IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 926

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

According to some gender based teaching institutions provides better education while others contradict and vehemently supports the argument that co-education is the secret to achieve highest learning standards.

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An increasing number of professionals, such as professionals, doctors and teachers are leaving their own poor countries to work in developed countries What problems do this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with the situation?

No doubt their is increase in education and technology the people now a days are adopting the profession courses like doctors and teachers but they are not serving in their own country rather immigrating to other countries.This is a major problem to considered for the countries progress and development.In my opinion as the income of teachers and doctors are not much paid they are rather moving to others nations for their own future.

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Some people aim to achieve balance between their work and other part of lives, but few achieve it. What is the reason behind this? What are the solutions to tackle this problem?

Few masses try to achieve a balance between their work and their personal lives.But not all of them are unable to achieve a balance between work and life.In my opinion the work load of people make them unable to get a balance between their job and their life.

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Some people think that people who are over 60 years old should not work and should be made to retire. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

When people are 60 years old, they should not continue working. Instead, they should take retirement. I will partly agree with this view.

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In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can you deal with those causes?

The escalated trend of crime is observed in various countries. This essay will examine the critical reasons of this trend, followed by possible solution.

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Some say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group acitivities in their free time. Others say that this is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Part of the people say that organised group activities must be encouraged among kids during their leisure time.On the other hand, some say that the childrens should learn self-play as well. We will discuss both opinions in detail in this essay.

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In many places, new homes are needed , but the only space available for building them is in the country side. Some people beleive it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

In most of the locations, building new home is necessary due to rise in population which migrated from different parts of the country. However, the only area available to construct and accomodate people is in the countryside. Part of the people say that, we need to safeguard countryside by not adding additional buildings. In my opinion, I agree that we need to limit the number of homes added to the countryside.

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Question. Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. To what extent do you agree?

It is often argue that community service be ensured for culprits in jail instead of keeping them under prison for long, according to some.I completely agree the view since this service would help them to realise the mistake they have committed preciously.

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All over the world, the number of overweight people is growing. What do you feel are the main causes of this? What are the effects?

The issue of obesity and related health conditions have been increasing in a alarming rate since last few decades. Excessive consumption of fast foods and lack of exercise are two main culprit of this; however,this can be effectively tackled by adopting healthy lifestyle in their day to day life.

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In some countries, the number of people who visit art galleries is declining. What are the reasons for this? How can we solve this problem?

Visiting museums is losing ground in few nations, however there is mainly because of the modern technology and lack of interest in folks. There are a number of solutions which should be implemented to deal with this reduction.

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The tradition that family gets together to eat meals is disappearing. What are the reasons? What are the impacts?

Traditional dinning habits of a household are soon vanishing. The reasons and implications of such change will be discussed further.

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Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with, What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys.

It is believed that a number of parents purchase a large amount of playthings for their offsprings, despite, the fact that this has accruing benefits such as hastening learning process, stimulation of the child's memory and keeping a child occupied there are attendant demerits.

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It is widely believed that people's ability to learn new things decreases with age and that companies should actively recruit younger employees who have great potential to learn. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Some people beleive that as work force get older, their potential of learning declines, therefore employers should actively recruit youngesters for the company, whereas others determine that older individuals are neccessary since their experience are higher than younger one. I totally disagree that companies should intensively increase the number of young workers.

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Some people think that they should spend money they earn now enjoying life, while others think that the money should be put into savings for future. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the modern, sophisticated life, money has been regarded as the yardstick for satisfying materialistic needs. Similarly, basic needs of every individual could be satisfied only if lucrative are saved for future.Some critics believe that money must be utilized for entertaining and living the present life in better way.Although,this essay agrees to vertically opposite view.However,it will enlighten both aspects in detail.

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Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industries to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Present day industrial sector is getting concentrated mostly to urban areas. While shifting of big factories and manufacturing firms in the outskirts of the huge cities may create opportunities for growth of infrastructure and employment in the rural villages near to regional areas, it can also create economic burden on small scale industries.

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Some young people are leaving countryside to live in cities or towns, it leaves only old people in countryside. What are the problems of this issue? What can be done to solve this problem?

Young people are the future of the country. It is irrefutable to say that some youth are leaving countryside to live in cities or towns. Whereas, only old people left in country side. I would like to discuss the problems of the given statement furthermore, provide the solution of the mention topic.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with older people Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, Many countries have a large proportion of population including the youth and of age. Nonetheless, some people claims that having a large population of young people is more leverage. Conversely, other people opine that having high number of older people in a country is relevant. Personally, I believe that having more populace of youth is beneficial for the country. Further, In this essay we will analyze reasons for both the sides before coming to the conclusion.

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It has become very common for people to borrow money. Maby people have credit card, a mortgage and often they buy a car on credit card as well. Is this a good idea or this is too risky? Discuss both views abd give your own opinion.

Technology is developing day by day . This advancement leads to various changes in the society . One of them is card money rather than cash . Bill paying , owing house , buying motor vehicles and so on all are possible with the help of credit or debit cards .This modernization has both pros and cons ,I will discuss both of these in the subsequent paragraphs with relevant views.

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Some people think that the best way to learn is from a newspaper, others think that the best way to learn is through media. Discuss both and give opinion.

While a section of the society believes that newspaper is the most effective way of learning, others opine that media surpasses all. I firmly consider the influence of media to be the best learning medium because of intricate details are being covered. This essay will elucidate both the learning methods, followed by a reasoned conclusion.

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Punishing murderers with death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder.therefore life in prisonmement is a better punishment for murder.to what extent do you agreee

Over the years,murderers are sentenced to death as a result of capital offence committed.this act cannot change them and can affect the Society negatively.it is in this context I shall strongly go against this.

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