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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people believe that part time job can be beneficial for better jobs in future. Others think it can easily distract students. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, part time jobs are more helpful for those students who are not from a well off family. Masses believe that, doing part time job will hinder the progress of the student but it is not, more over it will become an added advantage while searching for a full time job. I completely believe and agree with this and i will indicate my view with examples.

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Some people believe that part time job can be beneficial for better jobs in future. Others think it can easily distract students. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, part time jobs are more helpful for those students who are not from a well off family. The masses believe that, doing part time job will hinder the progress of the student, but it is not, moreover, it will become an added advantage while searching for a full time job. I completely believe and agree with this and i will indicate my view with examples.

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Some people think that economic progress is the main factor responsible for the overall development of a country.

Some experts believe that an overall development of a nation is dependent on numerous factors like technology, science, culture, economic well-being and agriculture, while some state that it's the financial prosperity, which determines whether a country is in a flourishing state or not. I agree with the former opinion, pros and cons shall be discussed further in the composition.

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These days, many children have difficulty paying attention and concentrating in their classes at school. What are the reasons for this? How can it be dealt with?

An increasing number of problems are nowadays going around related to the children education. One of the challenges that the world has been facing is the children are less focused on the subjects and activities while they are in classes at school. This essay will discuss the reasons for this trend and examine the potential ways to overcome this.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development.

Some people think that countries are becoming more and more similar because citizens can buy the same products from anywhere in the world. Whether this new trend is positive or negative for urban development is controversial. This will be discussed in detail in the following articles.

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The prison system has not been effective at reforming criminals. A large number of convicted felons return to committing crimes soon after being released. What are the problems with the prison system and what solution can you recommend to address this issue?

In recent years, the use of imprisonment as a response to crime and violence has risen steadily across the globe. More than 10 million people around the world are currently behind bars. As our social systems are being reshaped by Globalization, it is time to consider, whether our current approach to prison and punishment is keeping us safe. By this essay we can discuss some problems and can try to find out some solutions for the current prison system.

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Problem /Solution Stress-related illnesses are becoming increasingly common. -What do you think are the causes of this? - What solution can you suggest?

People are increasingly suffering from sickness as a result of stress. This essay will discuss the main causes of stress-related sickness including longer working hour and increased job pressure. This essay will also suggest solutions to these problems including improvement one’s work life balance diet.

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International travel sometimes makes people prejudiced rather than broad minded. What may be the reasons for this? What can people do to improve their understanding of the countries they visit?

The travel around the world is becoming increasingly popular in worldwide due to the enormous resources and options are available to travel between the countries within a short time period, which was not possible in the past when travelling was limited and restricted. It is widely believed that because of these kind of travel, people may become a narrow minded person or to be prejudiced. This essay will discuss the reason for this and examine the ways to enhance the people’s perception and understanding of the countries they travel.

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Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Most of the people prefer extremely hard and dangerous sports such as sky diving and skiing jump, because when they experience it, their feeling are dramatically higher than other things. Due to danger issues, some people say that those things should be banned. This essay will discuss that these things should completely exist for relaxation and leisure time.

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One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Modern advances in medical care have led to increasing the life span of human kind in general, in my opinion the merits outweigh the draw backs of this phenomenon.

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Some people think that paying taxes is their only duty, while others believe that we have more responsibilities towards our society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In this day and age, there are a variety of opinions on the significance of state duties and the role of every inhabitant in any country. It is believed that if they pay all necessary contributions, they will perform one’s obligation to state without any other additional responsibilities. Other people shared of the opinion that besides requiring taxes, dwellers should take care of their country executing more obligations for supporting national culture and improvement of state values. I am convinced that additional actives towards one's nation can receive beneficial results enabling to unite one’s country and solve important problem inside the state.

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These days, cell (mobile) phones and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Era of technology comes with overwhelming impacts among wide range of areas and social communication is one of these victims in which technological developments had structured problems specifically via cell phones and internet usage. In my perspective, technological leaps in particularly the ones linked with mobile phones and online world deranged the equilibrium of consequences in favour of disadvantageous side.

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International tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Several people believe that worldwide tourism has uncountable advantages to many communities where such has been established. In spite of the argument of negative implications of tourism on local dwellers, in my opinion, I believe that the merits far outweigh the drawbacks.

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In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work.Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as a valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinion on this?

These days, the industrial development has deeply changed the frame of work experiences. In particular, especially concerning in developing countries, the rate of younger that are forced to work, has risen.

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We live in a world of technology these days. While the internet brings with it clear advantages,the problems in terms of control and security of iinformation outweighs the advantages. To what extent do you agree?

This essay agrees that cybercrime is becoming a profound problem now with the easy availability of internet globally.

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In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Old-age is undoubtedly the most difficult phase of one's life and being able to live it peacefully should be everyone's right. It bring along a lot of challenges for a person, which are not limited to being able to move and take care of oneself but also has a financial aspect to it. They require nurses who can make sure they're taken care off with professionalism and affection.

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Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays supermarkets are replacing small, local businesses in most of the major cities of the world. Some people think that this will cause local communities to disappear; I totally agree with these people's view because of two reasons: emmigration and lack of communication.

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Some people say that industrial growth is necessary to solve poverty, but some other people argue that industrial growth is creating environmental problems and it should be stopped. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

In the developed and developing countries industry is the main key behind their success. Some people are speaking to solve the problems like poverty etc. For that industrial growth is necessary. In contrary, some people oppose that industrial growth is creating environmental problems such as pollution and all that. So, it should be stopped.

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Many university students live with their families, while others live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages both situations.

There is no iota of doubt that plethora of students is living far from their household because of not having universities in the same area while, many are still residing with their clan.This phenomenon is offering multifarious benefits to the students, however, sometimes a couple of problems emerge due to the same. The following paragraph would cast light on the pros and cons of staying far from family and living with family respectively.

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Demand for food is increasing worldwide. What is the cause of this? What measures can the international community take to meet this demand?

The population in world is sky rocketed day by day with the growing population there is increasing in the demand of foods and services. Increasing demand for foods will bring out various problems. Thus, international community should be aware about the situation and make sure to supply the foods meeting up with the demand.

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