IELTS Writing Samples Band 7. Page 34

IELTS Writing Samples Band 7

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Improvement in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer countries. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Health, education and trade are crucial for a country's development. Some people argue that the governments of the richest countries should help to mitigate poorer nations' health, education and trade-related problems. In my opinion, I concur with this viewpoint because a country's development plays an important role in global economic balance and environmental issues reduction.

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People in the are not fit and active. What are the problems of this issue? What can be done to encourage people to participate in sports activities?

It is universally acknowledged that people nowadays are not fit and active. In my opinion, I believe that the situation stems from the busy city lives in modern societies.

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Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The impact of modern technology on social interactions is a topic of considerable debate. While some argue that technology fosters sociability by facilitating communication, others contend that it contributes to social isolation. This essay will explore both perspectives before offering my own view.

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More and more companies are willing to view graduates of online universities on an equal level as those who attended brick-and-mortar classrooms. Discuss the advantages of both styles of learning as it relates to the working world.

It is a contentious problem whether online studies should be seen as equal to stationary ones. It is interesting because there are plenty of enterprises that allow their employees to work fully from home. In this essay, I will elaborate on the pros and cons of both.

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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times in most people’s life others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

In this era, it is believed that childhood is the best year to bring happiness, while others assume that adulthood is the best time in human life. In this essay, both statements will be elucidated. I wholeheartedly agree with the latter argument.

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Some people believe that schools should reward those students who show excellent academic performance while some believe that only the ones who show significant improvement in the grades should be rewarded. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Recently there has been a heated debate about how institutions should recompense the alumni, some believe that only the best among them should be, while others think that the ones who have shown significant improvement when compared to the beginning of their studies should.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In the modern world, there are different views for individuals with health issues to get the best treatments. While patients attempt different medicines and therapies instead of visiting their regular doctor for different reasons such as to find the best approach and cheaper way, I believe that it can trigger a number of negative effects on health conditions.

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It is so difficult for little ordinary people can do to improve the environmental problems today. Therefore, the state leader and big companies should be taking charge of solving the amount of environment damage. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, it seems difficult for small people to solve environmental problems. Hence, big companies and leaders of a state should take part in solving the amount of environmental damage. In my opinion, I really agree with the latter statement because they need to be responsible for their actions and have the capital to solve these problems quickly compared to ordinary people.

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Nowadays, humans are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

In this contemporary era, the environment is suffering from human activities. In recent days, human production of waste has surged. This essay will discuss the causes of this issue such as purchasing unnecessary products and the business industry, and it will suggest solutions that can the government embark on.

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Today our communications, medicine and transport systems all depend on computer technology. Our reliance on computer technology in these fields has created a dangerous situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Alongside the development of technology, computer systems have become vital for multiple sectors such as communications, medicine and transport. In my opinion, every dependence comes attached to a proportional amount of vulnerability, and this one in particular is extremely dangerous because there are multiple reasons that might lead these systems to failure and the consequences can be terrifying.

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More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people Say that the price increase of fattening foods will solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is considered that many individuals are becoming overweight in a serious way. Although some people think that increasing the prices of fattening food can be a solution, I partly disagree with this statement as there are other possible solutions for this.

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Instead of requiring primary school students to do experiments themselves, schools should only allow them to watch experiments demonstrated by teachers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an opinion that asserts a lot on the issue of whether experiments should be done by students or teachers in primary schools.Some men and women would suggest that it is their students right to examine since it enhances children's comprehension in many sciences;however, my personal attitude toward this is that experimenting by students may cause many dangers that will harm them, instead ,teachers must do many examinations as they have more experience than students.I will present two principal reasons in the next paragraphs.

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The role of education is to prepare children for the modern world. Schools should cut art and music out of the curriculum so that children can focus on useful subjects such as information technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

In this contemporary era, the education system has undergone a major transformation by involvement of extracurricular subjects. A wide sector of individuals believes that art and music subjects should be excluded from the curriculum in order to concentrate on vital subjects. I totally agree with this argument to diminish the burdens and elevate grades.

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In some cities public parks and open space are being changed into gardens where local residents can grow their own fruits and vegetables. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, urban areas have witnessed a shift towards converting public parks and open spaces into community gardens where residents can grow fruits and vegetables. While there are some drawbacks to this approach, I believe the main benefits are more substantial and have a lasting impact on both individuals and communities.

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Air travel can only benefit the richest people in the world. The ordinary people can get no advantage with the development of air travel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that air travel can only have positive effects on the richest individuals in the world, however, ordinary residents do not have a chance to get the benefits of air travel. In my opinion, I disagree with this view, I will list the following reasons to support my thought.

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Some people think most crime is the result of circumstances e.g. poverty and other social problems. Others believe that most crime is caused by people who are bad by nature. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Currently, people are debating whether crimes are the result of circumstances or criminals' nature. In my view, both of them are partial, but I am inclined towards the former since it at least accounts for a part of crimes.

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In recent years more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. Do the advantages of ebooks outweigh their disadvantages?

In recent times, an increasing number of people tend to opt for reading e-books rather than printed ones. I believe the benefits of choosing e-books outweigh its drawbacks since an online version of books are more convenient and time-efficient.

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Many countries believe that international tourism has harmful effects. Why do they think so? What can be done to change their views?

Some countries argue that global tourism has been affected negatively. As far as I am concerned, there is one main reason why those people think this way, and there is also one solution to change their minds.

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Some people think young people are not suitable for important positions in the government while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on these positions.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is an ongoing debate about whether young people are suitable for significant positions in government. While some believe that older individuals are more equipped for these roles, others argue that young people bring unique benefits. In my opinion, it is a positive step to recruit younger generations to work in government positions.

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There have been many inventions in human history. Some people think the most important thing is the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this contemporary world, more and more important inventions are appearing. Some believe that among them the Internet is the most essential. I partially agree with this statement and in this essay, I will try to draw some conclusions.

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