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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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The amount of time spend on sport and exercise should be increased in schools in order to teach the problem of overweight children. Do you think this is the best way to deal with the problem? What other solutions can you suggest?

One of the biggest problems of the children in our primary schools is being overweight. This essay needs to heal us to understand the main problems and try to find several solutions.

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In many counties, women and man are working full-time. It is therefore logical for women and men to share household tasks. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

These days both genders are equal, woman and man work full-time job. Both of them have the same free time for their family. This essay will try to find out if they are equal at home as same as they are at work.

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A lot of people spend a major part of their adult life at work, so job satisfaction is very important for individual happiness. What are the main factors that contribute to job satisfaction? What are the possible solutions for people who are unsatisfied with their jobs?

These days people spend most of their time at work. Half of their life they are on jobs. Individual happiness at work is as much important as you are at home with family. This essay will try to find which factors contribute to job satisfaction and which solutions can help people who are unsatisfied with their jobs.

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Some people think that employers should ensure a supportive and pleasant work environment where each employee is respected and valued equally while others think employers should focus instead on providing better facilities and equipment.

In this concurrent world, if is undoubtedly true that workers should ensure a supportive and pleasant work environment where each employee value and respect equal. While other people think that employers should always focus instead on providing good facilities and equipment. This essay is in support of former opinion and shall discuss both the sides of arguments with reliable illustrations before presenting a logical conclusion.

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There is no need to go out to see live performance (concert...) because it is better to see them on the TV or Computer screen. Do you agree or disagree

To look at the home entertainment aspect, the most important factor to consider is home entertainment aspect. If a person has his or her private applications or websites to relax against some pillows while watching the movies, it will be one of the best option for them to save an amount of huge money instead of uncomfortable going direct to the social cinema. Such a form of home entertainment, moreover, will create a private place for us to watch wonderful movies without irritating the others intensely. The more people are around, the more bad emotional feelings we will get. It is true that we always find confidence and truly happy whenever we can gather with friends or family members, which can be destroyed while watching in the social cinema with strangers. In order to avoid this situation, all we need to do is self-quarantine, find a great Tv show and relax.

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Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There are two types of perspectives in regards to the schooling starting age. Some believe those who are less than 7 years old might better to kick off their discipline. On the other hand, some people say it's better that children start their education once they are 7 years old and above.

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There is no need to go out to see live performance (concert...) because it is better to see them on the TV or Computer screen. Do you agree or disagree

An emerging trend which has generated a widespread phenomenon in entertainment field is watching home movie. I am inclined to believe that watching movies at home is much better than coming to the social cinema. Not only will watching movie at home help us to save our precious time, but it can also be a private area to enjoy movie series.

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Some people argue that history is of little or no use to us. Others believe that studying history gives many benefits. Discuss those views and give your own opinion.

History has long been recognised us a discipline, but it .Seems to be a fact that few students have a clear concept of why they should study it. Many people even argue that studying history is meaningless, considering the past differs in many important ways from the present. In my opinion, there are many facts to show the importance of history as a subject.

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According to those im the travel business, the nature of the average holiday is changing. Rather than seeking a relaxing break in a far away place, ppl now want excitement on their holidays. Opinions

Truth be told, ppl are having novel idea about enjoying holiday. Instead of unwinding or escaping from the crowd, inhabitants tend to seek something out of ordinary when they have time to break. Personally, i believe that ppl can take joy in both ways of relaxing due to its distinctive merits, which will be outlined below.

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In companies, promotions to high positions should be given to employees inside a company and not to someone outside the company or new hiring. What is your opinion on this?

Whether promotions should be given to employees from within or to workers outside the companies remains a controversial issue. Some people claim that recruiting new faces does the enterprises a world of good, while others adopt an opposing view that in-house hiring should be on high agenda. In my opinion, both sources of hiring has it own merits, and hiring decisions should be made for the best interest of the company.

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Most people prefer ready to eat food rather than homemade food now. Do you think it has more advantages or more disadvantages.

Urbanization and modernization has fast paced our daily routines. Many people argue that processed food, which is easy to cook in few minutes, is the best option to eat. While others opine that freshly cooked food is the best food for a healthy body and mind. I personally feel, that ready to eat meals have more shortfalls than its benefits.

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Spoken communication are more always powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is commonly believed that oral communication far outweigh written forms of communication. While there is some truth to this statement, I believe the former cannot eclipse the latter in many ways.

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Today many people do not realize how important the natural world is.why is this?how can people learn more about the importance of natural world?

There is a worrying trend nowadays, that most of the people fail to understand the core value of the natural world. This essay intends to analyze why is this phenomenon and suggest some measures that might help to alleviate the problem to some extent.

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Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males and females from certain jobs because of their gender?

Women have been traditionally restricted to certain roles; however, by the breakdown of male-dominated employment, there are more women in the world working in various professions rather than public services. Besides, it is inevitable that we are all first human, then man or woman.

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Some people think that it is fine for professional sportsmen and sportswomen to misbehave on or off the field, as long as they are playing well. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Although most professional athletes are aware of their position as role models for their fans and behave accordingly, there are sportsmen and sportswomen who behave poorly during matches and in their private life. While some people find it acceptable as long as their performance on the field is not impacted, not everyone agrees with that point of view.

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Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?

There is issue with visiting cultural and historical sites by local people. The reason of this is awareness of local people and aim of tourists to know about history and culture. The educational trips and making interesting events for citizens can solve lack of visiting.

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Scientists use living animal to carry our research. Some people think it is interesting, while some other people think it is cruel. What do you think?

There is issue with using the living animals as a scientific experimental tool. Some part of society finds it useful for development of science, when the other part finds it as act of the violence. I believe that scientific research should carry out experiments on animals, because of lack of alternatives and efficiency of experiments.

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in the past, when students did a university degree,they tended to study in their own country nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this development you should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Why would a student choose to study abroad? Why would someone movther country , and leave his or her whole life behind? There are many advantages and disadvantages to choose to live abroad.

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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Everybody has their own perks, but some people may be distinctive among others. Yet it is a generalization, people may be born with particular capabilities when others are just plain personalities. Another approach for that is sports and music can be taught to any individual who wishes to learn. I definitely believe that second opinion prevails the first. Children can learn anything if they are willing to become either a successful musician or a sports person.

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Now the machine is very complex, and a lot of difficult work is automated. Does this machine automation have more pros and cons?

By the blessing of modern technology now we use many kinds of automated machine such as robots, faster-producing machine regarding of office, industry, home and many more. I believe that this is more positive impact rather than negative impact, which I shall highlight in this essay.

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