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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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HIGHER EDUCATION COULD BE FUNDED IN THREE WAYS. ALL COT PAID BY GOVERNMENT, ALL COST PAID BY STUDENTS OR STUDENTS PAYING ALL COST THROUGH A GOVERNMENT LOAN. WHAT ARE THE ADVANTAGES OF THESE CHOICES?

Three ways of funding superior education undoubtedly possess tangible benefits to both individuals and authorities to have to derive income. Either these necessary funds are merely offered by the government and students or through low-interest rates by the national banks. The key advantages of these possible ways need to be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.

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The world’s most urgent problem is caused by over-population. Do you agree or disagree?

There are many dicussions revolving to the issue of whether the primary cause of most global problems is overpopulation. While it is true that the growing in population is inevitable, I agre with the idea that overpopulation is the main factor for most of the world serious issues, including natural disasters and pollutions.

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New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is an undeniable fact that the way children spend their leisure time has been altered by the onset of the digital age. Although there are some benefits of this trend, I would argue that the disadvantages are more significant.

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In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?

The unemployed scholar’s rate is increasing in several countries due to the unavailability of job vacancies. I do believe that the government has an authority to tackle this problem with expanding the number and types of vacant job position.

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Nowadays we see an increase in social problems involving teenagers. Many people believe that it is because parents spend more time at work and less with their children. Do you agree or disagree?

These days, it is a hot potato that parents are getting more complain about their kids from schools, neighbourhood and relative that they are not acting well with others. A group of people thinking that guardians are the one who are mainly responsible for this cause because they are allocating more time to their work instead of looking after their children in the early age. I totally agree with this group of people and their suggestion.

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Men do most of the high level jobs.Should the government encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women ?Give your own opinion.

The number of men who are employed at the higher positions in companies is much higher than the number of women. Some people believe that government must secure certain positions for women in the companies. In my opinion, I totally agree with this statement that , the females should be allocated higher ranks.

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Most governments think that economic progress is the most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, in a rapidly growing era of modernization, monetary advancement is becoming increasingly significant. This essay discusses that financial progress alone is not sufficient and unless there is equal progress in other fields as well, the structure of society would crumble at even minor quakes. It states that though all other areas require finances to work and develop, it would only work if there is parallel progress in moral values that sustain the society and in literacy.

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Nowadays, most large companies operate multinationally. To what extent those companies should have responsibility towards local communities in which they operate?

In recent decades, there has been growing trend of offshore expansion by large companies, thanks to globalization. Although multinational corporations create jobs for local people, their responsibility towards local communities should be at the highest level.

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In many countries, government spent a large amount of money on improving internet access. Why is it happening and do you think it is the most appropriate use of government money?

Government spending on improving Internet access often constitutes a large chunk of national budget, causing some public controversy in recent years. Although some might oppose this idea due to its seemingly high costs, this is among most beneficial ways to spend government money.

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It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. Do you agree or disagree with this development?

In recent decades, there have been a growing trend towards traveling to remote natural areas for a variety of purposes. Although this trend might be of great concern to some environmental activists, scientists and thrill- seekers should still be encouraged to study and explore there.

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companies use a variety of methods to improve the sales of their products. what are these methods? which is the most effective method?

Organizations apply many different approaches to sell more goods. Using negative feedback from clients and having strict quality control are good examples. However, i believe the best one is advertising.

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In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government should have the responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In a lot of nations , offspring are becoming obese and delicate . some people believe that the authorities should have the duties about this reality . From my perspective , i completely disagree with this statement .

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Other, however believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

children become talent citizens for society are deemed different point of views. Personally, the educating for children always requires close combination of the school and family because children need to develop their personality comprehensively.

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What factors contribute to the success of a movie?

It is easy to assume that only a good story makes for a good movie. But that isn’t necessarily the case, in my opinion. A movies success is determined by various other factors ranging from direction, production, acting, editing, script, etc., factors which if left ignored, may affect how well the movie performs at the box office. The following paragraphs will highlight how each of these aspects has an impact on the success (or failure) of a movie.

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Every yeay several language die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages n the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

People have contrasting views about whether the world will be better if some language disappear following timeline or not. In my opinion, even though some mother tongues could not useful in many circumstances; However, I tend to disagree with the view above, we should save our language as much as possible.

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Medical professionals such as doctors and nurses from poorer countries often migrate to richer countries to world. What PROBLEMS ARISE FROM THIS SITUATION? What Measures can be taken to deal with it?

Migration for work is common amongst medical professionals. Doctors and nurses relocate from third world to first world countries to progress in their fields. This essay will discuss the problems associated with this trend, namely; the decrease in qualified doctors in their home countries, and the increase in competition for jobs in their destination country. In addition to this, possible solutions will be suggested ,such as, salary modification and introduction of government schemes to imp...

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Some people think that school uniforms are unnecessary and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The argument of whether or not wearing a school uniform is mandatory is often debated. While some hold the opinion that this old school thinking should be stopped, i agree to some extent that it should not be obligatory.

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Nowadays more and more young people hold the important positions in the government. Some people think that is a good thing while others argue that it is not suitable. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In some regions, a great number of youngers are elected for key roles in the government. While some people claim that is unfair compared to the olders; many others, myself included, believe it is beneficial for our society. However, I will take these two viewpoint into consideration when discussing them in this essay.

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With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Growing usage of virtual literature has led to a reduction in paper books. This essay will, firstly, outline the advantages of e-books, that they are more easily accessed and cheaper. Secondly, touch on the disadvantages, such as, the damaging effects they have on eyesight that can be easily tackled. I believe the positives effects exceed the negative effects.

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Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the society is increasingly developed and so are the technologies. It is argued that through these devices more and more citizens would opt for shopping online. From my perspective, although this trend has few drawbacks, its benefits are far more significant.

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