IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 2136

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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IIt is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

How much freedom a child should have and what sort of measures should be taken to teach them the difference between the good things from the bad ones, is a matter of great debate. There are many who beleive that children should be taught the moral values at an early age, and punishment can help them learn it. I agree with this idea but physically punishemnt shousl be avoided.

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Many people believe that social networking sites (Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on individuals and society. To what extent do you agree.

While, some mankinds trust that cross media facebook, Instagram and other applications have had a vast adverse effects both humanity and local communities. However, it is beneficial for people as well as club but it damages the relationship.I would discuss both views in the up coming paragraphs.

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some people believe that children should not be given home work everyday, while others believe that they should get home work everyday in order to be successful at school. discuss both the opinions and give your view.

Now a days, assignments to children at home is the key topic that has to be discussed. An significant amount of people think that this has to be reduced gradually, while others opine this should not be abolished as this plays a crucial role in the development of child as a whole. I believe this has to be moderately given as children are too immature to balance their schedule in sport and academics.

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University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, it is common among university students to study abroad partially in their academic career. Although this trend of studying abroad might act as a gateway for other countries to import bright students with less investment, it is always helpful for the students to excel their capacity with the research facility accessible in other countries. In my opinion, studying abroad is far more advantageous considering the global impact that university students can obtain with their discoveries...

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Many people are choosing to find information on line rather than in books. Is this development positive or negative ?

Nowadays, internet has gain a lot of attention in terms of searching for information by most of them Instead of books. As there are plenty of resources to gain information through browser. However, online information sometime is not that legitimate. But, books are genuine. One must respect books, as author puts his whole life experience. I think it is a positive move but at the same time it completely depends upon the kind of information looking.

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Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?

These days, it is being typical to use vaccination not only for children who receives a multiple vaccines for different kind of disease usually before the turn 7 year old, but also, for adults who want to keep safe from the seasonal flu for example.

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Many people believe that social networking side like ( facebook ) have had a use negative impact on both individuals and society .to what extend do you agree?

In order to, some individuals think that utilize of social media such as facebook ,Instagram and twitter have a detrimental effect on humans and society .I agree with the statement .I would discuss about this in following paragraphs.

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t's generally believed that success in fields such as art and sport can only be achieved if a person has natural talent. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or artist. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

While some people believe that if they have natural talent in fields such as art and sport, they would be successful, others contend that people should teach some children to become a good sports person or artists. I agree with the view that when children can be taught, they would be a good sport athletes or artists.

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A country becomes more interesting and develops more quickly when its population includes a mixture of nationalities.

It is common belief that having a mixture of nationalities allows a country to develop more quickly and make it more interesting. In my perspective, I completely agree this view for many reasons.

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As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities, do you agree or disagree?

Businesses are now making the most property among all economic elements. With their huge financial resources, they are supposed to do public responsibilities. In my opinion, I totally agree with this point of view.

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Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. Reason for this? Some solutions.

Nowadays, juvenile delinquency seems to become the buzzword in this millennium, owning to the fact that children have been unintentionally imparted by both family and community in the unconscious way. In my own perspective, the corporation clung by both mentioned factors would be the best efficacy to alleviate this issue in various metropolises.

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Some people say that computer skills should be added to primary subjects in elementary school such as reading, writing and math. How far do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals say that the computer skills must taught as an important subject along with reading, writing and math. I completely agree with the statement that the younger generation should be trained on computers right from the early age, people now a days are considered to be as illiterate if they don’t have basic computing skills.

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Many people believe that playing video games is a waste of time and can even have a negative effect on the health of players. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

While, some people think playing video games is waste of time and it can adverse effect on the health of players.I am completely disagree with this statement. I will discuss their merits in the following paragraphs.

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Everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet because eating meat can cause serious health issues. Do you agree or disagree?

Meat has all the essential elements which are extremely beneficial for human beings. One of the most significant benefit of eating meat is that it is full of protein. Meats are specially preferred by body builders or people going to the gym.

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Should government make decisions about people's lifestyle, or should people make their own decisions?

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement? What other measures do you think might be effective?

How much more can the price of petrol be increased? It has been argued that in order to reduce the increasing traffic and irrversible dames to Earth that we are causing with pollution it is necessary to rise the price of petrol. In my opinion , there are other ways that can be intelligently implemented to reduce traffic pollution.

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Encouraging people to use public transport is the best way to solve traffic problems in cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

There are many cities around the world that have a population of more than 10 million, population is directly proportional to the traffic. Authorities everywhere are struggling to come up with the effective measures to counter the vehicular congestion. I partially agree with the statement, encouraging the people to use public transport could yield some results, but there are few other methods that could effectively ease the traffic on the roads.

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Nowadays more and more people have to compete with young people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause? What are some possible solutions?

With the advancement of education sector supply of labour to all industries has increased. Due to this fact, nowadays, youngsters come into the job market with plethora of knowledge on the job they are aiming to do. This has created a competition in the market with the existing employees. This essay will explore the problem of software developers in software idustries in relation to evolving technologies and suggest early retirement plan as a possible solution to overcome this problem.

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People sleep less than before in many countries. Why do people sleep less? What effect does it have on an individually and an society ?

Nowadays, there has been reduced in the sleep pattern among people, in many parts of the world. This trend of less sleep is due to the immense competition and pressure to reach a certain goal in life. To fulfill their desire, people get into rat race and work for long hours by compromising their sleep. It certainly damage once productivity and also it has a indirect negative impact on the society.

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Stress related illnesses are becoming increasingly common What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggests?

Nowadays, people are suffering from more illness related to stress. This essay will discuss the main causes including longer working hours and growing traffic congestion on the roads. This essay will also suggest solutions to these problems including proper time management and using public transport like metros and trains for commuting.

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