IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1957

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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MANY WORKING PEOPLE GET LITTLE OR NO EXERCISE EITHER DURING THE WORKING DAY OR IN THEIR FREE TIME, AND HAVE HEALTH PROBLEMS AS A RESULT. WHY DO MANY WORKING PEOPLE NOT GET ENOUGH EXERCISE? WHAT CAN BE DONE ABOUT THIS PROBLEM?

Lack of adequate exercise is rampant among the working class, this has led to many ill health. This essay will discuss why many employees rarely exercise and how this problem can be resolve.

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Doctors in many countries believe that people are not getting enough exercise. What might be causing this lack of exercise? What cab be done to address the issue?

Health is wealth, so the saying goes. Although many believe that a regular workout is essential for a healthy life, the scenario seen now is opposite. Doctors across many countries have claimed that even though there is awareness about the importance of exercise among people, they have become less vigorous and active than before. This essay shall delve into various reasons behind this scenario along with remedial measures in the subsequent paragraphs.

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As public safety is of the highest importance, it is often necessary to test new products on animals. It is better for a few animals to suffer from for human life to be placed at risk by untested products. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The testing of new products on animals is controversial. Some people claim that in view of public safety, it is essential to test these new products on animals. These people also feel that instead of putting human life at risk, it is better for a few animals suffer by untested products. I completely agree with this statement.

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Some people think that it is a good idea to give children a small amount of money each week to spend on what they would like.other people think that this is wrong and that it is a waste of money.discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is often argued by some people that giving children a little amount of money on a weekly basis to purchase things of interest is a good trend while others opine that this trend leads to fund wastage.In my opinion, i strongly believe it is a waste of cost because this could lead to involvement in bad vices and inability to manage cost, probably in future.

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Some people feel that boarding schools are excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons.consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion.

A school is considered to be the best place for learning and development of both moral and intellectual core values. While some people think that students living in the school premises is the best option, others argue that reverse is the case. In my opinion, i agree with the latter because it promotes academic excellence and independency which could be beneficial in future.

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The length of working week does not reflect mordern lifestyle needs. It should be substantially reduced to give people more leisure time and time with their families. To what extent do you agree or disagree

These days, more and more people are engaged in different kinds of job inorder to make ends meet therefore little or no time is spent with loved ones. However, it is argued by some people that duration of the working week should be modified to provide leisure time for families and their relatives. In my opinion, i agree with this essay because family bonding will be established and its negative effect on health will be prevented.

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Extreme sports such as skydiving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

It is often argued by some people that certain extreme games, such as parachuting and skydiving are extremely life-threatening, hence should be prohibited. I totally disagree with this viewpoint. I believe that athleticism associated with skydiving can be used by the pilot, and soldiers during wars.

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Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Various organizations, strict their employees to follow the dress code, perhaps some focuses on the output results of their job.

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Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today, with a significant increase in the number of producers for various goods, not only do buyers have difficulty choosing favourable products but also competition between producers to persuade consumers has been become hard and serious. Therefore advertisements play a key role in today’s marketing and so some people believe that power of advertisements is the major incentive for the market growth of buying popular consumer products and necessary needs of buyers is not very important. I agree with this opinion to some extent but I think the main reason for these increase of sale is people’s necessity, not advertisements.

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The range of technology available to people is increasing the gap between the rich and the poor. Other think it has an opposite effect. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The difference in quality of life between groups of people in the society remains a highly controversial issue. While one thinks that a level of life has increased overall because of a technological revolution, other claims that also it's extremely beneficial for the richest groups. Personally I think that a techlonogical and scientific progress benefits educated people, no matter whether they are currentry rich. Overall, persons who are educated enough to understand the progress will move go the groups of rich.

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In some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion on this?

Providing safety of the nation is one of the most important parts for any government. Maintain law and order situation is always challenging for those who runs the country. In US administration, impose curfew on youngsters to travel without adults at night to make sure that their youth is safe. In this essay, we are going to discuss about the curfew being imposed in the US.

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Some people believe the internet is the most important invention in modern history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent times, the internet has been occupying an important part of our lives. Some people believe that it is the major discovery of our time, and I completely agree with that. Not only did it make everyday life easier but it also helped create new jobs.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Disscuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are certain people,who opine that parents should take responsibility for their children how to become able and active members of society.However,others strongly believe that school is more capable to teach to be a valuable member of any community.Henceforth,i will idealize the essay with two viewpoints as well as the opinion.

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Some people prefer to save money. Others prefer to use their money on things they will enjoy. What is the best approach towards money? Discuss both sides and give your opinion

in this contemporary era, there is no doubt to say that money is very essential thing for every individuals. however , whether there is some dispute for few people to use their money for enjoy purpose while other think that to save it. according to latest lifestyle ideal way for money

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Mothers play key roles in the upbringing of children. But in the recent times both parents are getting busy with professional life. Who is your opinion should take the responsibility of child care now? Give your opinion.

It goes without saying that kids are the future leader for every countries. We have to give concentration not only in the baby education, but also in their caring. Nowadays both father and mother are busy for earning money rather than taking care of their babies. I believe that every mother should take the responsibility of taking care of the kids at the early age no matter how busy she might be. In my following paragraph I will explain my point of views with some relevant examples prior to give a reasoned conclusion.

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In some countries men and women are having children at later age than in the past. What are reasons for this development? Do advantages of this development outweigh disadvantages?

It has been commonly debated that over the few decades in a number of parts of the world large number of couples decide to have their own babies after spending few years since their marriage. As far as I am concerned, this tendency brings about more advantages than disadvantages ones.

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Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?

As a result of the industrial revolution and increasing technology, the machines and robots became real and those have been dominating many part of our life. This change has several benefits but also, there are some serious disadvantages.

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It is better for people to be unemployed than being employed with a job they do not enjoy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often believed that being unemployed is better than doing a job which person does not enjoy. In my opinion, I think that instead of staying idle it is always better to do a job as it is also a source of income. This essay will explain the same.

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Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However, television cannot replace the book as a learning tool, which is why children are less well‐educated today. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Children used to read a lot, but the trend has changed, nowadays they are more fascinated with television. As we know Reading is a great tool to learn a language or gain knowledge but its less preferred in the modern world where television is prevalent and kids can see and feel the emotions which are being pictured. This essay will argue that Children are well-educated because they are watching television.

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Some people think that the Government should decide which subjects ,students should study at university while others think that students should be allowed to apply for the subject they prefer.Disscuss the two views and give your opinion.

It has become debetable issue that university courses should be selected by Government or direct by students.The purpose of this essay to discuss both aspects and self justification to reach on a conclusion.

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