IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1847

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree?

A great number of families ask their children to read every day since they believe that reading helps develop children's literacy and intelligence. While in the recent years, some parents prefer to do interesting activities with their children, as activities like DIY crafts and playing chess are efficient in helping children develop creative thinking. I personally agree with the first idea.

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Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts, and that this money can be spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

At this moment so many people are painter and loves paint some illustration or a bad side and good side of life style.

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Loneliness is an increasing problem in many societies, especially among the elderly. Why is this? How might it be remedied?

Each and every creation of God requires a companion to live. Nowadays, many of the people are falling into depression due to the loneliness. This has become a problem in society, which have to be handled seriously. I this essay, let us discuss the problem arousing being alone and can find some remedies.

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Should you people follow older people's example or it's good for them to challenge older people's opinions and thoughts. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people say that youth should do what exactly the elderly people's experience, while others believe that it's better to think about the old people point of view and then make some new decisions. The essay argue about both of the ideas but the writer fully advocates the second one.

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Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a country’s success, while others think that there are other factors which can be used to measure a country’s success. What are these factors? And among them, which one is more important than others?

It is commonly considered by many that the most effective method to measure country’s growth is evaluating its economic progress, whereas others tend to oppose this idea and believe that there are other factors which represent the actual success. This essay shall delve into all such factors and pickup the best one.

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Fossil Fuels, such as coal, oil, and natural gas are the main source for many countries. However, some nations are using alternative energy such as solar power and wind power. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, fossil fuels play critical role in energy development in most countries. In my opinion, although it will be difficult to shift from fossil fuels to alternative source of energy because of high cost, this development is still worth being made for promising benefits.

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is internet beneficial ? do what extent you agree

Technology has changed our lifestyle, significantly internet has made everything more accessible then it uses to be in the past. To my mind, it is debatable that internet can be regarded as a positive development.

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Some people believe that watching television is bad for children. Other people believe that watching television is educational for children. Which opinion do you agree with and why? Give specific details and examples in your answer.

Television is rapidly gaining its popularity among youngsters. Some people consider that children should watch television as it is a source of education, whereas others tend to oppose this idea and believe watching television can have detrimental effects on the children. I firmly agree with the former statement but will discuss both viewpoints in detail.

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2020-01-11: Many students take part-time jobs while studying in the universities. Is this a bad or good idea?

Education is an integral part of our society. Therefore, numerous individuals dedicate an ample amount of their time towards education. Moreover, certain students consider working part-time while studying in institutions. Hence, it certainly is a benefit to the students. In this essay, we shall discuss this topic further.

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Inventors are not as important to society as doctors. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Provide reasons for your answer. Include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some individuals think doctors are more important than inventors to society. In my opinion, I disagree with this view, because firstly, many new things were not created by doctors and secondly, the improvment of doctors to the world is limited.

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Nowadays many nations are facing the problem of declining number of students attending science subjects at university. What do you think are the underlying reasons for such trend? How can it affect these nations?

Albeit weird and simultaneously lamentable, even in this era of state-of-the-art technology, an increasing number of students are being found turning down to do subjects providing them with knowledge about the natural world based on facts learned through experienced and observation, let alone be inspired. Accordingly, universities around the world are undergoing a dearth of whom could be stimulated to get into scientific study. I maintain that such an agonizing decrease primarily stems from not being guaranteed a high paying job, together with quality teaching, whereupon nations lag behind in coping with the advancing world.

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In schools and universities girls tend use arts while boys like science.What are the reasons for this trend? And do you think this tendency should be changed?

Schools and universities are the hotspots of radical ideas which stir the enthusiastic minds.There is a popular saying that 'mould in school fly in colleges'.Anyway the topic is apt to the current condition of or common educational premises.In the teenage period children like to do activites that are quickly noticable.So girls who are passionate in their skills are more like to perform because it is more appealing to public.Boys on other hand they have a truth seeking mind, loves to do activities which satisfy their hunger for to do more.

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Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

online shoping is good source for buying any thig. like apperals, houshold products, stationeries and so on . life of people has become easier by advance technology .i will discuss advantages and disadvantages of online shopping in the subsequent paragraphs .

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Some people believe that success in life depends upon hard work and determination, while others believe that other factors like money and personal appearance are important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the contemporary world, everyone wants to live the luxurious life. In order to be victorious people have to overcome hardships in growth. Some people conquer these difficulties by tough work and will power, while some overpower them by factors like wealth and unique appearance etc..

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With this letter, I am extremely glad to provide my highest possible reference for Mr. Yirgalem Gidey Gebru in support of his application to your prestigious university/Institute Master Program Scholarship.

I am Anupam Chatterjee, my NOHA application number is 347. I am writing to appeal to the reconsideration of my current scholarship status. This course and scholarship are very important to continue my education. I would sincerely like to explain the key reasons why I rightfully deserve this academic scholarship.

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In many parts of the world children are given more freedom that in the past . Is this a positive or negative development.

Children require parents nurturing and independence for their holistic development. In the current era, young people have more Liberty in every field of life in comparison to ancient times.However, I belive that, it is beneficial for the child and for this reason I will be elaborated the factors in the ensuring paragraphs.

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some perants buy their children a large number of toys to play with. what are the advantages and disadvantaged for the child of having a large number of toys

It is no surprise nowadays that, a lot of toys, ranging from simple dolls to complicated electronic gadgets like video games, are provided for some children by their parents. Although availability of numerous toys has some benefits, its drawbacks should not be avoided. The main merits and demerits of having several toys in childhood have been discussed further. On the one hand, one of the important advantages of children having lots of toys is that there are different games for them to play. They can choose one of their toys according to their mood and taste, and are less likely to become bored. Besides this, they would certainly be able to learn a wider variety of skills like problem solving or organization. Different toys can teach them different things as every toy has distinct function and significance, which means that the more toys they have, the more they are likely to learn. On the other hand, having a lot of different toys could possibly lead to child...

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Some people believe that newspaper is the best way to learn about news. However, others believe that a more effective way is through other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Newspaper is always one of the most popular media in our daily life. Some individuals hold the view that newspaper is the best way to know what has happened in the world, while those opponents consider other media as more effective ways. From my perspective, there are some other better ways to learn about news despite of newspaper.

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In many cities, there is little control on the design and construction of new houses. Some people think that people can choose to build houses in their own styles instead of building them with the same style as the old house style in local areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the government does not interfere too strictly in the design and construction of new houses, therefore many houses in some cities were built in their own styles. Although there could be some drawbacks over this issue, I believe the benefits of this trend overtake the drawbacks depends on the areas where buildings are constucted.

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Nowadays, young people admire sports stars though they often do not set a good example. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Although top sports athletes are often poor role models, they gain the admiration of billions of Youngsters. This is overall a negative trend for the young generation and society despite one single Benefit it may bring about. I think this trend could be profitable only if the young disregard the negative and focus on the Positive aspects of sports stars’ lives. Cristiano Ronaldo, a world-class central forward, for example, is Infamous for his extreme individualism, but is still a role model of diligence and determination for all The efforts he has exerted in football training. Many adolescents who are Ronaldo’s fans have Overlooked his undesirable personal traits and trained themselves hard to achieve extraordinary Results in their lives. In this way, the young may still benefit from the sports stars’ valuable life lessons. However, I contend that this is generally an adverse trend because with the majority of youngsters, it May lead to unpleasant consequences. This is bec...

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