IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1852

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some working parents think that childcare centres provide the best care for children who are still too young to go to school. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Those who prefer care through childcare centres due to various reasons. Firstly, they have those who responsibility about the child in particular. They have other children and they will get better because of their contact with an environment of the same age. They will learn more from each other. In addition, there are tools for playing and after finishing them, they will teach to put them in their designated places. In this behaviour, the child learns to arrange.

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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

Music is an essential cultural and traditional component of a nation and a rich variety of music could be found all around the world that not only entertains us but also expresses our joy, nationalism, freedom, happiness, love and struggles in the finest form of arts. Despite the huge popularity of international music, traditional music is still more important due to its adherence to the traditional aspects of a country.

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Many people argue that instead of wasting money on building theatres and sports medium, the government should allocate this money to educate people. I agree with this statement because education is indispensable for our life and it also helps to develop the nation

First, education is the necessities of human life. And many impoverished people, who cannot afford studies, send their children to work for minimum wages. And so, investing money to educate these people helps in reducing child labour. For instance, orphan children all over the country are despairing to study which should be taken care of by the government. Furthermore, education improves the quality of the life of the person. If one person of the family is educated, it improves the quality of the whole family. For example, when the cobbler’s son becomes a doctor, the whole family is rejoiced and respected for one person’s profession. For the above reasons, education is more important than any other thing.

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Some working parents think that childcare centres provide the best care for children who are still too young to go to school. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Those who prefer responsibility through child care centres due to various reasons. Firstly, they have those who care about the child in particular. They have other children and they will get better because of their contact with an environment of the same age. They will learn more from each other. In addition, there are tools for playing and after finishing them, they will teach to put them in their designated places. In this behaviour, the child learns to arrange.

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Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There have existed endless discussions over companies’ problems, especially the demands of employers. This results in conflicting views on whether work’s quality or appearance is more important. This burning issue will be critically demonstrated in this paper.

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It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Teaching history for schoolchildren has been a heated topic constantly. There is a common belief that local history is more important to children than world history. However, in my opinion I agree with this statement I believe that world history should be equally important.

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Some people claim that there are more disadvantages of the car than the advantages. Do you agree or disagree?

Owning a car is generally perceived as a luxury but apparantly it is often a need for many. People these days prefer to travel through their own vehicle rather commuting through a public transport. Though, they have their set of reason for not choosing the public transport, they end up purchasing an automobile like a car. Let us see what could be merits and demerits of owning or commuting through a car.

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The government investments in art ,music and theatre is a waste of money . Government should invest these funds in public services instead . What extent do you agree or disagree .

Some people are convinced that art, music and theatre are not the best value for the officials’ investments, as they are quite sure that the government could spend these funds in a far more effective way investing in public services. Personally, I cannot support this view, because in my opinion on no account should the importance of performance art be ignored. Not only are public services crucially important for people’s well-being, but entertainment facilities development plays a significant role in one’s mental health also.

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In some countries levels of health and fitness are decreasing and average weights are increasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what are some possible solutions?

Peoples’ well-being and stamina in some countries are increasingly becoming a major concern. While searching for healthy people is now a tough task, finding unfit persons is a stress-free assignment. This essay discusses consumption of unhealthy food as a focal problem to peoples’ wholeness. It further suggests hike in value-added tax on these pre-packaged foods as a solution.

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Some Believe That People Should Not Continue To Work Once They Reach The Age Of Retirement Until what age individuals should work is a debatable issue; it is argued by many people that individuals should stop working once they reach the age of retirement. This essay strongly supports this view as this will greatly benefits an individual to stay blissful and motivated.

To commence with, on average, an individual works for almost twenty-five to thirty years before his or her stop going to the work. To explain, this time span is quite long enough and by the time they reach the age of 55 or 60 most of them have already worked hard and fulfilled their responsibilities like providing education to their children and saving enough for their retirement. Therefore, after retirement individuals need time for themselves to enjoy their life. To illustrate further, according to a recent survey by the World Health Organization, people who retire at the age of sixty and do not work after that were 30% happier than those who continue to work after retirement. Retirees, therefore, should spend this time for travelling to new places and also in physical activities like Yoga and Meditation that can improve their health.

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Some people think technology makes life complex, so we should make life simpler without using technology. Do you agree or disagree?

While rapidly technical development brings us convenience, it triggers detrimental effects in our daily lives at the same time. Some people hold the opinion that we ought not to use technology due to the fact that it makes life complex, I disagree with this points and will make an objective analysis in the following essay.

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Not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?

Science subjects play an important role in higher education, but it is noticeable that students choose science subjects in college are less than ever before. As far as I am concerned, this phenomenon is closely related to the economic development and social changes, bringing potential negative influence on our society.

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Some people think that being able to communicate with others online is breaking down geographical barriers and enabling people, who would normally never have the chance to meet to commuicate . What are the advantages of international communication online ? Are there any disadvantages of this ?

As all we know, internet has became part and parcel of our lives. It is considered by some online communication is removing geographical barriers. It is not possible to communicate to another people without a

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Due to many young people dropping out from schools , the rate of unemployment is increasing and it effects our society in different ways . In your opinion , how can this situation be improved.

In this modern world , every person want to achieve their personal goals .Owing to this , majority of learners are dropping out from educational institutions which becomes reason of unemployment in some ways . This essay will intend to delve some reasons behind this vogue along with possible solutions in the subsequent clauses.

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Modern technology now allows rapid and uncontrolled access to and exchange of information. Far from being benefical, this is a danger to our societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Modern technology is one of the most important breakthrough that has been brought to humanity. While I agree that people gain many benefits from it, thanks to its convenience and high speed, there are still some hidden risks that people should concern.

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Some people believe that students should be allowed to evaluate and criticize their teachers to improve the quality of education. Others think this is disrespectful to teachers. Discuss both views, give your opinion and include relevant examples.

The revolutionary change in the education system. With this we have to consider providing an opportunity to the students to analyse the performance of their teachers and giving feedback thereafter ultimately enhancing the quality of education e. While the more convincing argument lies with the supporters of the two- way evaluation the points are required to be fleshed out for a better understanding of the reasons.

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In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour, while in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want. To what extent should children have to follow rules? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Undoubtedly, children's are the future of our nation. In this globalised epoch, some adolescents follow behaviour rules, which are allowed by law enforcement authorities in different parts of the world, whereas in other countries, everyone has a great free-wheeler. So, I parted restate with the statement due to some reasons, which I will elaborate in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Nowadays childrens watches a lot of TV and play video games. however, some people think that these activities are not good for a child mental health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Children spend their leisure time with TV program and play video games. In fact that some parents don't take care about theirs child and some people believed that, it is not for good health moreover, they think how to overcome those activities because TV program and video games are creating lazyness among the childrens. In my point of view, Although this technical tools help to children mental development but this is not best way.

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28. Today, most people get married and give birth in their thirties rather than when they are younger. Is it a positive or negative development in your opinion? To what extent do you support this development?

In the contemporary era, most females tend to secure their careers firstly in their early years of ages which contribute to the fact that more females tend to marry and become mothers in their late thirties. As one of feminists, I definitely opine that women will benefit more if they start their families later. However, under certain situation, marrying and having babies in old ages also cause negative impacts to them.

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Life was better when technology was simpler. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

It is often argued that the human life had been better before the industrial revolution. Although I agree that the world was more favourable with less technology. I think we couldn’t have made our lives easier without a well-developed technology.

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