IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1736

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Children are facing more pressures nowadays frim academic,social and commercial perspectives.What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

At this present time children face different type of pressures and spoil their life themselves.Every child have a distinct pressure.Some face academuc or few social and commercial.In this essay I will discuss some reasons of these pressure and also many remedies in which student can overcome from it.

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Some people think that children should attend extra classes outside the school others say that they should be allowed some time to play . discuss both views and give your opinion

It is argued that some by additional classes after school that would be lack of playing for children. Absolutely, children should play and spend free time with their family. In contrast, busy lifestyle might be assist to find out goals for children. This essay will discuss extra classes would need for children.

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Some people believe that governments should spend money on building trains and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads are the better way to reduce traffic connections. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Few individuals think that in order to decrease road traffic funds should be given in establishing training and underground tubes by government. Whereas, Others opine that creating extra and broader road is the best solution to deal with mass jams. In my viewpoint, rails and metros are more helpful in reducing congestion.

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Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed. However, some people think that zoos are useful for protecting rare animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Zoos are paying importamt role in the regands of Protection from hunters and also for endengered Species. some argued that zoos shold be shut down. personally, I agree with the Statement, zoos are useful to Protect the rare amimals and better feed and care.

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Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there is a widespread opinion about the insecurity of some kinds of sport, that people believe ought to be prohibited. In my opinion, no matter what risk sport activities can bring to people’s health, it is not the option to limit people in choosing the sports they highly keen on. Alongside this, the outlawing is not likely to stop people from doing what they want to do.

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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others think that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

It is considered by some that, providing high remuneration in certain countries is an asset for themselves, while others believe that the government should put certain restrictions in the financial income of the people. In my opinion, I believe that, having good salary help people to work more efficiently and thus it is always a benefit for the country.

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Some people believe that academic subjects such as chemistry, physics and history should be taught in schools, while others believe that students will derive more benefit from studying practical subjects, such as motor mechanics and cooking. Discuss both views and give you own opinion.

In this day and age, it is not uncommon that the theoretical courses should be more focused in curriculum than the vocational training for manifold reasons. This essay will try to discuss both sides of this controversial issue and my perspective will be pointed out.

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Some people think that companies and private individuals should pay to clean up the pollution that they produce, not the government. To what extent do you agree?

It cannot be denied that the increasing pollution came from big companies and people because of the waste product they produces. Thus, rising the concern that both should pay for their acts rather than the government. I definitely agree on this idea but it can be resolve with a comprise. In this essay I will tackle the reasons and give my opinions.

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violence in the media promotes violence in society. to what extent do you agree

Media has a great potency to increase the violence a society. I completely agree with this statement due to the fact that people may be easily affected by the severity actions which is conveyed to the audience through the press organs.

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medyada şiddet toplumda şiddeti teşvik eder. Ne derece katılıyorsun

Medyanın toplumdaki şiddeti artırma konusunda büyük bir gücü vardır. İnsanların basın organları aracılığıyla dinleyicilere iletilen şiddet eylemlerinden kolayca etkilenebilmeleri nedeniyle bu ifadeye tamamen katılıyorum. Bir yandan, bilgi, iletişim veya eğlence gibi çeşitli amaçlar nedeniyle halkın farklı medya platformlarının kullanımı dramatik bir şekilde arttığı için medyanın toplum üzerinde büyük etkileri olduğu doğrudur. Ancak, medyada şiddet içeren temaların yayınlanması insanların sa...

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The typical teaching situation of a teacher and students in the class will not exist by the year 2050. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The traditional educational process typically assumes that students are learning under supervision of a teacher in a classroom. However, there is a tendency to believe that guided learning and other conventional traits of education can be faded away by 2050. I truly believe that the teaching system will be light years ahead of what we have at present moment due to the technological breakthrough and drawbacks of teacher-led lessons.

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Employer should give longer holidays to employee to encourage them to do their job well. Do you agree or disagree?

Proficiency and perfectionism attains higher level of organizational and personal growth and Some people opine that, long vacations entice them for perform their task upto the expectation. I certainly assert that vacation is a vital ingredient for keeping employees fresh and motivated at work however, would it be the only component to entice executives’ to perform better?

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Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and a little time on sports. Why is it? Is it a positive or negative development?

In this day and age, children have long forgotten about physical sports and find themselves invested in digital games, which in my opinion are harmful for their physical health as well as gives them a false sense of achievement.

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The Growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

Today online shopping become popular among the people. Some sets of group argue that increasing rate of it cause the shutdown of all shops in towns and cities. At some extent, I agree with it. However offline shopping will never end as people need it the most. My opinion is explained further with reasons and examples.

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Nowadays young people deliberately damage public places. Why is it happening? What could be a solution for it?

This is a universally acknowledged fact that modern technology has drastically affected the way of living. It is believed that young generation do not care about public places during travelling though out the world which may lead to adverse result for nations. However, it should be controlled by numerous ways. These points of view will be discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is believed that serious social and practical problems can be caused when we are staying in a country where foreign language is prevalent. In my opinion, speaking a non-native language result in disparity with the regional peple while communicating and socializing with them. Although, it can also provide us with an opportunity to learn a new language and familiarize ourselves with it.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Most of the people believe that being self-employed is much preferable than working in an organization or company. People can choose to work on their own terms and conditions instead of obeying another person's rules and regulations. However, working independently can have some negative aspects also.

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Some people think if students are afraid of the teacher it is better. Others see that having a friendly relations is better. what do you think? Discus both points and give us opinion.

That good education plays a significant role in development is an undeniable fact.Had we realized the advantages of growing good junior in our society, we would deliberated on it much more meticulous.

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some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and age together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Music has a magical vibrate to everyone, there are no age limit and not reflect only one place, the culture I agree with that. One famous lirist say music is a medicine that collaborating with others. I am discussing about those things in this essay.

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Children are facing more pressure nowdays from academic,social and commercial perspectives .What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these presures?

In the contemporary era, children are being faced by several pressures.The predominant precursors behind this whole scenario are cut throat competition and parental expectations and these can be ameliorated with the help of teachers by pulling down some education burden and by parental care.

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