IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1817

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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People tend to work longer hours nowadays. Working long hours has a negative effect on themselves their families and the society so working hours should be restricted. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays people are obligated to spend much more hours per day at the workplace, while some people are of the opinion that working so much hours has its negative results on their personality, on their family's relationships and on the whole society and should be reduced. I strongly agree that time spend at their jobs have diminished to the minimum if the government wants to have a health and delighted individuals.

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

There is no doubt that many things had changed in the last few decades; some changes are for betterment and some changes are for worse. One of the fields which were greatly affected by the advent of technology is the way of interaction and communication.

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New parents should attend parenting courses to ensure the growth of their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a growing interest revolving around a fact that parents who have their first child should ensure the growth of their children by attending parenting courses. I fully support the given opinion.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

It is widely accepted the a significant number of museums receive charging fees from tourist for the purpose of admittance, while others permit free entrance for sightseers. This essay will discuss that the downsides of this tend will not outweigh possible benefit and I would argue the possible encouragement of visiting national museum if the entrance is free of charge but the collected revenue of tickets could be spent on maintaining preferable conditions of museums as well as the possibility of being museum destruction but ignorant tourist will, indisputably, decrease considerably providing they are forced to make entering payments.

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of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Becoming an appropriate member of our society is not an easy task to anyone, especially to youngsters, and always it has been debates for that subject throughout people. While, some say that they should be taught in the school, others argue that parents are the right persons to pull off it because of a number of reason. I will discuss both view and give my opinion in this essay.

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The world today is a safer place than it was a hundred years ago, and governments should stop spending large amounts of money on their armed forces. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is long time, the world, nowadays, has not involved with any significantly clash. Today's, world is no comparison with past when people spent most time in the battlefield. Conversely, The world is much more secure place than past. It is argued that governments should stop consuming money for developing armed forces while remaining few individuals thinking it is compulsory to make potent armed forces. My essay supports that army forces are indispensable significant part of nations. This essay is going to narrate firstly, always need to give emphasis on the armed forces, in case they are needed. Secondly Armed forces can easily handle serious situation in nations.

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Recent surveys show increased interest in relocation and travel to other countries. What may be the reasons for this trend, and what will be the possible outcome from this behaviour?

Immigration and travelling can undoubtedly have a significant impact on a society. Recent surveys have indicated a rise in the interest in relocation and travel to other countries. This essay will provide a detailed account of the reasons as well as the possible outcome from this trend.

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Despite a large number of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world. What problems are associated with this? What solutions can you suggest?

Desk-bound work is increasingly being popular these days though there are enough flexible opportunities to visit gymnasiums. My writing will firstly address the most familiar problem is getting obesity, and later it will submit the possible, increasing physical tasks, solution.

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Some people believe that our happiness depends on how much money we have. Others say that money cannot buy happiness. Do you think that having money is the key to happiness, or are there more important factors?

Most people believe that money is the most important part of life to be happiness. While another group of people thinks that money is important, but there are a lot of different things to be happiness.

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Today, more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourist who visit such places?

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Some people think that government should not give international aid since they have disadvantages people like unemployment and homeless in their own country. To what extent do u you agree or disagree?

Some experts believe , that the international aid by the government don’t compulsory, while the government should ensure their society with work spaces and homes. I completely agree ,that this kind of scheme would be a good idea.

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Some educationalists argue that non-exam, arts-based subjects, such as music, drama, art and craft, should be compulsory in the secondary-school curriculum. They believe that activities such as these can improve overall academic performance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Artistic subjects and other lessons which do not require examinations are believed to be obligatory in secondary level of education, according to some educational specialists, since improved learning results can be seen. From my personal perspective, I strongly dissagree with this belief because of two reasons.

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Some people think schools should group pupils according to their academic ability, but others believe pupils with different abilities should be educated together. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People have different views about the categorical system that should be approached in grouping students in classes. While some people argue that pupils should be distributed in groups based on their academic capabilities, I agree with others who believe that students of diversified abilities should be taught in one classroom.

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Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what type of neighbor is the best to have? • someone who is quiet • someone who we are similar to • someone who is supportive Use specific details and examples in your answer.

We are bounded with different relationships in the society. Our lives can be affected by the people who are in our neighborhood, and they are representing an important factor in the quality of our life. Neighbors play an important role in our relationship and lives. In my opinion, it is critically important to have neighbor that are supportive for us. There are a few reasons why I hold this opinion.

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Some people choose to eat meat or fish. They believe that is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

It is true that the amount of people who are choosing to eat no meat or fish is increasing nowadays, thinking that this type of diet is beneficial for their own health and for the environment. Although in my view an unbalanced diet, eating only vegetables and fruits may have a negative impact on a person’s health.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Parents have been leveraging methods to develop their children. While some believe that children should be taught to be competitive, some prefer to embed cooperation values to their children. In my opinion, from early age, teaching children to become more collaborative than competing with their friends.

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Students should not be allowed to use mobile phones at school. Do you agree or disagree with this view

People have conflicting views about the use of mobile phones at school. I completely agree with the opinion that it should be prohibited for a number of reasons.

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some people think that public health is a the responsibility of the government , while others think that people should be responsible for their own health. discuss both sides and give your opinion

It is considered by many that nation's fitness problems are authority of government, it is argued by some that those problems are the authority of their own. In my opinion, I believe that people should try being healthy and ministry should help them

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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes in there. What is your opinion about this?

With increasing population all over the globe, there is a clear need for more homes. Rural areas seem to be the only accessible land to fulfil the housing need. However, living accommodation is of critical importance; some keep preserving the greenfield lands in perspective. I entirely approve of this idea and elaborate on the reasons as follows.

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Do you agree that university education should be free for everyone

University education requires a very high tuition fees which a very few students are able to afford. According to some people there should be free education so that every student can get a university tuition. In my opinion, I agree that university education should be free as it can lead to extensive development of both individuals and society.

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