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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7

IELTS Writing Samples Band 7

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Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree with these views?

Nowadays, there are a lot of advertisements on television and social media. Most of people believe in adverts, especially on social media such as Instagram. Also, in most countries advertisement agencies are using famous and popular persons to advertise goods, especially cosmetic or expensive brand clothes for young people. People are buying these goods, but it does not mean that these goods are necessary. In this essay I will write my view of advertising power and I will explain why I agree with the argument that people are buying goods which are not necessary or important to our daily life.
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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.

People tend to think differently on a single issue as some suggest, that increasing the number of number of gyms may play a crucial to solve health related crisis while others possess the opposite view that the concerned authorities should focus on several other issues in order to solve the aforementioned difficulty.
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Nowadays, many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for company or organization. discuss advantages and disadvantages

The trend of startup is very common in the modern world and more and more young entrepreneurs are getting gravitated towards it. This essay would delve in both benefits and drawbacks of such an ongoing movement.
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In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with otherold people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the famiy?

In Britain, old people often prefer to live in an old age home where they are assisted by nurses and have other old companions to spend time with, the Government has to pay for this quite often. In my opinion, I believe that the Government should bear all the expenses of the old age homes of its geriatric population.
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Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarket in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there is a rapid expansion of supermarket in some countries. Many people believed that due to the strong competition, local business would be closed that will impact negatively and might destroy the local communities. In my opinion, I totally agree with this view for two reasons below.
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Is it important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this option. What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children

Teaching young generations to distinct right and wrong things from an early age is extremely essential. Some people would suggest that punishing can be an effective solution to help learning the differences. This essay will agree with that option because kids are not fully aware of negative consequences of their actions. However, parents and teachers should not use physical punishment in many means in order to teach children.
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Level of youth crime is increasing rapidly in the most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this and suggest some solutions.

Most of the offences are committed by the youth. In fact, the ratio of the youngsters’ crime is dramatically surging at the world wide. When observed, there are many reasons for such rising. However, this issue can resolve by some appropriate steps. Both, the reasons as well as the steps are discussed in the ensuing paragraphs.
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Many criminals commit further crimes when they are released from prison, In your opinion, why do they do so?

Most offenders in the world today tend to commit a crime again after a break away from prison. There are many causes of this situation, however, steps can be taken to tackle this problem. In my opinion, many criminals commit crimes again because the punishment received is weak and lack of guidance from people around them.
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Some people say that E- books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree

It is a common belief by some that digital books and technology will totally overcome print media. I completely agree with the given statement as digital media is more effective. In my opinion, digital media save money, time and it is much faster than printed newspapers.
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Nowadays people get married and have kids in their thirties rather then when they are younger. Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit society?

In the contemporary era, people prefer to marry and have their offsprings when they are in their thirties as compared in the past where people preferred to marry at a young age. In my opinion, this trend is beneficial to a community in a positive way as a person has enough time to plan for its future.
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Not enough students around the world choose to study science subjects at university.What are the reasons for this?what impact does this have on society?

Science is an important field of study which furthers mankind's progress.However, Universities have experienced a decline in the number of students enrolled in science subjects.This essay will discuss why they prefer other courses and the effect it has on the world.
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Nowadays a large amount of advertising aimed at children should be banned because of the negative effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Commercial advertisement these days are believed by some to have negative influences on children, hence, be permanently removed.This essay will discuss why I fully support this view to ban these negative advertisements.
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Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?

With Veganism trend, many people are convincing themselves that plant-based foods can suffice when it comes to daily nutrient needs, so they tend to remove all traces of meat from their diets. However, I have to (politely) disagree with the anti-meat argument.
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Some people think that the government is wasting money on arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extend do you agree this view?

In the world of 21st century different types of arts like god's sculpture, old stone painting and many more, are taken care by the government and they are also spending lots of money on different arts also, but there are different groups of people who thinks that the government is wasting on arts, instead of they can spend money on something else. Let's discuss this.
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The number of children that read books for fun has dropped dramatically in recent years. What are the reasons for this? How can we encourage children to read more?

In today’s technologically advanced world, the number of children reading books as a hobby is decreasing drastically. Various reasons can be drawn from such a pattern. This essay will discuss those reasons as well as the measures that can be taken to encourage children to read more.
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Some people believe that song lyrics which glorify violence and criminal lifestyle should be banned. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of such a ban.

In today’s world, everybody has an opinion about everything. Some people think that song lyrics that elevate violence and criminal lifestyle should be banned while other’s think it should not be banned. This essay will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of such a ban.
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Some think Government spending on Infrastructure (Transport, Housing etc) is considered the most important for a nation. While others believe that Education, Health and HR values to be more important areas for government expenditure. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that the expenditure on developmental activities are more significant, while others feel that funds utilised on healthcare, education and people are more essential for a state. In my opinion, I believe that funds utilised on public welfare such as healthcare, education and people are more essential than the developmental activities. This essay will discuss both side's arguments, followed my opinion on public welfare.
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Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think that, learning about history can bring no benefits in our present or future life, but in my opinion past can help to build our future and can prevent to repeat the same mistakes again. I strongly agree that learning about the past has considerable value to shape our present and to construct our future.
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As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?

Nowadays, people are buying more cars as the country develops. Therefore, some people believe that it is a positive development, while others disagree. This essay will discuss both the arguments in detail and provide evidence as to why, this trend is disadvantageous.
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some people think that schools should teach students according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities study together. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Today, few schools have this tendency to educate pupils as per their intelligence levels, whereas some people are in the favour of educating pupils as per their intelligence levels and should also study separately, from like minded children. In this essay I intend to delve into both views. However, in my opinion former stance is warranted and merits serious consideration.
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