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Ques: Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience.

It is undeniable fact that recruitement criteria in the companies is changing. Although, some people believe that university degree holders land in reputed industries, others believe that learning the right skills with work experience matters more. Before putting forward any opinion, it is important to investigate both the aspects of this argument. On the one hand, it is commonly thought that procuring theoritical knowledge is essential before getting into practical implementation. This is because, only if a pupil has the factual insight of the subject then only he is fit for the work. For illustration, in Japan, 65% doctors who own MD degree performed well in the hospitals than MBBS degree holder It is evident that higher post-graduates doctors tend to excel better in their career as compared to medical graduates.In other words, medical practicioners who are aware about the symptoms and repercussions of a disease will be able to diagnose and cure it effectively. On...
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Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

In the last few decades extreme sports have become more and more popular. Some people believe that these activities should be prohibited because they are potentially harmful. Whilst I largely disagree with the above statement, I have a number of reservation about this.
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People say that success is 10 percent talent and 90 percent hard work. Do you agree or disagree and give your opinion

As we have known that “ on the way to success, there are no trace of lazy man”. However, in my viewpoint, in order to succeed, we not only need to have hard work but also depend on other factors such as talent, luck and help.
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In many countries, mainly tourists, but not local people visit museums and historical sites.Why does this happening and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places.

Whilst, in some nations, museums and historical sites are less attractive of local individuals rather than to tourists. I will discuss about this, why this is occurring and put some solutions in the following paragraphs.
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Fewer and fewer people walk on a daily basic. What are the reasons and how to encourage them to spend their time walking?

These day, there has been a decline in number of walkers on a routinely basic. This essay will offer further insight into some reasons associated with thí trend as well as certain steps that can be taken to mitigate the situation.
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The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Since 1990s, the internet is booming at such a high rate that almost everyone in the developed countries has access to the internet in some form or the other. It has helped people to access wealth of information and connect with their friends and family through social media. But, it also poses risks to people's personal information and children are getting addicted to their phones.
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The rise of convenience food has helped people keep up with the speed of modern lifestyle. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

The recent increase in the trend of fast food in our society, which has helped citizens to keep with the speed of advanced lifestyle. In my opinion, the demerits from this development exceed the gains varying from diseases.
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Students at schools and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than from other sources (such as the Internet and television). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Students who study at schools and tertiary institutions gain more knowledge from teachers than from any other mode of learning such as the internet and television. In my opinion, I totally agree with this statement as teachers are better equipped with the necessary skills and the persons being taught can get clarified on anything they don't understand.
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Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socializing with others. Do you agree or disagree?

In 20th century, Television is one of the major entertainments for most of the people in the world. This essay agrees that many people prefer only to watch television in their free time, which makes them lazy and prevent them from socializing with others.
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University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies.Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages

Recently there has been an increase in the trend of students studying overseas as part of their degrees. Despite the high cost of tuition ,the quality of education abroad is more advanced. In my opinion studying abroad is far more rewarding and will benefit the individual despite the cost implications.
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Increasing car usage in many large global cities has caused a number of problems. Some cities have proposed banning private vehicles from the city centre. To what extent do you agree?

Owing to the increase in the number of private cars in large urban areas, it has been suggested by some that private vehicles should be restricted from plying major city roads. In my opinion, i disagree that private vehicular movements should be banned, as there are no sufficient insfrasture on ground to serve as substitute and cover for such abolishment.
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Some countries spend a lot of money to make bicycle usage easier. why is this? Is this the best solution to traffic congestion?

Before the invention of motor vehicles, there was only one mode to commute which we call it as bicycle. It was invented back in 19th century by a german civilian named Baron Carl. It took not long enough to invent motor vehicles or say cars. Since then people are more facinated about motor vehicle not just because it is faster but also because it is more comfortable and needs less struggle to operate. As the time passed, the advancement took place one after the other and bicycle was taken o...
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Present an argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic: Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?

As we know, each country is growing rapidly, and competition among them are increasing day by day. Every country wants to be in a superior place and wants to be powerful in every stage. I strongly agree that it is the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves and wealthy nations should not share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education because it starts the feeling of dependency in the citizens of poor...
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If countries are serious about solving traffic problems, they should tax private cars heavily and use the money to provide free or very cheap rail travel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Private cars should be taxed seriously, if nations want to really solve traffic issues. Funds generated from this should be used to provide affordable alternative such as rail. I strongly agree with this notion because firstly, rail transport can covary more commuters at once. secondly, the maintenance is cheaper and affordable.
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Although family is a powerful influence on child's life, it is also influenced from outside the home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is irrefutable that family has an enormous influence on the life of a child but at the same time they also draw inspiration from impacts happening outside of their abodes. Therefore, I completely agree with this Statement.
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In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

A number of youngsters all over the world have become less much attentive to update news reported on newspapers and TV. The main roots of this issue lies in the rise of the Internet, which will be discussed in more details below with suggested solutions.
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Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The discussion of whether young people nowadays should be taught to be good parents and what skills needed to be ones will be presented as below.
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These days, cell (mobile) phones and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

It is rare these days to find someone who does not use the cell phone or the internet to react other other. Although, the broad using of these technology, I believe that the drawback of this development outweigh their benefits.
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Deforestation is one of the major human activities that has posed more danger in our environment and this has been on an increase globally. In this essay, I'm going to discuss two major reasons why it happens and it's benefits.

Firstly, trees are being cut down for commercial purposes. They are major raw material for manufacturing furniture, produce paper and for making cooking utensils. When the trees are cut, they pass through several processes and sold in exchange of money, goods and services. For example, 4.2% of the internally generated revenues in Nigeria are from wood exports.
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For a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world. However, nowadays people’s values have changed, and we tend to consider science, technology and business more important than arts. What do you think are the causes of this? What can be done to draw people’s attention to art?

Art is a self-driven skill that is built from inside the person and is born by nature but not by someone's promptness or suggestions. It is an inbuilt talent hidden in an individual and will come out after proper nurturing or exhibiting the such. Inecome a recent World, this is not much preferred as an essential tool but only as a side activity for time pass tool. Nevertheless, it has become an entertainment or passion rather than a compulsory path to livelihood.
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