IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 918

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In era of economical crisis disappointing regarding job and shortage of financial assest is now common.Some people think that it is better to accept such scenario and other opine that doing effort is only way for better condition.I shall discuss both view and give my point of view regarding this isuue. To begin with,major reason behind unsatisfactory to job is lower pay for work.In devloping contries people often work with lower paymnet,such scenario rise unstatification to job.Secondly,competition play also huge role.There is tought competition between employees so some time employees are not able to handle such pressure and felling of disappointmnet is rise.Moreover,some time internal confict is also behind such condition and due to confict employees or worker do not manage good relation with their boss and collegeus. Furthermore,nowadays there are more and more job-seekers.For example companies get hundreds of application for one vacancy so majority of population is unempl...

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Young people these days tend to be less polite and respectful than in the past. Causes and solutions.

Lifestyle has undergone dramatic changes over couple of decades. It is irrefutable that the modern generation nowadays has become less considerate and civil than in the earlier times. Here,i would like to explore the possible causes of this situation and suggest some ways forward.

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today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold

In the modern world, it has been a issue of debate wheather advertisment company tricked people to buy unreasonable thing or they help them to purchase what they wnat. The power of advertisement can be seen by merchandise of thing, despite some commercial are not rendering proper set of information to the people. This essay will agrue why complete knowledge is entirely necessary for buying goods although, some important advertisement like government program.

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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers are leaving their poor countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this problem?

Undoubtedly, there has been an influx of professionals migrating to wealthy nations. Though this patterns had led to many issues, certain measures can curb the growing concern.

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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers are leaving their poor countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this problem?

Undoubtedly, there has been an influx of professionals migrating to wealthy nations. Though this patterns had led to many issues, certain measures should be taken to curb the growing concern.

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Some people are fond of buying new gadgets, phones or laptops. Is this a good or bad thing? Discuss your opinion.

There is a recent trend among some people, especially the youth to buy latest gadgets and technological devices. This essay will discuss why I believe this is a harmful development.

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Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing to day. What are the causes of global warming and measur can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?

Q:These days many families move abroad for work. Some people believe that this benefits the children in these families. Others believe that it makes their lives more difficult.

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Some people think that job satification is more important than job security . Others think that people cannot expect to enjoy a job and having parment job is more important

Jobs has been played a remarkable role in everyone's life . However ,s9me pople think that job satification is more sinificant as compare to job security . But,some people reckon that fixed job is more important

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures

The majority of people think that music plays a vital role in our modern world, which can get rid of culture and generation differences. In my opinion, I totally agree with this point of view for many reasons. On the one hand, music is likely to broaden people’s horizon to welcome various cultures all over the world. It is needless to say that each country has their own tradition that performs their culture and norms. Music can reduce this culture gap and be a good method to help individual...

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Do you think the environmental situation should improve in the nearest future

I would like to talk about the environmental issues. Nowadays, the environment is getting worse and worse. The main reason for pollution is pollutants that industry and motor vehicle exhaust. Like for instance, factories release gas emissions to the atmosphere. Even, it is also a leakage of nuclear materials or toxic products into the environment.

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Money Can Make Life Easier And More Comfortable. Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the present world, money makes a prominent role on part of the human life. Few people believed that all the rich people are enjoying their life with an great luxery and lavish. But, in my opinion, I strongly disagree that there are so many things to be necessary in part of life to make a happy. In this essay, I will illustrate with probable reasons to elaborate further.

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Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree to this statement?

In this day and age, the value of arts has become questionable. Nowadays, some people believe that the government is throwing away money on arts, whereby such funds could be allocated to other things. The writer of this essay strongly agrees to the given issue for the reason that there are others aspects of the society such as health, poverty and infrastructures that the government should be spending on for the development of a nation which will be elaborated in the succeeding paragraphs.

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The percentage of overweight children in the western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years.Discuss the causes and effect of this disturbing trend.

The rate of childhood obesity in the civilized world has been elevated by close to 20% in a decade.

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The early stage of a child's life is an important formative period, where they find themselves between two options. And making the right choice is an integral part of life. Whilst other are of the view that children should not be disciplined, I believe that punishment is a vital ingredient in their development in the society.

On the one hand, children are good imitators. That is, they are capable of replicating the things they see around them effectively. For instance, fathers who are left-handed tend to have sons or daughter who use their left hand like their fathers. Since they only produce what they observe, the best way to lead them between good and evil decision is to be good ambassadors.

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In the past, people usually stayed in one place throughout their life. These days, people often move around. They often live in several different places in their lifetime. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both?

With increasing employment opportunities across the world, people are finding it beneficial to move to different places, instead of staying in one place throughout their life. It is quite interesting to explore and experience various cultures of many people, hence people tend to move from one place to another often. Fixating at one place has its own advantages and disadvantages.

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Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Infrastructure and internal strenghth and well being both forms the actual economy for a country. Although, various people believe that external infrastructure and designer buildings are important for a city to look good while others think internal factors like good education and better medical services are important. As per my opinion I am strongly in favour of both the above points and I will discuss both these factors in detail with examples.

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some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. to what extent do you agree with this view?

In Modern society, advertisements play a key role in promoting the company's products. With that being said, I completely agree that some adverts are following unacceptable and unnecessary ways to advertise their items.

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Some people think that children`s free time must include educational activities, otherwise they will waste their time. To what extend do you agree?

According to some people, children`s spare time must be filled with some extra-curricular activities to avert them from wasting their time. In my opinion, I disagree that children must only be engaged in educational activities, as it will disable them to live their childhood to the full and make them fed up with lessons at an early age.

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Nowadays more people would rather purchase food than cook at home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

One of the more recent environmental topics, that has been discussed, is who has responsibility for product packaging; is it those that make it and sell it, or those that buy it? The following essay will go both sides of this dilemma（两难境地，困局，困境） and explain why I believe it should be the manufacturers/sellers that should take on the responsibility of reducing the packing with products.

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Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience..

The recently released statistics indicates that there is a spike in dangerous activities carried by eighteen years old. A number of experts are of the opinion that the increase is influenced by the inability of parents and educators to provide the kids with required social and emotional education needs.

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