IELTS Writing Samples Band 6

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A section of society holds a belief that Physical training classes play a huge role in the curriculum, chiefly for the school students. On the contrary, children should spend more time on academic subjects. In my perspective, school need to balance every single class time according to the priority.
In recent years, the type of modern vehicles is expanded to make transportation easier. Therefore, some people believe that car is the best thing, which helps you to get somewhere in cities, while others have an idea that bicycle is better. This essay will discuss both statements and will provide my own view.
The electronic news and modern technology will totally replace conventional newspaper and magazines as the world has become modern these days and people tend to get attached by modern stuffs. I totally agree with these statement. Thus, I will explain some reasons.
Painstaking research has been conducted for opting for apt materials to teach offspring, as they are in their 'critical period', when learning and acquisition occur at an unbelievably fast pace. So much so that too many have posited removal of seemingly less important subjects, such as geology; too few, however, have born its lasting benefits. My idea is in line with the advocates of maintaining this course due to a number of compelling arguments.
To begin with, there are different reasons why communities in urban areas do not exercise enough. The first reason is that there are not many designated areas for exercising in cities. This is because nowadays cities are overcrowded and do not have enough land to accommodate the increasing population. For example, in 2008, the Sudanese government began to build new apartment blocks in public spaces that were earlier used as exercise areas. As a result, an individual now struggles to find a place where they can exercise.
The younger crowd all over the world should get better work and life experiences before they start their professional life. This essay will elaborate on the benefits both teenagers and the community get by engaging those in some community work in their leisure time without a salary.
It is having a well-paid job that is of paramount importance to job satisfaction. Although earning a good income is critical, I am of the view that job satisfaction is a paramount driving force.
In the last ten years, the number of children suffer from obesity in western countries has risen by almost 20%. Doing less exercise and eating much junk food are the main reasons for that. As a result, children’s health deteriorated, causing many health issues, and overweight children might be loss confidence as well.
The international travelling industry has brought considerable incomes to society and towns across the world. International tourists travel to many different lands and the local business relies on them to make profits for their living. These activities also stimulate the growth of the global economy and the land’s GDP.
Some people have a notion that museums should present the art which is popular across the globe,however some people prefer to think that museums should carry the heritage of their own country only. In this essay, I will put my thoughts supporting the latter view and the benefit it brings to society.
Having a healthy diet is essential for population’s physical condition, which is common sense for many people. However, whether authority or individuals should take responsibility is controversial.
Some people think that university should do same consideration for rural student to get an admission for a higher education. We are going to discuss here the government intervention are more important. I will give my opinion in the conclusion, now we are going to discuss and elaborate with a relevant example.
In today's, world the pollution is increasing rapidly and also the wastage dumped from the individual households has increased thrice the amount compared to last decade furthermore the usage of plastic has been rising daily due to these all factors people are facing problems and also the problems are increasing in this essay I'll be discussing some of the key problems caused by the increase of these and some steps to overcome it.
Same individual believe that young are not able to hold vital Responsibility, Owing to lack of experience. Others think that younger is good to manage positions. I think this a controversial subject which we will be discussed in the coming paragraph.
Nowadays,buildings in the cities are all looked like each other without reflecting the local culture all around the world.Some people argue that is detrimental to the culture of nations.From my perspective,it is beneficial to apply in society.This essay will show the reasons why this phenomenon would trigger and why it is a good thing.
Nowadays, education plays an indispensable role in everyone's life. It is argued that many individuals opt to learn practical subjects, so academic subjects will be excluded from tertiary education. I disagree with this statement and the reasons behind this will be explained in the subsequent paragraphs.
Paying salery from a company to workers by their positions can remember them to their value for company. Some argued that campany should provide high salaries to their high employees than normal employees. I believe that giving wage to worker according to their rank in a company is entirely justified, but we should be careful that it cannot create any contraposition.
News helps us to be updated about things happening around the world. However, some highlight that media companies prefer to show what is profitable to them, therefore news is just another way to kill our time unnecessarily and there is no direct relevance to people`s lives. In my perspective, I strongly agree with the statement and the reasons for this will be discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs.
Recently, the positive impact of marketing propaganda on promoting products has been widely acknowledged. There is a public consensus that commercials addressing young generations must be outlawed as they have hazardous effects on their health and pose a financial dilemma for families. I am in agreement with this notion. In the following lines, my contention will be further scrutinized.
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