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More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The increasing number of people who had made their minds to postbone to have children than previous generations had became so due to the increasing pressure of work loads that corperations lay on them as employees. Of course, to raise a child with better financial conditions is an obvious advantage, but that’s not going to win the wisle aginst the greedy desire of wanting for more, which is a human nature.
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some people think that only way to judge someone's success in business is by the amount of money they make. Is money a true indicator of success of a business? In what other ways could success in a business be measured?

It is believed by some people that people's success in business is always measued in terms of how much money they earned. In my opinion, money is the most valuable indicator of success of a business. There are many ways taken in to account to determine the success of business. This essay will delve in to these aspects with relevent examples to support my view.
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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The nurturing style of a child is a question to ponder for ages. Some argue that parents are responsible to shape children to be a responsible member of a community while other position school as the right institution to teach this. This essay discusses both the schools of arguments, however, I firmly believe the former as the valid stand.
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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

I would say that I agree with that moving in a different country definetly woudl happen to various problems inculding serious ones. I would like to explain reasons through my experience.
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Women should have an equal role alongside men in both police and armed forces. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

The number of women who would like to participate in both police and armed forces is increasingly in the last few years. While some people think that women are not suitable for both police and armed force, I believe that their role in these sectors is crucial.
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As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well being. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction?

A major contributor to an individual's health is having a fulfilling job. Nowadays, most people spend majority of their time at work. This essay will discuss the things that bring about career fulfillment and the realism of job satisfaction for employees.
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Nowadays we see an increase in social problems involving teenagers. Many believe that it is because parents spend more time at work and less with their children. Do you agree or disagree

The nuclear family is much different from that was in the past. There is a significant decrease in the number of time parents allocate to their children. Many people argue this would have a negative correlation with juvenile social abnormalities. This will be proven by looking at how the absence of dual-income parents leads to anxiety as well as detrimental to mind welfare for their offspring.
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Given high unemployment rate it is recommended that the government only provide primary education and no Secondary Education what do you think?

Whilst, some people argue that the authority should provide primary education and no Secondary Education. however, it is increase unemployment percentage. I firmly disagree with the statement presented, I elucidate my stand and the following paragraphs.
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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.
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In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years, newspapers have almost became extinct. Even the news channels on the televisions have seen a constant decline in their list of subscribers. This is mainly because they fail to attract the attention of the younger generation audience. This is happening in many countries and there are a lot of factors that can be held responsible for it. However, all is not lost and the situation can be improved by making minor changes.
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Caring For Children is very important for our society. therefore all mothers and fathers should take childcare training course. To what extent you agree or disagree?

Parenting is a very difficult job and it is of utmost important to perform this job assiduously. Since, children's are the future of a nation, therefore people have lot of aspirations from them. So, to make them a good human being it is very necessary to inculcate high moral values and ethics at their early age. As all of this is a part of child care, some people think that the child care training should be imperative for all mothers and fathers. In my opinion, I agree partially with this n...
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Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give your own opinion and examples based on your experience.

According to some, nowadays smartphone is the best way to watch films as compared to going to cinemas for watching movies. while some others hold the view that cinema is the only place were films can be enjoyed with full enthusiasm. I believe that both are positive on their sides.
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some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language . discuss both these views and give your own opinion

The reasons for learning a foreign language is debatibale . people often claim that learning another language is to go abroad or to get a job.while while some people feel that learning a foreign language these are not the only reasons to study a foreign language .
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In some countries, government are encouraging industries and business to move to regional areas outside the big cities. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages.

Government in certain countries persuade firms and commercial companies to establish more in the suburbs. For some reasons, I would argue that the benefits of this are more than the drawbacks.
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Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

By rapid industrialization and augmentation of societies, people are under stress and strain and children are not except from this paradigm. They are under pressure from diverse views, for instance education, society also commercial issues. There seem to be two root causes involved for this kind of pressures, and variety of methods should be thought through to decline them, which we will discuss here succinctly.
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Nowadays, many people have to work longer time, and they feel more stressful than before. what are the reason? What can employers do to make their life easier?

To begin, loneliness is the most crucial element of the vicious cycle of tension. As the person has to stay in the organization till late evening hours in order to avail the basic amenities of life, so they get socially cutoff from the family members, relatives and friends also. Moreover, the people who have migrated from the hometown, rarely get the chance to visit the countryside, not even for any occasion in the family.To illustrate, one of the recent study conducted by nursing students...
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Some people claim that there are more disadvantages of the car than its advantages. Do you agree or disagree? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a car.

In our lives, we travel from one place to another for a great variety of reasons and while travelling we greatly depend on cars, whether it is a private car or a public bus. The number of car owners is increasing every day because every person expects the freedom to travel and comfort while travelling. And that is why most of us want to own a car. However owning a car have many advantages and disadvantages as well.
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many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think advantage of charging people for admission to museum outweigh the disadvantages?

Museums allow people to know about their Heritage and culture. In some galleries, you need to pay certain amount of money while some are unchargeable. In my opinion, I believe that paying for the entry in museum is lot more beneficial than that of unpaid admission and the benefit of it obviously overcome its drawback.
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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing What do you think are the caises of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience?

Everyone in the world desires a healthy life, doesn't he? There are several countries where not only the typical body weight of individuals are growing but also the quality of health and wealth are going downward. Indeed I have so many logic to describe the reasons behind these unexpected matters as well as some recommendations to get rid of these.
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Today more people are overweight than ever before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? What are the main effects of this epidemic?

Recent days, there is a faster growth of weight in many people than that of the olden days due to multiple reasons, resulting in the obesity. Over weight causes many health disorders, which has to be taken care of, in the initial stages of identifying such development, rather than ignoring. Adversely, such ignorance leads to fatal diseases, stops functioning of many main parts of the body; Also the body won't respond to medicines in later conditions as it badly gets effected by that time.
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