IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1673

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some children find some school subjects difficult (for example maths or philosophy), so these subjects should be optional rather than compulsory. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The large number of children insist that difficult for them subjects, such as maths and philosophy, ought to be not compulsory. Actually, I entirely do not support this point of view because it can reduce standard of living and create an unemployment among teachers.

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whether it is possible to take a vacation from your problems.

In the modern world the stress rates has increased subtantialtly. Despite that people posses more leisure and incomes rather than the past , dealing with problems continue to be a barrier to find hapiness for many people. In order to maintain a balance between real life and problems it is higly recommended that people take a break about their overwholmed situations in a way to take a big picture of the struggling issues and not take this break to dont being the responsible of the scene.

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Some people think that schools have to be more entertaining, while others think that their sole purpose is to educate. Which do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Under the effect of innovative measures immersing into traditional teaching skills and methods, it is obvious to be a controversial topic these days. Some individuals, especially parents and educators believe that the element of entertainment, such as interactive lessons or sport activities, should remain the most significant issue or element in schools. However, I personally agree that it would be better to focus the vital element of education on academic results and this essay will explore these issues, using examples from some recent studies carried out by the universities to demonstrate points and support arguments.

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When new towns are planned, it is more important to include public parks and sports facilities than shopping centres, for people to spend their free time in. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many people think that building public parks and sports facilities are more necessary than building shopping centers as new towns are constructed. From my point of view, I disagree with this idea because i think public parks, sport facilities and shopping centers are equally important.

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As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?

Citizens of diverse nations have benefited considerably from economic prosperity which not only improves their living standards, but also enhances their purchasing power that enables people to enjoy previous unaffordable or even luxury stuff. It can be widely observed that an increasing number of households have equipped themselves with at least one car each, which has more disadvantages for the environment rather than advantages for individuals. Undeniably, vehicles can offer plenty of conveniences for citizens. Under the progress of urbanization, the city layouts have been greatly extended while people are living more dispersedly in different communities compared to past residence structure. With cars, it is easier for people to reach their destinations within short periods of time, which offers more freedom for individuals’ choice

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

Lack of physical fitness in the majority of the working population can lead to health issues. This essay will look into the reasons behind this pattern and the possible measures to counteract it.

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Write about the following topic: In some countries children have very strict rules of behavior, while in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want. To what extent should children have to follow rules? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

A few nations believe in harsh disciplinary regulations for their children, while other countries allowing children to behave as per their wish under the name of freedom. However, for many reasons which will be mentioned below, I strongly believe that children must be controlled by their family till they attain enough maturity.

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International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact 0n local inhabitants and environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

One of the highly controversial issues today relates to the dissolution of barriers between countries and the unprecedented rise in international tourism. In this essay, I am going to shed some light on the advantages and disadvantages of international tourism.

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Growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent you agree or disagree?

The modern world is era of fast food. The number of people are getting overweight are increase. Due to this some might believe that, it increases a health issue connected overwight, does putting strain on the health care. The one group positive about introduce more physical education lessons in school curriculum would be good decision to deal with this. I agree with the point of view of them.

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Studies show that crime rates are lower among those with educational degrees. Therefore, the best way to reduce the crime rate is to educate criminals while they are still in prison. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Researches indicate that increasing of educational rank is decreasing crime proportion. So captivates should be educated to decline offence rate while they are imprisoning. I agree with this notion, but there are some cautions we need to take before people going into jail.

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Studies show that crime rates are lower among those with educational degrees. Therefore, the best way to reduce the crime rate is to educate criminals while they are still in prison. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Researches indicate that increasing of educational rank is decresing crime proportion. So captivates should be educated to decline offense rate while they are imprisoning. I am agree with this notion, but there are some cautions we need to take before people going into jail.

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Some people think that it is fine for professional sportsmen and sportswomen to misbehave on or off the field, as long as they are playing well. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There is no doubt that sports play a vital role nowadays all around the globe. Some people believe that it is absolutely fine for sports members to behave badly with others on or off the field as long as they are performing excellently. However, few other people may deny this equation. Likewise, I strongly opine that misbehave conducted anywhere by anyone must not be allowed, no matter what the status of that person is. This essay will further discuss the reasons behind my disagreement with this statement.

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The best way to solve environmental problems would be for the current generation to accept a simpler way of life for the sake of the next generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that by accepting an easier way of a lifestyle by the current generation for the better life of our children and grandchildren, it will aid to resolve environmental issues. I completely agree that a simpler way of life affects positively on the environment and therefore on the next generation, since this will benefit a vehicle fuel economy and a sustainable use of urban resources such as recycling.

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In some countries, citizens must pay a lot of money in taxes, but education and healthcare are free. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantage?

Nowadays a lot of people in the world they don’t have to pay taxes but in other hand schools and hospitals are not free. However, taxpayers always have opportunity to Access free scholarship, healthcare, and also help the country develop faster, In my opinion the advantages are more because scholarship and medical care are essential for citizens, no matter how much we pay in taxes, if we have these essential factors for free.

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In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today everywhere in the world images or films widely used for different purposes.

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Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets , there is no need to go to cinema. others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Entertainment is an essential part of human life and watching films is an integral part of this. In recent times, there has been a shift of people's preference from theatres to mobiles or tablets, in watching movies. However, some of them still believe in the old school of thought of visiting cinemas to enjoy the movie to the fullest. This essay will discuss both the views.

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Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others however believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this contemporary world, health has become a crucial subject and a key factor in people's living style. Many people advocate that one should be mindful of their eating patterns and its positive or negative effects whereas, other think opposite that citizens should consume healthy food and monitored by the government. I completely disagree with this later assertion and this essay will discuss both aspects in detail and will illustrate why everyone should be responsible for their lifestyle.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

In this modern era,full of advancements in the facilities to mankind,still many people are not able to attain one meal in a day for survival.There are many causes of this problem,which I will discuss in the following paragraphs.

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Young people are often influenced by their peers. Do the advantages of peer pressure outweigh the disadvantages?

It is inevitable that while children grow up, they are impressed by their social environment. In particular in developmental ages, children spend more time with their peers than their families. In my opinion, despite the fact that some drawbacks can occur, interactions with peers influences the young people more positively.

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Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves

Some school of thoughts believe that, affluent countries should help the indigent countries especially for the basic necessities. While some think that the local government should look into these internal matters, to provide the basic essentials to their citizens. Although both parties have some strong justification to support their ideas, I personally agree that the local government plays an important role in providing food and education which is must to the citizens.

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