from this should be used to provide affordable alternative such as rail. I strongly agree with this notion because firstly, rail transport can covary more commuters at once. secondly, the maintenance is cheaper and affordable.

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Although family is a powerful influence on child's life, it is also influenced from outside the home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is irrefutable that family has an enormous influence on the life of a child but at the same time they also draw inspiration from impacts happening outside of their abodes. Therefore, I completely agree with this Statement.

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In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

A number of youngsters all over the world have become less much attentive to update news reported on newspapers and TV. The main roots of this issue lies in the rise of the Internet, which will be discussed in more details below with suggested solutions.

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Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The discussion of whether young people nowadays should be taught to be good parents and what skills needed to be ones will be presented as below.

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These days, cell (mobile) phones and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

It is rare these days to find someone who does not use the cell phone or the internet to react other other. Although, the broad using of these technology, I believe that the drawback of this development outweigh their benefits.

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Deforestation is one of the major human activities that has posed more danger in our environment and this has been on an increase globally. In this essay, I'm going to discuss two major reasons why it happens and it's benefits.

Firstly, trees are being cut down for commercial purposes. They are major raw material for manufacturing furniture, produce paper and for making cooking utensils. When the trees are cut, they pass through several processes and sold in exchange of money, goods and services. For example, 4.2% of the internally generated revenues in Nigeria are from wood exports.

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For a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world. However, nowadays people’s values have changed, and we tend to consider science, technology and business more important than arts. What do you think are the causes of this? What can be done to draw people’s attention to art?

Art is a self-driven skill that is built from inside the person and is born by nature but not by someone's promptness or suggestions. It is an inbuilt talent hidden in an individual and will come out after proper nurturing or exhibiting the such. Inecome a recent World, this is not much preferred as an essential tool but only as a side activity for time pass tool. Nevertheless, it has become an entertainment or passion rather than a compulsory path to livelihood.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do with me or disagree with this opinion.

It is universally accepted that music is the food to the soul,however people are divided in their opinion as regards the acceptability of music amongst different culture in the world today,in what ways does music binds the human race together?this essay will agrue the part played by music in the world today.

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Each year, the crime rate increases. What do you think are the causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?

Statistical study has shown a steep rise in crime rate because of a number of reasons. This essay will dive into the causes and will suggest solutions to counter such problems in future.

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Some people say parents should limit the hours of watching TV and playing computer games of their children, but instead encourage them to read books.Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays people give their children the liberty to live their lives on their own terms. Parents do not wish to restrict their children, but children require some guidance from elders from time to time.

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some people believe that now a days we have too many choices. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Despite of great advances being made in the science and technolohy, their credibility in broadening the horizon of opportunities for human is still controversial. There are several who opine that, a man now has a lot more options available to him than the man in old times. I personally agree with the idea, and I believ, changes in the transport, telebusiness and better health facilities are of paramount importance in this regard.

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Some students take a year off between school and University to work or travel. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

A lot of students usually travel or work for one year before entering the higher institution. While this has several benefits and drawbacks,in my opinion the drawbacks far exceed the merits.

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In many Countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of Crime? How can we deal with those causes? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the current scenario, where the economies are blooming at the rapid pace, the crime is also evolving at alarming rate. As, there are umpteen contributing factors that lead to the crime expansion, there are multifarious solutions to this rising issue.

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Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?

All parents across the world, want their children to be free of illness and diseases. But with, change in environment and food habits, new diseases have been identified. Modern healthcare has also introduced drugs, immunization doses to fight such problems. Today, we are blessed with the invention of many vaccines that can protect children against many common health problems and diseases.

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In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour, while in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want. To what extent should children have to follow rules?

Children are the future of the nation and thus it is the nation’s duty and responsibility along with the parents to nurture them properly and in a good way. This will also include making rules and regulations by the country. Though some countries are way too lenient, some countries put up strict rules for behavior. In this essay, I will be discussing about that too which extent the rules should strict the children behavior.

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Some working parents think that childcare centres provide the best care for children who are still too young to go to school. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their children. Discuss both views and give your opinion

These days both parents work to cover all life expenses leads to some of them to send their children who are in pre-school age to childcare center to recive a better level of care .On other hand, parents prefer to leave their children with grandparents to get best career.Personally, i would argue that the best choice is to send the kids to childcare centers.

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Very few school children learn about the value of money and how to look after it, yet this is a critical life skill that should be taught as part of the school curriculum. Do you agree or disagree?

Some school kids are taught monetary value and how to take special care of it, however, it is a major life skill that should be included in the school’s curriculum and taught. This essay agrees that monetary value should be included in schools curriculum and taught as well because of its importance. In my opinion, teaching school kids monetary value will make them more responsible and also learn how to make money rather than been spoon fed. Firstly, responsibility...

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Compare the percentages of travelers to go to work in a country in Europe

The bar chart gives information the proportion of commuters go to work in a Europe country by four types of transports such as bus, car, bike, and on foot in the year 1950, 1970 and 1990.

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