IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1734

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people Do the advanges of this situation outweigth the disadvantages?

Curretly, the number of population in some nations is largely represented by young people rather than senior people. This essay will discuss benefits and withdraws of that the large proportion of young people.

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.

There are a number of goals governments should have to attain overall development of their countries. Whereas, many decision makers consider economic growth as the most fundamental factor for developing their states because it can influence other factors to grow, others contemplate that different sectors (health and education) are equally significant because without that it is impossible to achieve total improvement.

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A lot of people who wanted to become professional athletes gave up this idea because of the fear of failure and parents' pressure. Do you think that parents should support their children who wanted to do a career in sports ?

many people aiming for jobs as professional athletes influenced by fear of failing and parents' pressure have given up . In my opinion ,children wanting to make a living with sports should gain the support from their parents.

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People should be allowed to continue to work as long as they want to, and not be forced to retire at a particular age such as 60 or 65. Do you agree or disagree?

People are being forced to retire when they reach their retirement age of their country. This age is between 60-65 in almost every country. I strongly disagree to this Notion. In this essay, I will talk about why retirement age is not necessary and why people should retire whenever they want.

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Some languages are increasingly spoken in different countries, while the usage of others is rapidly declining. Is this a positive or a negative development?

Few languages such as English is widely spoken by billions of people across the world. However, there has been a constant concern that the dominance of such languages is declining the use of other dialects. This essay will provide an interpretation with a suitable epitome by which one can conclude that the advantages of speaking globally accepted languages outweigh its disadvantages

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only 20% of Tech Jobs are Held by Women. What problems do women face that prevent them from getting these jobs and what must be done to change this situation

According to the information that technology-based jobs are acquired by only 20percent of women. Those issues provide that it is a hard profession for girls. Thus, that misunderstand situation should be cleared from fundamental education from school and change parents’ approach for their children.

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The qualities a person needs to become truly successful cannot be learned at a university or similar academic institution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

people give high priorirty for a successful life .According to some people the features required for victory is impossible to learn fom a college or in an educational institutes .I completely agree with the notion as achiving success is a combination of many other elements .This essay will elaborate the reasons behind my opinion .

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In many countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for a country, while others believe that government should not control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is argued that a very high salary is a benefit for the community; however, some people believe that a wage limit on extremely high earners should be set by the government. I do accord with the first viewpoint.

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Unemployment remains the biggest challenge to school-leaver in most countries How far do you agree with this assessment? What other challenges face younger generation today?

In the present era of political instabilities and social unrests, the youth unemployment is worrying challenges for all of us. I strongly agree with the argument, however, there are various leading problems as equally important as younger generation's Jobless issues. The purpose of this essay Is two-fold that to illustrate why the younger generation's joblessness is important, and to explain other problematic issues faced us.

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Education abroad is the key factor for becoming successful. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people choose to study overseas in order to achieve their goals. To a certain extent, I agree that education abroad is a crucial factor. However, I also believe that other factors are equally important.

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Many people nowadays spend a large part of their free time using a smartphone. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Due to the fact that there has been a great development in technology, the smartphones might become an unreplaced part of human’s life in the modern world. It generally make our life easier and also offer us a variety ultilities in one single device. Thus, the cellphones is now so important that the users consume most of their spare time at.

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Supermarkets should only sell food produce from within their country rather than from oversea. What is your opinion on this?

One of the most important issues that many people in society concerned about nowadays is whether or not supermarket should only sell domestic food. Some people believe that it should be done while others have negative attitudes. From my point of view, I am completely against the above statement because of some reasons as below.

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The natural resources such as oil, fresh water, and forests are being consumed at an alarming rate. What problems does it cause and how can we solve these problems?

In the modern era of technology, usage of mineral deposits like fuel, trees, and clean water is abruptly increasing day by day. This give birthto many problems such as running out of fossil fuels, extinction of many species, serious health problems and many more.

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Millions of people every year move to English-speaking countries such as Australia, Britain or America, in order to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want to study in English? Why is English such an important international language?

During the last few decades, the number of people moving to English-speaking countries has risen dramatically. This trend is a result of the desire to learn English and live in developed countries like Australia, Britain or America.

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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

As the population around the globe is on the rise, so does the litter degenerate. So far, countries with limited economies means resources have failed to tackle the issue of waste management and pollution has created a menace for us which in turn is adversely affecting the environment.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Other believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

public transportaion is one of the most important infrastructures in any city. By having uptodate and new commuting system as well as new vehicles residents can enjoy living in peace in smooth way. Some argue that providing new railroads and high-speed train in town is indispensible even with paying large amount of money, whereas others, including myself, belive that budget of the municipality should be dedicated to current pulic transportaion as it is much more cost-effective .

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Many management interviews are based around assessing not only a person’s level of experience and knowledge but also their personality. Is leadership an innate skill? What other characteristics do companies look for in a manager?

In the recent times, most of the top-notch companies have curated an intense recruitment process in order to test the mettle of their managers. Although experience and knowledge play a key role there are many other factors like leadership which are increasingly becoming deterministic in this scenario. Nevertheless, many people believe that leadership skills must come from within and cannot be cultivated. Additionally, there a plethora of skills that employers look for while hiring for a significant position.

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Some people claim that reading a anovel is a waste of time than reading a nonfictional works. Do you agree?

Some people claim that reading nonfictional works is beneficial whereas reading novels is a waste of time. Those who thinks this way do not realize the importance of the novel. The fictional world affects mankind in several ways.

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Alot of people who wanted to become professional athletes gave up this idea because of the fear of failure and parents pressure.Do you think that parents should support their children who want to do a career in sports

In the sports industry, many potential individuals, who were prospective to be successful athletes, have given up their dream due to the anxiety of being defeated and their parental pressure. In my opinion, parents should encourage their offsprings to pursue a sports career.

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A lot of people who wanted to become professional athletes gave up this idea because of the fear of failure and parents’ pressure. Do you think that parents should support their children who want to do a career in sports?

In sport industries , there are a lot of potential children or teenagers who grudgingly quit their dream to be a professional due to their parents’prejudice and inconfidence . From my perspective , as parents of one child , they have responsibility to support their child to follow their favourable career .

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