IELTS Writing Samples Band 7. Page 36

IELTS Writing Samples Band 7

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Some people choose to have their first child at an older age. What are the reasons? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays some couples are choosing to have their firstborn at an older age. Furthermore, this brings us to think of two significant reasons first one is a lack of financial commitment for the child and the second one is a lack of maturity in the relationship. This essay will illustrate the people who are choosing not to have their first child at a younger age.

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Some people like to own the place where they live, but other people like to rent where they live. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A number of individuals prefer to live on their own property.Whereas,others choose the rental place to live .According to me,own place of living has a number of benefits in the form of an independent living standard,no interference as well as a source of income while renting its separate basements to others.

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Many people around the world use social media every day to keep in touch with other people and get news events. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

With the advent of the internet and the rise of social media, the way we communicate and consume news has changed drastically. An increasing number of people now use social media to stay in touch with their loved ones and keep up with current events. While this shift offers some advantages, I believe that the downsides significantly outweigh the benefits.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is one idea about encouraging kids by holding competitions to provide this condition for them. Another thought is that teamwork or cooperation is much more useful for them rather than competing to become more useful adults. In my point of view, both ideas are correct and must complete each one but I think cooperating is more practical.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, our eating habits have changed significantly.In fact, because of Industrial Revolution, food has become more processed by adding sugar and saturated fats to almost anything we eat.As a result, more and more people are suffering from health problems since our DNA is not designed for this kind of diet.

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The amount of traffic in cities is growing. What are the causes and what measures can be taken to reduce it?

In this century of technology, there is a lot of transport on the street, which causes several problems in the city, like traffic jams. In turn, it causes numerous other issues, for instance, gas emissions and a slowdown in living standards. This problem should be solved with mutual work, by reducing moving on the streets.

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The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society? How can this problem be solved?

Nowadays, according to the improvement of science, numerous numbers of infectious diseases have decreased. Many other kinds of serious medical conditions, however, have increased because of obesity epidemic around the world. In the following paragraphs, some reasons for this growth will be discussed and a number of solutions will be given.

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Many museums charge for admission, while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Museums are a great source of knowledge in societies. Many museums charge a hefty amount as an entrance fee, however others do not. There are some individuals who argue that entry into these educational institutes should be free of cost to serve society better. I believe that charging a nominal amount as an entrance fee can be beneficial in many ways.

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Some people believe that professional, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training . Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both there views and give your own opinion

There are several options for building a career. While some argue that professionals should have the freedom to choose which country they want to work in, I side with those who feel that they must work where their training was held.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that competition at work, in education and in daily life is very important, while others think that we should try to cooperate with each other more. This essay will discuss both points of view and argue in favour of the latter.

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Write about the following topic: The internet has changed the way we communicate. Much communication today happens through social media. Some people support this and think it is a positive development. Others believe that social media have negative effects.  Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

As an internet-based way of communication, social media has become the dominant route of interpersonal interactions nowadays.

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in some areas of the US, a curefew is imposed, in which teenangers are not allowed to beo out doors after particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. what is your opinion about this?

It is a fact that in some areas of the United States, time regulations for children are placed, where teenagers can not go out of their homes without the presence of an adult. Although, there are some exemptions, I believe it is key to controlling violence and crimes.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines an ment? d treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a postive or a negative development?

In contemporary society, alternative medicine is gaining popularity and attracting more attention than conventional medical practices. This essay will explore both the positive and negative consequences associated with this trend before arriving at a conclusion.

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Nowadays people research their family history some people say this is useless and we should instead focus on present and future generations Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Sometimes in spite of having everything in life, a person starts feeling lonely in the world. Therefore, he evokes with stronger zeal to know about his family lineage. Because he feels that it can be beneficial for his inheritance. However, certain people and I argue that it is crucial to give more focus on the present and future because by living in the present one can create the desired future enabling inspiration to the world.

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Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?”

-Travelling was and still is a dream for the travel lover, traveling around the world and seeking new places is a great pleasure with high expense. Rich countries view the tourism issue as a thorny issue, as the economic return from tourism is equivalent to its harm. I referred here to rich countries only because the countries with limited economies have no choice but to grab foreign currency and manipulate their economic situation. Start with thinking as the rich countries, there are advantages and disadvantages for gaping tourists

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In many countries, international tourism has become an important source of income. However, it also has negative effects. Do the benefits of international tourism outweigh the disadvantages?

Tourism is one of the most impactful smokeless industries in the past century due to the amount of money it is able to generate. However, as many regions have started to experience the negative impacts, their benefits and drawbacks are being weighed against each other. From my perspective, tourism has done more harm than good for a number of areas and this essay will discuss the reasons for that.

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IT IS COMMONLY BELIEVE THAT NOWADAYS MAIN FACTOR THAT AFFECT A CHILD’S DEVELOPMENT ARE MEDIA,POP CULTURE AND FRIENDS.A DIFFERENT POINT OF VIEW IS THAT FAMILY PLAYS THE MOST SIGNIFICANT ROLE.DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION

In the current days, there are several majority factors which affect child- development namely, media, pop culture and friends, and family play an essential role in the growth of children . In the following essay, we will explore both viewpoints, and I will mention my perspective.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words.

The proposition that young people should be required to engage in full-time education until the age of 18 is a contentious issue that merits careful consideration. While there are undoubtedly benefits to extended compulsory education, I believe that a more nuanced approach, which allows for flexibility and recognizes individual differences, would be more beneficial for both society and young people themselves.

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Many families move to different countries. Some people think children can benefit from this, while other consider it is hard for children if families move to a foreign country. Discuss both views and you opinion

It is argued that moving to a foreign country would be beneficial for members of the family, including children. While others believe that it is difficult for kids to adapt to a new country. In this essay, I am going to examine both these points of view and in my opinion, moving to different countries is suitable for children's development.

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Nowadays more and more older people who are looking for work have to compete with younger people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause? What are some possible solutions?

In modern times, older people are increasingly competing with younger candidates for the same job positions. The main problem this causes is the unemployment of the older generation, and a possible solution could be the provision of intergenerational workplaces.

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