IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1710

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people think that children would benefit if they attend nursery school before primary school while some people think that children should stay all day with their families. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

children education is a highly debated topic around the globe nowadays.it is believed by majority that kids will be benefited more if attending at nursery school prior to basic schooling.However ,some believe that youngsters can gain a lot by staying at home rather than joining school.I consider it a very healthy activity if kids visit school to learn some activity and being social with many.

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Advances in technology and automation have reduced the need for manual labor. Therefore, working hours should be reduced. TO what extent do u agree?

There is an opinion asserting that, inquiry for manual labor has been reduced due to development in technology and automation.so, reduction in working hours should be applied. I completely agree with this statement. Also, in the following paragraphs, fundamental reasons will be elaborated.

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Some people believed that entertainers are more important than scientists. Do you agree or disagree?

Most of the individuals considered , that entertainment industry has more importance, rather than explorers. However, I believe that both have their own value.

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Different nations are facing the problem of the increasing number of juvenile criminals. This essay will identify the reason why this is happening and provide some practical methods to deal with this problem.

On one hand, many adults are forcing children to commit offenses for them. One possible reason for this is that youngsters are not punishable by the law but instead subjected to undergo seminars and training that would help them to become law-abiding citizens. Perhaps, being born into an indigent family and having a lack of education might make them to susceptible to criminal gangs for some reason that they want to help their families and they also think that it is an easy way of earning. For instance, according to a report from the Department of Social Welfare and Development in the Philippine, 98 percent of juvenile offenders are out of school youths.

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There are more new towns nowadays. It is more important to include public parks and sports facilities for individuals to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many countries are increasing their development rapidly nowadays. The significance of people's entertainment and their leisure time become a more debatable issue. I totally agree with the notion that building more public parks and sports facilities on the purpose of people spending their spare time.

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Some people say that historical buildings should be knocked down while others say that they should be preserved. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It has been told by a few people that old heritage buildings should be demolished because of the public safety issues and economic benefits for a country, however I believe that old buildings should be saved as these are historically important for the society and tax revenue of a country. This essay will discuss both sides.

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Some people think high-end technology can prevent and cut down the rate of committing crime. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people emphasize that we can protect us and decrease case rate by using advanced automation. I do not agree that the latest machinery can save us from malfeasances and helps to diminish lawlessness rate.

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Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Sport, has drawn attention of all the world. Sports has a long history, different era of people played different sports for better physical and mental strength. It is being debated that to play any sport physical strength is required while other argued that mental strength is more important. I believe that for success in any game both physical and mental strength is required, but the degree of dominance of any strength might depend on the nature of the sport.

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Most countries have traditional celebrations that occur annually. In your opinion. what benefits do these celebrations have for society?

We live in a society that most families and friends are separated. So when in the country has an annual traditional celebration it is a great opportunity for people that bring families to each other and hanging out together and have a nice time.

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Do you agree or disagree that celebrities are paid far too much money?

Some people think that famous people are overpaid compared to other jobs nowadays. In my opinion, I totally disagree this statement and I will explain why it is worth paying much money to personalities in this essay.

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Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

Nowadays, many persons think that history is not a useful font of information to understand humans being, while others believe the contrary. In my opinion, I totally disagree with those think that history is not important, since the past is the most significant source of knowledge for learning and, I will discuss this in this following essay.

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Some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. Others believe that every individual should take responsibility for it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, the protection of the environment is a serious concern of the world, which should be dealt precisely. Some people believe that the government should be held liable for saving the environment. On the other hand, a section of society has believed that every individual should participate in protecting environment. Before, drafting my final conclusion, I will discuss both views related to this topic.

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Being a celebrity such as a famous film star or sports personality brings problems as well as benefits.

There are some cons and pros of being a celebrity in real life. Every single thing has its own pros and cons in the world. Even if you have a large amount of money, you may face some issues in the life. Later, in his essay will compare both the sides and will give my thought on that.

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In films and computer games violence has become more popular. Some people think this has negative effects on society, other think it is harmless relaxation. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, thriller media and violent movies have gained more popularity among the masses than any kind of media. Some people are conscious that it can leave negative effects on the viewers, which can disturb the peace of the society. On the other hand, a section of society considers it a harmless source of entertainment for relaxing themselves. Although, this is a very sensitive topic. So, before drafting any final conclusion, I will discuss both sides related to topic.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative situation?

In developed countries, for instance The United States, owning a home rather than renting is crucial nowadays. However, while I believe that in most cases owning a house is beneficial, I agree that it can turn out to be negative in some of the situations.

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The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine

Nowadays, Many people argue that the best method to deal with physical health and diseases is focused on precausion action instead of spending on medical therapy and meditation. I strongly agree with the statement and will support my argument with examples.

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Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true this statement? How far colours influence people's health and capacity for work?

Today, no one can imagine their life without having color in it. In our daily routines, colours have an important role. From birth to death, colours influence our life. In my subsequent crumb of writing, i will discuss the necessity of colours in human being's life.

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Nowadays children watch a lot of TV and play video games. However, some people think that these activities are not good for a child's mental health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, watching televison and playing video games has become a favourite hobby of many children. Most people argue that watching movies and playing video games excessively can have a negative impact on children's mind. I completely agree with this statement because of some legitimate reasons which will be discussed in this essay.

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Some people think that criminals who commit minor crimes should be made to do umpaid community work . Do u agree ?

While many think that the people who commit minor crimes should be made to do community work without paying them, others believe that they should be kept behind the bars. I support the latter idea as I believe that criminals are criminals no matter how big or small the crime is.

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One long-distance flight consumes fuel which a car uses in several years’ time, but they cause the same amount of pollution. So same people think that we should discourage non-essential flights, such as tourist travel, rather than to limit the use of cars. TASK: To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Despite the fact that fuel emissions from the car and flight are the same, vehicles consume five times less gases than aeroplanes, and to solve this problem the government proposes cancelling unnecessary flight such as a tourist trip rather than restricting the use of cars. I personally disagree with this statement as it will cause great resentment among people as well as it is not the biggest dilemma nowadays.

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