IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1735

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better caregivers for their young children. Discuss both views.

People have different prospective that Montessori schools are the best place to keep their toddlers while they are working where as some people have different views that grandparents can take better responsibility as a care taker because of the bond they share with the child.

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people who wanted to become professional athletes gave up this idea because of the fear of failure and parents’ pressure. Do you think that parents should support their children who want to do a career in sports?

In sport industries, there are a lot of potential children or teenagers who grudgingly quit their dream to be a professional due to their parents’ prejudice and unconfidence. From my perspective, as parents of one child, they have a responsibility to support their kid to follow their favourable career.

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Some people say that e-boos and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspapers and magazines. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Reading newspapers and magazines is a thing of the past, people nowadays using tablets, mobiles and laptop to read and watch the news. It is more convenient than the traditional way. In this essay we will discuss how the traditional newspaper and magazines are replaced by the technology.

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Some people think young people are suitable for learning foreign language. Some people think adults are more suitable. Discuss both and give you opinion.

In recent epoch, having a grasp in more than one language is a boom for the growth of people. Some folks hold a view that young people are more apt in imparting foreign language, whereas others believe that adults are more suitable for it. In my opinion, I concur with the former view. Hence in this essay I will analyse rationales behind both the views and incorporate my standpoint.

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Some people think that increasing communication usage of computers and mobile phones by young people has had a negative effect on their reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

According to some people, augmenting way to communicate by utilization of advance technology such as computers and telephones has had a extremely adverse impact on their reading and writing techniques. I completely agree with this notion as it deteriorates our basic skills.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing? Do you agree or disagree?

We are live in the internet time and the internet help the companies to growth their sales. Which means that they can sale their products around the world. I agree and I think this event impact of their decision to use online shops instead of shops in the cities.

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More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that increasing the price of fattening foods will solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many countries around the world, a large number of people are getting obese. While some people argue that fast-food should be raising the price, I totally oppose to the idea for the following reasons.

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Many people think that the most important things in our life cannot be bought. Do you agree or disagree? Give your answers with examples from your knowledge and experience.

Money is essential to buy the things what we want in our life, however, many argue that some vital things are not materialistic and it cannot be bought. I agree with this view because some essential things to lead a human life such as health and happiness cannot be bought with the money.

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In many countries, traditional dress and costumes are considered effective ways of maintaining links with the past. How effective can traditional costumes be, in this sense?What other ways exist to help citizens connect with a country’s past?

It is believed by some that traditional costumes are a good way to stay connected to the past. this essay will discuss how effective can traditional costumes be and what are the other ways to help citizens maintain links with the past in detail.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory part of high school programs for example, working for charity, improving neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Encouraging and motivating employees to work hard should be based on the amount of money they have been paid commensurate with how much they produce and sell. I strongly agree with this opinion.

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present a written argument to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic: overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones . suggest that government and individuals can tackle these problems . Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Overpopulation has been the major problem facing most cities of the world. In the recent times, drastic rapid growth in population has led to meteoric rise in crime rate and influx of young people from rural areas is believed to be the main factor responsible for this unfortunate trend. Thus, this essay will critically examine the negative effect of migration of young people to cities and likely measures to be taken by government and individuals to solve this problem.

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Nowadays many people have to work longer time, and they feel more stressful than before. What are the reasons? What can employers do to make life easier?

Today, many of the people are working for longer time than their average time. There are a number of the reasons behind of it. Following this essay will explain my viewpoints about the such reasons and then provide solutions for this matter.

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The internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are. On the other hand, it also isolates us and encourage people not to socialize. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is obvious, internet connection helps us be in touch with our friends and relatives easily and cheaper but negatively affecting on socializing and individualism, has been mentioned. to a certain extend internet might have disadvantages on social life and characteristics whereas it should be utilized in an appropriate manner in order to have more positive functions.

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There is still a certain section of the society which lives under poverty despite the fact that countries where people belonging to this section live are becoming richer.Why do you think this happens and what can wealthy societies do to help their poorer members?

In this fast paced world, poverty has been burgeon day by day.Although, there are some areas where masses are becoming affluent.

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QUESTION: Some people say the best way to discourage smoking is to make smoking illegal on public places. Other people say that this is not enough and other measures are needed. Discuss both views and give tour own opinion

In many countries, smoking in public area is officially banned in order to try to prevent people from smoking as well as passive smoking, however some people think that only lifting smoking ban would not make big impact on those who have unhealthy habit and others feel that prohibit public smoking is adequate unpleasant for smokers. This essay will discuss the two points of view above and provide my own opinion.

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Universities should allocate the same amount of money to students’ sports activities as they allocate to their libraries. Do you agree?

There has to be no difference in the amount of budget the University distributes on physical education and the library. Personally, I agree that universities should give the same amount of money to their students’ sports activity as they give to their university library.

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People are living longer. Some people think that it causes big problems. Others, however, think the aging population has many advantages for business, government and for society in general. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People in this modern world are having a longer life expectancy, which opens questions as to whether this is advantageous or disadvantageous to society. This essay will discuss both sides of this argument and give my opinion at the end of the essay

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Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity.What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity?What solutions can you suggest?

Despite knowing the biodiversity’s importance for a long time, human practices have been causing to the massive extinction of different species. This essay will examine the primary reasons of loss of biodiversity and possible solutions to this problem.

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In many countries around the world, life expectancy is increasing. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion.

Today world is much more different from the past as modern technics, medical method is being developed. Therefore, world’s old population is increasing dramatically. Although greater longevity has some advantages, I strongly believe that negative effects outweight positive ones.

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Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?

A large nuber of criminals who serve who serve their first prison sentence, leave prison only to reoffend. This is mainly because of lack of rehabilitation difficulty finding emplyment once released. There are a number of solutions to which should be implemented to deal with the criminals who reoffend.

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